Lightning Jutsu Concept

Name: Lightning Emperor
Rank: S
Type: Ninjutsu/KKG
Element: Lightning
Description: This jutsu is used similarly to Dameons already made 3 tier jutsu but instead of modifying ones strength and speed it modifies the lightning chakra within him. Modifying can be done one of several ways all of which end up in the same conclusion. Dameon can mix his spirit energy with chakra to do any three of the forms to be listed, using this method will completely destroy his clans ability to sense life energy by taking away all of it this method is riskier but will in turn grant one additional post to all forms. The second method is using pure chakra, which will last a normal length and if exceeded will end in death. The last method would be if Dameon were to be struck by natural lightning and seeing how this is next to impossible would never be used in actual combat basis. The forms are as follows:

Lightning Master: While in this form all of Dameon's natural lightning within his body is released and envelopes him in an auro of lightning. All lightning based jutsus when in this form do 25% more damage than usual but will cost 25% less than normal. Anyone within a range of 20ft will be struck with an arc of lightning capable of paralyzing for 1 post. This form makes the appearence of Dameon change by giving him yellow spikey hair and a heavy yellow auro filled with lightning sparks. This form will last 5 posts under chakra enduced and 6 if mixed with spirit/life energy. Any longer than this and Dameon will literally explode into a large explosion of lightnign energy that completely vaporizes himself.

Lightning Emperor: While in this form all of Dameon's natural lightning within his body is released and envelopes him in an auro of lightning. All lightning based jutsus when in this form do 50% more damage than usual but will cost 50% less than normal. Anyone within a range of 30ft will be struck with an arc of lightning capable of paralyzing for 2 posts. This form makes the appearence of Dameon change by giving him yellow spikey hair and a heavy yellow auro filled with lightning sparks. This form will last 3 posts under chakra enduced and 4 if mixed with spirit/life energy. Any longer than this and Dameon will literally explode into a large explosion of lightnign energy that completely vaporizes himself.

Lightning God: While in this form all of Dameon's natural lightning within his body is released and envelopes him in an auro of lightning. All lightning based jutsus when in this form do 75% more damage than usual but will cost 75% less than normal. Anyone within a range of 50ft will be struck with an arc of lightning capable of paralyzing for 3 posts or if already weakened stopping the heart. This form makes the appearence of Dameon change by giving him yellow spikey hair and a heavy yellow auro filled with lightning sparks. This form will last 2 posts under chakra enduced and 3 if mixed with spirit/life energy. Any longer than this and Dameon will literally explode into a large explosion of lightnign energy that completely vaporizes himself.

Note: This is a concept and I would love opinions to edit this not necesarily criticism as it is pretty open to Moderation for helpful suggestions. It was an idea running in my head and I didnt want to forget it so I typed it up. Also note that when I say loses his spirit sensing I do mean permanentely and he loses his spirit energy all together meaning that method can be used only once.

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Dameon can mix his spirit energy with chakra to do any three of the forms to be listed, using this method will completely destroy his clans ability to sense life energy by taking away all of it this method is riskier but will in turn grant one additional post to all forms.

I think there needs to be more elaboration on how the actual technique works, not how it can be done, if you know what i mean? You say mixing spirit energy with the natural lightning in your body. That is fine, but how does it grant you all of this.

And the three tiers seems completely OP to me. You would only be granted one tier, and the power would be somewhere between either Lightning Master or Emperior. Lightning God is completely ridiculous lol, its crazy OP. ^^