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PostSubject: Kutosei Hyumei/New Character (WIP)   Kutosei Hyumei/New Character (WIP) EmptyFri Apr 10, 2009 12:42 am

Name: Kutosei Hyumei
Age: 16

Gender:Male

Village:Village Hidden in the Sand

Rank: Chuunin

Physical Appearance:Kutosei Hyumei/New Character (WIP) 091Kutosei has short grey hair.Often wears the normal clothing for leaf shinobis. But he most commonly wear a green shirt under his black and green short sleeve jacket. The jacket has a pattern of colors of green and black,the outlines are dark and the hoddiy he wear is notrmally white with black stripes.He also weak like a swordsman full set of clothes.He always tend to have a stick on his mouth chewing it.

Personality: Kutosei always act the same. He always tend to act laid back and smart. He doesn't like to get in trouble or anything in the related section. His smartness allow him to be focused at all time and anywhere. Just like his father he tends to walk around the village to watch for it,he is mostly like a guardian of the village that always stay alert at any moment. In fighting he doesn't not laugh or play around he always like to get to the point and finish the battle as soon as he can,so later on he don't regret having the opponent alive. At his house he seems to have a pretty strict personality but he have never disobeyed his parents.

Element: Earth, Sub: Fire

Weapon of Choice: Twin Extendible Sword

Fighting Type:Nin-jutsu,Sub: Tai-jutsu

Background:
Academy Arc: Kutosei never went to the academy in fact he trained with his parents who are the village elders. The Kazekage only allowed the elders to do this because he had a strong bond long ago with his parents. He was only trained by his parents and hasd obtain what every shinobi had and even more.

Genin Arc: As a genin, The elders of the village,his parent had full hopes of him becoming the Kazkage once later on. Kutosei's skills were almost as superior than those of a genin. By this time of his life he was a genin and fully working to do missions with his team. Till one time he was sent in a mission with his team to the land of waves and one of them died because of him. Kutosei never forgive himself for letting his team mate save him like that so,he decided to help all the persons that need help even if they had a dark side on them,he always though that dark could be overcome with light and kindness. He worked hard and helped those in the village and those who wasn't in the village. He was later known as Kaindohiatto meaning Kind Heart. His earth and fire skills were already superior to those of a genin. The fire element was pretty rare in the wind country but his father came from the leaf so he learned it from him before he past away from a heart disease. His mother is still alive and still is the elder of the village. Being her son Kutosei knows everything about the village's past and the present. From the smallest stories to war.

Chuunin Arc: In the Chuunin exams the great war occured in the wind country against the Leaf. The war seemed to never end and almost every shinnobi were killed all at once. The fight seemed equally strong. Most Genins didn't fought for they were only kids and they were just gonna be killed at once. In other hands Kutosei's mother fought along side with her son, Kutosei didn't feared war but unlike others it fascinated him inside. He only became a chuunin through this war,he survived and so did his mom. He proved loyal to this village and also proved his strenght to those who also survived. Surely after he was a Jounin. Right along with all the others,they all gathered and made a meeting and they all aggreed that Kutosei was an unique and fine shinobi but he had to have more experience in the world and learn more stuff about himself. After that meeting an ambush happened eventhough the village was not fully recovered because the unending war the kazekage was killed unexpectedly. Later after a new kazekage was chosen. Kutosei was dissapointed for all he had done and he wasn't given the rank of it and stayed as a chuunin.

Rp Sample:
Kutosei had finally found the right job to do over the days he's off,he found out a boy an old man who was training anyone the basics of Taijutsu.So Kutosei took his time,even though he was really excited about this,the place took over at the village's outer most houses. For Kutosei it seemed preety suspicious but the sign had in the paper that it would be a private training session.So it made sense to Kutosei.Kutosei got on the trees and just let the breeze carry him as he turned to the right angle of the place and ran through out the forest.In a few minutes he reached his destination,he stopped and turn to the dojo,and just let himself dropped into the ground."Well here it is,I hope this is a good help for my training." Kutosei said as he walked towards the door and knocked.The door slowly opened and shrieked."Hhhuuuh?." Kutosei questioned himself as he walked in to the dojo.Suddenly shurikens just appeared coming towards him with metal cords and tied up his legs.As a man just appeared. "Sigh, I never thought someone could come here, it took me a minute to make that sign,though i had to wait abit longer for someone to come, now all i need is take your identity,take this,I'll knock you out first." The man said as he swung a punch at Kutosei. "I don't think you should attack your opponent without knowing what he can do." Kutosei said as he made handsigns and the wood of the dojo just lift. Unexpectedly the man started inhaling the air of the outside. "What, I don't understand,only the first Kazakage can do this." The man said as he tried to crawling on the floor.'Preety much nothing,just my special ability." Kutosei said as he turned back on the man and let the woods fall on him.

Clan Name: Death Eaters/Brinkers of Death

Kekkei Genkai:Death Eaters or Brinkers of Death are members who just eat people's blood to gain chakra and become more powerful. The user then drinks the blood and his chakra,energy and power will instantly increase.Like all the member of this same species they tend to have more learning abilities. They also have a good sense of smell to blood,their sense of smell is so good that they can smell blood that is inside people's body not even out side.Another part of their kekkai genkai is that they tend to regenerate lost limbs in a certain time. It takes more time to grow a leg or hand than just a little hole in your hand or to regenerate the palm of a hand.They also tend to have 50% more chakra then any human.

History: This clan originated in the deep and dark caverns of the sand village. For centuries they lived there without no food or seeing light. There were hundreds in these cavers through the whole village. They all fought each other to have food for their families,and those who didn't cared ate their owns.They all did not came out until the battle of Konoha gainst the Sand,big holes appeared as the light shunned in the creatures faces. They all came out and annihalated everyone who stood before them. They were creatures but they had a some kind of mythological advanced way of fighting. Although they only did Ninjutsu and Taijutsu they all soon adapted to learn other different kinds of fighting styles. Kutosei was one of them and was born about 17 years later after the incident. Only two other persons remained alive and stayed in the village as citizens and those were the strongest among the whole group. Eva and Kyo mother and father of Kutoseiremained alive in the village and became of great use for the village and Eva gave birth to the new and perfect shinobi Kutosei.They adaoted to the new life in the outside but they still have the instincts of one. They often need blood and chakra to remain themselves strong eventhough they don't age when they reach the age of 56.They tend to not waste that much chakra eventhough that have a 50% more chakra than the usuall normal human.
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PostSubject: Re: Kutosei Hyumei/New Character (WIP)   Kutosei Hyumei/New Character (WIP) EmptySat Apr 11, 2009 1:19 am

Before anyone can even try to approve you, you need to provide a rp sample.
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PostSubject: Re: Kutosei Hyumei/New Character (WIP)   Kutosei Hyumei/New Character (WIP) EmptyMon Apr 13, 2009 11:36 pm

Yes i know that,im not finished. scratch
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PostSubject: Re: Kutosei Hyumei/New Character (WIP)   Kutosei Hyumei/New Character (WIP) EmptyFri Apr 17, 2009 12:22 am

Basic Jutsus
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C-rank
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B-rank Jutsus
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PostSubject: Re: Kutosei Hyumei/New Character (WIP)   Kutosei Hyumei/New Character (WIP) EmptySun Apr 19, 2009 7:23 am

Jounin is closed
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PostSubject: Re: Kutosei Hyumei/New Character (WIP)   Kutosei Hyumei/New Character (WIP) EmptyMon Apr 20, 2009 3:37 am

I think i'm done with my character now. Also can someone check my clan application is also done.
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PostSubject: Re: Kutosei Hyumei/New Character (WIP)   Kutosei Hyumei/New Character (WIP) EmptyMon Apr 20, 2009 3:46 am

Chunnin is also locked.
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PostSubject: Re: Kutosei Hyumei/New Character (WIP)   Kutosei Hyumei/New Character (WIP) EmptyMon Apr 20, 2009 3:57 am

But it says that only one chuunin is acceptable.
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PostSubject: Re: Kutosei Hyumei/New Character (WIP)   Kutosei Hyumei/New Character (WIP) EmptyTue Apr 21, 2009 4:26 am

Sorry only genin are being accepted in the sand village for now
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PostSubject: Re: Kutosei Hyumei/New Character (WIP)   Kutosei Hyumei/New Character (WIP) EmptyTue Apr 21, 2009 6:23 am

Man can't we hustle some drugs or something xp,no kidding man, can ya please give me this rank.?
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PostSubject: Re: Kutosei Hyumei/New Character (WIP)   Kutosei Hyumei/New Character (WIP) EmptyTue Apr 21, 2009 11:46 pm

I have permission to be a chuunin now. Words from Adam.

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Adam Tue Apr 21, 2009 11:07 am

yes, that will need updated, Chuunin is closed, but one is innactive to ill allow you to be Chuunin, tell them you have gotten m,y permission.
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PostSubject: Re: Kutosei Hyumei/New Character (WIP)   Kutosei Hyumei/New Character (WIP) EmptyWed Apr 22, 2009 8:54 am

HOKAY! Now that the whole rank thing is cleared up, lets check this app shale we!?

In the Clan history it says something about they have about 50% more chakra then normal humans? Remove that, if it wasn't in the description of the clan KKG then it shouldn't appear in the history either.

Ruling on the whole 'soul eating' aspect is also subject to change... so be aware of that.

TO THE JUTSU!

HeatWave: An inescapable 'C' ranked fire tech... Well considering heat 'waves, or at least the ones your refering to, travel in seeminly straight lines, one could just put something in between themselves and you and presto, consider it defended against...
It may only last for '5 seconds', but a move like this, there needs to be a stated 'area of effect', like a certain radius from yourself that the heatwaves can travel.
Also... seeing as though fire is weak against water, it wont be able to simple 'evaorate' a water element defense alone at 'C' rank...

Chakra Strike: 200% more is a bit much for a 'C' rank technique. ALso it says something about 'Kai' or some other character... please remove that

Chakra Speed: 150% is alot too... considering in real life I run a 10.7 100meter dash... at 150% of that, im running a 100meters in 5.35 seconds... not to mention speed of shinobi is increased anyway. Just like the Chakra strike, it needs to be trimmed for 'C' rank, and thus so does the relaition between them.

Chakra Wire: a five milimeter string? thats about half the size of a finger nail...

Earth Wall: Mind, 2-3 normal attacks... jutsu of the same rank or better, especially of the lightning element, should be able to tople a 'C' ranked wall with ease.

Statactite: Remove the "More with Chunnin" comment and it's fine.

Mud Wolves: Keep it 'C' rank only... and 3 wolves maximum.

Rasengan and it's variants are off limits... sorry.

Honoo: No wall, especially made out of something that isn't solid like fire, can be 'impenetrable'. Please fix that.
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PostSubject: Re: Kutosei Hyumei/New Character (WIP)   Kutosei Hyumei/New Character (WIP) EmptyWed Apr 22, 2009 9:21 pm

Done, also I ve seen Robin with rasengan,so how come? Mines is different than a normal rasengan.
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PostSubject: Re: Kutosei Hyumei/New Character (WIP)   Kutosei Hyumei/New Character (WIP) EmptyWed Apr 22, 2009 9:59 pm

Rasengan and all it's variants aren't aloud, period. Robin might be a special case, but in any situatoin, when it comes down to your app, what has been approved for him is completely independent to your app.

Heatwave - Still needs a stated approximate range/radius of effect, and what happens when the opponent is hit with such a wave?
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PostSubject: Re: Kutosei Hyumei/New Character (WIP)   Kutosei Hyumei/New Character (WIP) EmptyWed Apr 22, 2009 10:35 pm

Okay done,also i changed the soul eater part into another thing.
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PostSubject: Re: Kutosei Hyumei/New Character (WIP)   Kutosei Hyumei/New Character (WIP) EmptyWed Apr 22, 2009 10:51 pm

Please remove chakra sphere. I assume its the replacement for the 'rasengan'.
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PostSubject: Re: Kutosei Hyumei/New Character (WIP)   Kutosei Hyumei/New Character (WIP) EmptyWed Apr 22, 2009 11:01 pm

well yeah but as you can see i changed the name and the description so its nothing like it. It not that destructive as the rasengan,and is only made of fire.
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PostSubject: Re: Kutosei Hyumei/New Character (WIP)   Kutosei Hyumei/New Character (WIP) EmptyThu Apr 23, 2009 12:59 am

Just a fireball you run into things... the application is the same as the rasengan, but okay...

Consider it approved. congratz.
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PostSubject: Re: Kutosei Hyumei/New Character (WIP)   Kutosei Hyumei/New Character (WIP) EmptyMon Apr 27, 2009 1:10 am

Name: Twin Extendible Swords

Appearance:
Sand Sword-->http://www.3dactionplanet.com/poplegacy/POPWWWeapons/Sword3.jpg
Water Sword-->http://www.3dactionplanet.com/poplegacy/POPWWWeapons/Sword7.jpg

Special Abilities:Both of these swords are able to extend for about 15 feets of lentht. It is basically to attack the opponent and to drag them to you to a closer range for an attack.The sand sword is able to manipulate sand to a certain range. If too far the sand will deactivate and will stop working. The water which is his mom's elemnt is able to maipulate water and like the other sword the water can be manipulated only for a certain range from the user.(About 5-7 fts.) The swords only works on the hand of Kutosei. Both sowrds have a kind of magnetic force that pulls the elemnt and the user with great Kenjutsu skills will be able to controll it. Basically the sand sword have a well balance magnetic pull that attracts the minerals in the sand. (Crystals,any mineral on the area will be controlled.)As well with the water sword,the water sword have a some kind of ability that consists on a well balance gravity pull that pulls the water onto whatever direction is controlled by the user.Like all members of this clan,they tend to hame 25% more chakra than normal humans.So when used,these swords take about the same chakra as a normal jutsus. All movements with the swords will be considered as B-or lower ranks attacks. Unless the ninja is stronger than what he used to be can do more giher ranking attacks.
Drawback:After using the sword for one post the swords have to be unused for another 1 post so they recover their strenght back.

Origin: Both of the swords are given to every member of the clan. They was made by Kutosei's father and the second one was made by his mom. Both have different abilities since they are made from different persons as a gift to Kutosei.
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