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| General InformationName: Ragnarok of the Marin Clan (no one in clan uses last name i will explain in clan history) Nickname/Alias: The Menace of Marin, Imperius Rex Age: 19 Gender: Male Looks: Ragnarok has a very evil look about him mostly in his eyes. He has blond hair that sticks up in a V-shape. His eyes are light brown and and dark gold. He is a bit on the short side at about 5'10 and weighs about 115lbs, and has a well built physique. He has tattoo on his right arm of a YingYang symbol. He has a very fierce look in his eyes whether he is angry or calm making it hard to read his face. He has no piercings nor any noticeable scars. He wears a long black jacket and black pants when it is cold outside, or he coordinates with a white sleeveless shirt and black pants. He wears glasses not because he needs them but he thinks they look good on him. He has black shoes and several scrolls on him at all times. All his clothing is fireproof so when he uses his jutsu they dont catch on fire. He will sometimes depending on his mood(angry) wear no shirt at all, this doesnt happen often but when it does it is well known that he is in a foul mood. Personality: Ragnarok is bipolar and he is very easily angered, i will explain his nature when he is calm and when he is angered in two separate paragraphs. Calm: Ragnarok is serious thinker, he speaks when he has something on his mind and doesnt start trouble. He isnt a jokester but doesnt mind having a good time. He enjoys the company of his friends (if he has any) and always looks after them as good friends should in his mind. He loves adventure and enjoys the peaceful life. Due to his nature however people rarely see this side of him because he is always angry with how they react to him. This is actually his secondary personality due to him being angry all the time.  Angered: This is Ragnarok's dominant trait and prefers to be refered to as Ragna. He is a conflict starter and loves to kill maliciously without a second thought. He dislike when people look at him with disgust and will often attack thinking it was provoked. He laughs at others pain and even his own. like his counterpart he loves a challenge and adventure, being in one place for to long makes him very irritable. He speaks in harsh tones and uses vulgar language to everyone and doesnt care who it upsets. Although highly temperamental he is in no way a fool he knows when he needs help and when to give it so long as it serves his purpose. This trait is something both have in common. He does have soem control over his actions he just sometimes chooses the most agressive manner if he knows its to his benefit.  Personality Trait's: Ragnaroks most dominant trait is his the way he refers to himself, he acts as if he is The ruler of the world and will often act as such. Catch Phrase: " Imperius Rex" Clan InformationClan Name: Marin Clan Kekkei Genkai: The clan has no physical attributes that can help others identify them. The clan itself has a inbreed connection with any from thier village that lets them know if another person is from thier clan. The main attribute of this clan is a talent they call Duo. This allows them to use to have 2 affinities, fire and the earth. Duos also allows the clan members to use two jutsu simultaneously. A clan member is able to combine thier affinity to make magma there for giving them three affinity. His chakra pool combined the 2 affinity (fire and earth) before it leaves thier body and makes it possible to use magma jutsu. Clan Symbol:  Clan History: The history of the clan is very murky seeing how Ragnarok destroyed the entire village and leveled the remains to nothing but ruins. So the history is little known to any at all but for the sake of OOC telling i will tell as if he hadnt. The clan was a newly formed clan that branched off from many other outside clans, it was made up of misfits and outcast in the beginning. The man who started was named Famine Uchiha a master of the earth style jutsu arts. He organized the people and formed the Nastil army whose whole purpose was to conquer the land and make the 5 Countries pay for how they cast them out. He later married a leader of another anti 5 country organization, a woman named Mayl. She was a master of the earth style ninjutsu. They combined thier forces and formed the Marin clan who soul purpose was to exterminate the 5 countries. Needless to say with so many strong powers coming together this brought the attention of the 5 countries and a Kage meeting was held to solve this issue. After a day of deliberation they decided to wipe this would-be clan from the face of the earth giving birth to what was known as the War of Fiends. This war is known to very few and those who do know are sworn to silence or are the Kage of one of the 5 nations. The battle raged for only a year before Famine was killed in battle. Not long after Mayl was captured and tortured to death due to her not cooperating with giving information about her clan. With the death of its leaders they fear all was lost until they found a heir was born them a son of Famine and Mayl, he would bring thier country to power and help takeover the world. This boy was named Ragnarok and with the help of the strongest in the village was trained to be a shinobi. During this time the clan disappeared from the land or so the nations thought figuring they scattered, or killed eachother off. The clan was dwindling after many years of hiding many of the older ninja left to pursue there own interests thinking Ragnarok was not fit to take the role of his father and mother. People feared Ragnarok as well for he had skill none had seen before being able to make magma an affinity none could understand. Then on Ragnarok's 18 birthday thier fears were realized. His temper often worried them and now he was upset beyond belief (his personal history will explain this if you wanna know what made him angry). He single handily killed the entire Marin clan burying it in magma erasing all traces of the clans existence. All those who lived ran away and spread word to the horrors of what happen, how this demon spawn had killed everyone without a slight bit of sorrow in his eyes, but happiness. With that the clan was gone only whispers of its past remained. Rank Information:Rank: Jounin Village: Suna Skill InformationSkill Specialty:Main:Ninjutsu Sub:Fuuninjutsu Elemental Affinity:Main: Fire Sub:Earth *Due to KKG he is able to combine the two and make magma* Special Characteristics: -He is able to combine his two affinity and form magma jutsu -He is able to control his chakra so that he never uses more chakra than needed (therefore making sure he doesnt over exert the amount needed for a jutsu. it helps to maintain his how much each jutsu will be taking away from his chakra) -He can also weave two separate jutsu simultaneously so long as it is not magma jutsu -He has 20% more chakra than normal for his level (due to his practice using two jutsu he practiced having a side supply of chakra in his body that will be used before his primary supply is used)
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| Academy Jutsu- Spoiler:
Basic Ninjutsu
Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This jutsu lets the user quickly switch places with another nearby object, such as a plant (normally a section of a log), an animal, or even another person within reach, leaving the opponent open to a counter-attack. Explosive tags can be attached to the replacement for an added surprise. Fundamentally, all ninja know this technique.
Name: Henge no Jutsu
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This jutsu allows the user to assume the appearance of another person, animal, or object. This is one of the basic jutsu taught at the Konoha Ninja Academy. Fundamentally, all ninja know this jutsu. The transformation jutsu is considered to be among the more difficult E-ranked techniques, since it requires constant emission of chakra while mentally maintaining the form. On top of that, the user would be, most likely, interacting with the environment. This puts much mental strain on the inexperienced ninja.
Name: Bunshin no Jutsu
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This technique creates intangible copies of the user. The clones are simply illusions and will dissipate when they come into contact with something. The illusions can be seen through by the Byakugan and the Sharingan. A person with normal eyes can also distinguish the clones from the original, since the clones will not disrupt the area around themselves with their movement (won't kick up dust, crush grass, etc.).
Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: A basic jutsu taught at the Konoha Ninja Academy, this jutsu allows a ninja to free themselves if they have been tied up.
Name: Genjutsu Kai
Rank: E-S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Kai is a Ninjutsu technique which allows the ninja to avoid the effects of a Genjutsu illusion. After forming the needed handseals, the Genjutsu technique will not affect the ninja. The ninja can also use the technique on another individual who was unable to avoid the attack. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja touches the one affected to end the affect of the spell.
Name: Shunshin no Jutsu
Rank: D-S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This jutsu is a high-speed movement technique, allowing a ninja to move short to long distances at an almost untraceable speed. To an observer, it appears as if the user has teleported. A puff of smoke is occasionally used to disguise the user's movements. It is accomplished by using chakra to temporarily boost the user's reflexes. The amount of chakra required depends on the overall distance between the user and their intended destination.
Earth (some jutsu was used from ingoo open canon list therefor not all are original) - Spoiler:
Name: Dochuu Senkou - Underground Submarine Voyage
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Doton
Description: Doton • Dochuu Senkou is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. After forming the needed hand seals, a ninja can sink below ground and quickly travel through the earth, extending a weapon or hand above the earth to appear as a shark or submarine fin.
Name: Retsudo Tenshou - Revolving Split Earth Palm
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Doton
Description: Doton • Retsudo Tenshou is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. This technique allows the ninja to control nearby stone and rock. When the ninja forms the needed handseals and slams their palm to the ground, surrounding rock will begin to churn and twist up crushing all those trapped within it.
Name: Moguragakure no Jutsu - Mole Hiding Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Doton
Description: Doton • Moguragakure no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. This technique allows the ninja to burrow into the ground and hide out of sight. This allows them to avoid attack or travel underground.
Name: Doro Gaeshi - Mud Overturn
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Doton
Description: Doton • Doro Gaeshi is a defensive Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. After striking the ground with their hands, a large wall of earth will rise into place as defense. The defense is not perfect though, a hard or drilling impact can puncture the wall.
Name: Domu - Earth Spear
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Doton
Description: Doton • Domu is a Ninjutsu technique utilized by a ninja. After forming the needed Snake handseal, a ninja will harden his/her body using the Earth Element. This provides greater defense against attack and will also strengthen his/her arm to increase his striking ability. Like other Doton based jutsu, it is weak against Raiton attacks.
Name: Doryuu Katsu - Earth Style Split
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Doton
Description: Doton • Doryuu Katsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. The ninja will do the necessary hand seals, then place their hand to the ground. This will cause the earth to rise up and split apart. Once the ninja removes their hand from the ground, the earth parting will end.
Name: Iwa Yado Kuzushi - Stone Lodging Destruction
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Doton
Description: Doton • Iwa Yado Kuzushi is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. This technique allows the ninja to control nearby stone and rock. This can be especially useful if in a cave or a stone lodging. The technique can loosen the rocks and cause them to come raining down on whoever is trapped inside.
Name: Doryou Dango - Mausoleum Earth Dumpling
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Doton
Description: Doton • Doryou Dango is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. After striking the ground with his hands, a ninja is able to overturn the earth into a large dumpling shape chunk of earth the size of a mausoleum. Using his chakra, he can lift up the ball and hurl it at his opponent, flatening all in its path. This jutsu requires immense strength.
Name: Doryuu Jouheki - Earth Style Rampart
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Doton
Description: Doton • Doryuu Jouheki is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. The ninja will do the necessary hand seals. Then a large earthen wall will erupt from the ground.
Name: Doryuu Heki - Earth Style Wall
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Doton
Description: Doton • Doryuu Heki is a defensive Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. The ninja will do the necessary hand seals and then spew a line of mud onto the ground. The mud will then grow into a large mud wall to help defend against incoming attack.
Name: Doton Kekkai • Dorou Doumu - Earth Barrier • Earth Dome Prison
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Doton
Description: Doton Kekkai • Dorou Doumu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. After striking the ground with his hands, a ninja is able to overturn the earth and cause it to rise up around his opponents. Placing his/her hands against the dome he/she is able to suck out the chakra from the people trapped inside and bring it into his own body. At the same time the user will use his own chakra to spread throughout the dome, this allows him to repair any damage his opponents manage to inflict on the inside. The chakra is not evenly spread out though, as the chakra flows away from the user, it becomes more and more weak allowing the dome to be broken on the far side if hit by a hard enough force.
Name: Doryuudan - Earth Dragon Projectile
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Doton
Description: Doton • Doryuudan is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. The ninja will do the necessary hand seals and create a dragon from the river of mud made after using the Doryuu Taiga technique. This dragon will then spew mud projectiles from its mouth.
Name: Doryuu Taiga - Earth Flow River
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Doton
Description: Doton • Doryuu Taiga is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. The ninja will do the necessary hand seals and transform the ground upon which the enemy stands into a river of mud.
Name: Otoshi Buta - Covering Lid
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Doton
Description: Doton • Otoshi Buta is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. To utilize this technique, the ANBU member will form the needed hand seal. A large earthen pot will then fall from the sky to cover and contain the target summon. A powerful enough summon will be able to overturn the pot and escape. This will be the final attack in an elemental trio used by the ANBU.
Name: Yomi Numa - Swamp of the Underworld
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Doton
Description: Doton • Yomi Numa is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth element. After forming the needed handseals, a vast swamp can appear beneath a target to sink and kill it.
Fire (some jutsu was used from ingoo open canon list therefor not all are original) - Spoiler:
Name: Endan - Fireball
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Katon
Description: Katon • Endan is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. This jutsu allows Jiraiya to emit a jet of fire from his mouth. While not stated, this is probably the same or a similar jutsu to the one Jiraiya uses in conjunction with Gamebunta to do Gamayu Endan.
Name: Goukakyuu no Jutsu - Great Fireball Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Katon
Description: Katon • Goukakyuu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does the necessary hand seals, draws chakra from their mouth into their chest and them immediately exhales it. They then blow a stream of fire which erupts into a large sphere of flames. To better manage the flames the ninja will bring their hand to their mouth to control it.
Name: Housenka no Jutsu - Mythical Fire Phoenix Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Katon
Description: Katon • Housenka no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does the necessary hand seals and then emits a series of small fire balls. The ninja can also hurl a projectile which is covered in these same flames. To the opponent the attack appears to be only the balls of flame, they do not see the hidden threat within the flames. Meaning that even if the flames are put out, the projectiles still converge on the target. The flames can be used to cover different projectiles like shuriken or kunai.
Name: Ryuuka no Jutsu - Dragon Fire Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Katon
Description: Katon • Ryuuka no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. After binding the opponent, the ninja uses a guide wire to unleash a large torrential fire burst onto the target.
Name: Karyuu Endan - Fire Dragon Flame Projectile
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Katon
Description: Katon • Karyuu Endan is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does a string of hand seals and the proceeds to blow a large jet of fire from their mouth.
Name: Kasumi Enbu no Jutsu - Mist Waltz Technique
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Katon
Description: Katon • Kasumi Enbu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does a string of hand seals and then proceeds to blow a large combustible mist at the target. When the mist hits flame, it will ignite in an explosion of fire.
Name: Gouryuuka no Jutsu - Great Dragon Fire Technique
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Katon
Description: Katon • Gouryuuka no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja will expel dragon head fireballs at their opponent. These powerful fireballs can punch through concrete.
Name: Haisekishou - Burning Ash Accumulation
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Katon
Description: Katon • Haisekishou is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. After forming the needed handseals, Asuma will expel an ash from his mouth. This large cloud begin to envelope his foe and when Asuma clicks his teeth, the cloud will ignite in an explosion.
Name: Dai Endan - Great Fireball
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Katon
Description: Dai Endan is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire element. Jiraiya will first gather the fire into his mouth and then spew a giant breath of fire constantly at his opponent.
Magma Jutsu- Spoiler:
Name: Magma Vomit
Rank: C-S
Range: Close
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Description: The user does the needed hand signs. After this they bring their chakra into their mouths and spit out magma. This magma streams out of their mouth like a stream. A good amount comes out and it all depends on the rank of the user. This jutsu is used mostly for support and is used to use most jutsu.
Chunin- 40ft worth of magma
Jounin- 70ft worth of magma
All Ranks Higher - 100ft worth of magma
Name: Magma Shuriken
Rank: C
Range: Far
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Description: The user must first use the Magma Vomit technique, or anyother technique which gives them a source of magma of course. Some of the magma or all what ever the user chooses, raises from the ground forming shuriken, kunai, or senbon from the lava. They are then throw themselves at the target. If they miss, the user can simply do another hand sign they will simply explode sending magma everywhere.
Name:Magma spikes.
Rank: C
Range: Medium
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Description:After using the Magma Vomit Jutsu, or anyother jutsu that gives them a source of magma. The user does handsigns. After those requirments are met the magma forms spikes, which although are magma can pierce the skin. If the user doesn't have enough magma to make large spikes, they can use chakra to make it longer, or bigger. These spikes can be manipulated to will, using chakra. Much like the Nara clan the user must have the handsign in place the whole time and must concentrate the whoel time. But unlike the nara clan, they can not be manipulated like the Nara clan exactly unlike the nara clan these spikes cannot be used for anything more than a simple attack, they move in quick straight movements, they don't curve. These cant go very far, and only are good for close attacks. Medum attacks would be very easy to dodge. These spikes consume chakra like a monster. It can reach up to 25 feet depending on the rank.
Name: Magma Bombs
Rank: C
Range: Medium.
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu.
Description: After using a technique that gives them a source of chakra and doing a few hand signs. The user grabs the magma in their hands, using chakra as a protective glove. They form the magma into whatever they want. These bombs are design to be madeo ut of magma and much chakra and explode when told to with force and much more magma then had been put into it. These bombs are relatively small depending on how strong they will be. A genin can make about five of these. They use chakra control to make a protective layer around there hands when forming the bombs. They are thrown by hand, and they uses chakra as a specail glove to protect themselves. The explosions aren't great, like I said it depends on chakra, size and rank. If lots of chakra is put in it would make a larger explosion. Right now at a genin level I would say the explosion is several feet in daimeter.
Name: [Magma Release - Magma Wall]
Rank: B
Jutsu: Ninjutsu
Description: A technique that has magma surging up from the ground in order to create a super heated wall. A create defense against both ninjutsu and taijutsu. If hit by a water or ice technique it will solidify into rock
Name: [Magma Release · Magma Protection]
- Rank: A
Jutsu: Ninjutsu
Description: A technique that is used to protect the user. Magma flies up from the ground and floats around the user. If the opponent attacks the magma, that will hurt a great deal. But over time the magma will harden and become rock, and fall to the ground.
Name: (Magma Release · Volcano Eruption)
- Rank: A
-Jutsu: Ninjutsu
Description: The user gathers a great deal of chakra within their body as they surge it all throughout the ground. Several points in the ground then build up a great deal of steam as it flies through the ground. Surrounding the area in a veil of steam. The user jumps into the air as rocks fly into the sky from the uprising steam. The user then breathes fire and it covers the rocks, sending down a storm of flaming rocks.
Name: (Magma Release · Magma Prison)
- Rank: B
Jutsu: Ninjutsu
Description:The user performs various hand seals as they charge chakra deep into the ground. Magma erupts from the ground as it surges creating a large dome either around just the opponent of both the opponent and the user. Within the prison is it very hot until the magma cools. When the magma cools it is very hard to break, and is almost an unescapable prison.
Name: [Magma Release - Lava Burst]
- Rank: B
Jutsu: Ninjutsu
Description: The user performing the necessary hand seals take in a deep breath as they bring about the ideals of most fire exhaling jutsu into play. Upon exhaling, a burst of condensed lava emerges and is fired off at the opponent. Upon striking a surface it explodes into many droplets of lava.
Name:(Magma Release ~ Magma Shower)
- Rank: B
Jutsu: Ninjutsu
Description: After the necessary handseals have been formed the user will punch upon the ground and will send a great deal of it to fly up. After the dirt and caked mud gets high enough it will heat and turn into magma and will shower upon an entire area with the range of a quarter of a mile. The magma does damage to all in the area from people to vegetation causing wildfires. This is mostly used to make large scale attacks.
Name: Magma Clone burst
Rank:A
Jutsu: Ninjutsu
Descriptions: The weilder makes a clone out of magma and the clone is able to walk, talk, and maneuver all the to wielders wishes. Upon contact from a attack or from activation by the users the clone will blow up causing heavy damage and severe burns, sometimes even blowing off entire limbs if used properly.
Name: Magma Arts: Liquid Magma Jutsu
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: A
Element: Magma
Description: This jutsu is a anti-taijutsu and kenjutsu technique. This is similar to suigetsu's ability, but this one uses magma and must be activated for 1 post. The users body is able to liquidize his body in a substitution like manner. The jutsu take effect only on the point of impact, making the initial attack not only punch through the users body part but cause damage to his hands, feet, or weapon (melts weapon unless the users weapon has a skill that says otherwise). The jutsu can only be activated and after it is used once it takes another 5 post until it can be used again.
Fuuninjutsu- Spoiler:
Name: Shikoku Fuuin
Rank: C
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Duration: -
Description: Shikoku Fuuin is a Fuuinjutsu technique used by the Leaf Sannin Jiraiya. By forming the needed sealing chakra on his finger, Jiraiya can engrave a message into an object.
Name: Five Seals Barrier
Rank: C
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Duration: -
Description: This technique creates a barrier around a place by placing four forbidden tags around a fifth. The only way to remove the barrier is by removing all five tags simultaneously. Not only would this require a group of at least five people, it also requires an immense search, since the four tags can be scattered in any direction, as far as 800 meters from the fifth seal. This makes breaking through this barrier almost impossible.
Summon- Spoiler:
Name: Kuchiyose no Jutsu - Spiritualism Technique Rank: C Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu Elemental Affinity: - Description: A powerful jutsu, Ninpo Kuchiyose allows a ninja to summon animals, objects and the dead to fight on their behalf. The ninja normally signs a blood contract with the animal species, which allows them to summon different size and skill levels of creature. The ability to summon more advanced animals largely depends upon the amount of chakra the ninja can muster to perform the jutsu. To summon the creature the ninja will wipe blood on the hand, perform the necessary handseals and then touch their hand to the ground or another object. Though it appears that as long as significant pressure is placed against the blood in some form, the summon will be complete. There can be variations to the summoning steps, some ninja like Temari will wipe blood on her fan, then by swinging the fan the animal is summoned. Other ninja like Orochimaru wipe the blood across a snake tattoo on their arm first, then touch the ground. Name: Salamander (Glaives) Rank: E-S Appearance:  Type of Summon: Blood Donation Species: Salamander Elemental Affinity: Fire History: During his first time summoning Ragna used very little chakra and summoned Glaive, they become friends sort of. This particular salamander has no skill other than being able to communicate with other salamanders with telepathy. (Once Ragnarok reaches complete union with the salamander beast clan Glaive will become larger about the size of a Gamabunta (toad summon) and will develop jutsu, since that will be a long way off i will wait to do this) Name: Salamander Brothers Rank: A Appearance: Type of Summon: Blood Donation Species: Salamander Elemental Affinity: Fire History: During his training in Salamania, land of the salamanders, he was granted the permission by the Great Salamander, Gaffgarion, to summon the brothers. Description: The Salamanders stand as tall as a 7'0 man and weigh close to 700lb. There are total of 2 summoned at once all having inhuman speed and power. The use thier claws as a weapon to cut thier prey into ribbons. The skill that these brothers share is thier ability to camouflage themselves with there background making them appear invisible. They are able to burrow underground with the help of thier claws, and strike from the ground. They are able to move unhindered on any terrain whether it is land, underground, water, or even trees. These salamanders also blind but are able to sense thier surroundings through thier flickering tongues. Thier skin is as tough a metal itself so basic weapons or worthless, if the opponent has a weapon with a special skill that ignores defense then the weapon acts as normal. The brothers are completely immuned to fire jutsu but are very weakened by water jutsu. Name: Vanish Type: Ninjutsu Rank: B Element: None Description: Using thier chakra the brothers can make thier entire body camouflage, This doesnt mask thier chakra so a chakra sensor can easily pin point them. Also thier scent isnt hidden so they can be sniffed out as well. This skill is used mostly as a stall tactic when it is needed. Name: Fire Dragon Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu Rank: B Element: Fire Description: The brothers can each individually cast this jutsu. By putting there claws together they focus thier chakra and spews a fire dragon from thier mouths. This is similar to water dragon jutsu. The dragon any only be maneuvered 1 time once its been sat loose after it is turn in what ever direction it countinues in that direction untill it either collides with something, or is released.
Summon- Spoiler:
Name: Wayborn Rank: B Appearance:  Type of Summon: Blood Donation Species: Salamander Elemental Affinity: Fire History: Wayborn was summoned by Ragna during his training Salamandria, to summon stronger salamanders. Wayborn has wings and scale even though he is a salamander, among his kind he is considered the messenger of the salamanders. Being able to fly, dig, and swim at very high speeds he is a ideal candidate for sending messages or traveling helper. At max speed he is able to cover 10 miles in less than 40 minutes. Wayborn uses a special ability to make the rider and company smaller so that they fit in his mouth, making him able to hold 3 people but no more than this. Besides flight and speed he is able to speak, but he has no physical defensive skills other than very good dodging skills. As stated it has scale which provide defense against most attacks, the skill itself provide a small chakra covered substance that gives the salamander more defense. This defense is comparable to a A rank defensive jutsu and it is non elemental. Link: [Link to training topic]
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| | | | Ragna
Sand Jounin
| | Subject: Re: Ragnarok, The Menace of Marin (done) and approved from jounin by adam Wed Dec 09, 2009 1:45 am | |
| Background InformationBirth of a Menace Famine was out of chakra and was dead tired. he never expected that the nations would find out about thier ambush attempt and yet they did. Now he was the last man standing from the group and surrounded by the enemy. They had no reason to fear him anymore he was as weak as a infant. Infant....my child, he thought. He would never see his child now, how unlucky to never oonce be able to lay eyes on his heir. A single tear rolled down his face and he looked into the sky, he could here the nations shinobi moving in. He didnt care anymore he closed his eyes as the first shinobi struck him with a kunai. He felt no pain though he noticed the sky was moving how strange he thought. He fell to the ground eyes still gazing up "Good bye my child" he whsipered as his vision went blurry then black. As one man closed his eyes a new set gaze upon the world. The baby didnt cry nor did it whine it just looked around at all the strange faces that looked back at it. "Welcome to the world Ragnarok, my son" a gentle voice said. Ragna's eyes searched the room to see the source and found it came from a pretty smile. He looked at his mother not blinking and cooed at her warm embrace. This happy moment wouldnt last long for a messenger entered the room and reported the death of Famine. The woman, Mayl, sat in shock then looked to the nurse who was nearby. "You woman take my son and keep his presence hidden from the clan. If others knew of his being here without the protection of his father he may be in danger." Her body ached but she pushed away her pain and stood, her pain in her heart hurt more than any physical pain. She dressed herself and walked out the door, Ragnarok would never see her again. It was reported she was captured by the enemy and tortured to death but her body was never found. The nurse held Ragnarok and rocked him to sleep but his eyes was wide open he was curious about this world and wanted to see more. Heir of a Clan The days passed to months and the months into years and young Ragnarok was now five. He was raised by the nurse and was decent young boy, he did however have a terrible temper which caused many kids not to want to play with him. He didnt mind though he preferred his own company anyway he cared little for the kids around here. He sat alone as usual when the nurse came to sit next to him "Hello ragna why are you buy yourself" she asked in a gentle tone. He smiled at her "I kicked a kid in his teeth because he would give me the toy he was playing with" he said in a equally sweet and gentle tone. She gasped at the statement and scolded him telling him how wrong he was doing that. He was used to this he got yelled at alot but it was empty words to him, he was better than these kids the nurse already told him he was the heir to the clan. He was like a king, he thought, and all these kids were nothing but pawns in his pocket. Later that day, a message came to the house of the nurse. It seems that Mayl was prepared for her death afterall the not said for the nurse to reveal Raganarok as the heir when turned 10, Ragnarok would be 10 in a few days. She nodded to the messenger and went into the house, she knew that the rules of the clan were simple. The strongest rule, right now a ninja that fought along side Famine ruled the clan with a iron fist, he wouldnt just step down. This meant a fight to the death and most likely the boys death. He had recieved training from the nearby academy but was expelled for attacking a teacher and 3 students. Ragnarok walked in to see the nurse crying, this made him depressed everytime she cried he decided to just go outside till she was done. The day came and his identity was revealed he was the leader of the clan and he loved every minute of it. He smiled from ear to ear unaware of what awaited next for him. Not long after the announcement the ninja leader none as Cannon announced his challenge to the boy. Now Ragnarok was getting prepared for this fight to the death. This dumbass dared to challenge his king he was gonna pay, he said to himself. After preparations he met cannon in the village courtyard. It looked like everyone came for this to see who thier leader will be. Many assumed cannon would win but Ragnarok was the son of Famine and Mayl the two ninja who brought the clan together. Cannon, not wanting to wait charge at Ragnarok and kicked him square in the face sending him flying back. Ragnarok couldnt keep up with the movements and was struck down. Blood poured down his nose and he had a few cuts on his body from the sliding on the ground. He hadnt ever been struck like that before and his eyes watered from the hit to the nose. Cannon laughed at Ragnarok and raised his hands to the crowd. Ragnarok looked at him with hate in his eyes he would not be disrespected by this pawn. He staggered to his feet and pointed to the man. Cannon looked at the boy and laughed again and walked to the boy who looked as if he was barely able to stand. This runt would not challenge his right to be leader. He got closer to Ragnarok and took out a kunai, he would is this quickly. He got in striking range of Ragnarok and Ragnarok made his move. He used everything in him and punched at Cannon, Cannon easily dodged the attack and was about to bring is kunai down into the boys back when Ragnarok's foot struck his chest. Cannon rolled back in pain to the ground he felt as if he was burned alive and saw 3rd degree burns on his body. He looked in time see Ragnarok's smiling face and then he brought his fist down on the man's face. People could now see that Ragnarok's who hand was leaking magma and covered the mans face. Cannon body shook violently before he stopped moving completely. Everyone was shocked they had never seen a jutsu like this before, Ragnarok smiled at the people and yelled as loud as he could " IMPERIUS REX", he was now leader like he knew he was meant to be. Massacre of Marin Ragnarok sat the end of a large table each seat was filled with high ranked shinobi whose whole job was to train him and teach all they know. He sat back in his chair his feet on the table and his head resting on his closed fist. He was bored already with these guys he could kill any of them easily but where was the fun in that. It had been 8 years since his takeover of the village and it had not been what he expected. People always needed help, a family was hungry, a scout was near the area, blah blah blah. It was the same thing day in day out. The only consolation was that he could use any of them as entertainment. He glance at a shinobi on the right near the end of the table. He had learned all he could learn from this man he would make sport of him he was expendable now. He glanced to the left and saw another ninja who was useless to him. He lifted his head and pointed to the two men "You two i am bored fight each other who ever wins can keep thier lives" he said jokingly. The shinobi knew better whether he sounded as if he was joking or not you do what Ragnarok said or risk your own life. The two got up and fought and Ragnarok laughed hysterically the other shinobi watched in dismay, this was the way of things when you could no longer teach you were thrown out. After the fight the shinobi left Ragnarok's meeting chamber, Ragnarok sat alone now. He hated being alone now not liek when he was kid, for some reason when he was alone he would think about his parents. He didnt care much for them but he would wonder what they were like how did they lead and most importantly how strong they were. He sat alone in the dark only the light from the moon was illuminated the area in which he sat, as if the moon itself watched over him. He got up from the table and lookedout upon the courtyard. He wasnt a fool he knew the people hated him, hell he felt the same about them. They wanted him to be like his parents, but he was nothing like them. He cared little about the 5 nations and even less about some resistance. He only wanted to be strong and live his life they way he wanted. He could se from his window the lights of the village, it would please him to no end to kill them all. He noticed movement from the corner of his in the room. He laughed, he knew it was some weakling coming for his life he turned to see no one there. He laughed to himself a bit maybe paranoia. He took two steps and a voice spoke, " Ragnarok we have you surround you cant run. and you cant beat us all." He recognized the voice it was one his teachers. He couldnt stand this disrespect he was getting angry now more so than normal. He would kill them all and thier friends and thier family everyone will die. He raised his hands but was stabbed by several kunai, he laughed at the fools "Your mistake" he said in a very kind tone. His body blew up in a explosion of magma killing most in the room and blowing the whole half of the house away. In the confusion he dispatched the ninja one by one. Childs Play, he thought, he left his home with several ninja following him and entered the heart of the town. He stopped and looked upon his assassins and spoke,"Villagers or Marin, I Ragnarok, hereby deliver my judgement on you all for the mistake of these fools" as he spoke many peeked through windows and out the doors. "My jugdement is death" he said happily and released another jutsu that made magma rain from the sky. Home caught fire and some themselves clothes was set ablaze. The assassins charged, but it was all futile, one by one Ragnarok dispatched them all then he went to othe villagers.. He spared no one he would erase his mother and fathers legacy from the world. The screams could be heard from miles away the flames from even further. By the time the rain pour the village was no more only 1 man sat in what used to be the courtyard. Ragnarok looked to the skies and let the ran hit his face, it seemed as if them heavens themselves wept for the dead. He laughed at this thought they should not weep for the dead , no they should weep for the world, now he was free to go as he wanted wreak havoc as he saw fit. He yelled loudly to the sky ",IMPERIUS REX". The Menace of Marin was born and the world will be all the wore for it. RP Sample:The day was hot as normal, Ragnarok sat against a tree, the wind blowing his hair which irritated him. He puffed a bit of smoke in the air from the cigarette in his mouth. Everything pissed him off in some way or another so he was always angry. He moved his hair and turned so that the wind wouldnt blow his hair in his face again. The sun beamed down making him take off his black jacket and slung it over his shoulder. He had to get to the next village soon to revamp his food and water. It was a bit hard however being he was wanted as a missing ninja. He really didnt care however whats a few more to the list of dead people he already killed. He finished his cigarette and flicked it into a nearby woods. He was a bit tired and some rest would do him some good, but he had been on the run since his little fun trip into Suna. He had killed the follower he had trailing him, he winced a bit at the pain on his arm. That sneaky bastard caught him a bit off guard and got a good hit off him. He got more angry now and he wanted kill something, he stomped a nearby plant. That didnt make him feel any better at all and he cussed under his breath. He arrived at the location a small little port town called, Sea Shore. " What a dumb ass name for a town", he yelled as he entered. He saw a lot of kids playing and people coming and going. Not wanting to be around these people anymore than he had to,he got himself some food and made his way out again. He didnt have a particular location to go to, but he couldnt resist the urge to keep going in this direction. He assumed that if his body really wanted to go that way there had to be something there of some significance. He put on his jacket as the wind picked up again, he would find a nice tree or something to sleep by and continue in the morning. The soon left its foot prints across the sky and the moon slowly made its way to cover them. He hoped he would be able to get a decent sleep, no telling what tomorrow had in store for him.
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| | | | Travis
Akatsuki
| | Subject: Re: Ragnarok, The Menace of Marin (done) and approved from jounin by adam Thu Dec 10, 2009 4:04 am | |
| Denied, you are to change your rank immediately for plagerism of Ingoo's and my friend's personal jutsu which you did not even bother to credit him for.
Change to Genin. | |
| | | | Ragna
Sand Jounin
| | Subject: Re: Ragnarok, The Menace of Marin (done) and approved from jounin by adam Thu Dec 10, 2009 4:11 am | |
| whoa bro slow the hell down i am not claiming ownership or creation of those jutsu i have posted i just simple forgot to ad they were borrowed from another site. So how bout not jumping to conclusions it was a honest mistake >.> -edited-
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| | | | Travis
Akatsuki
| | Subject: Re: Ragnarok, The Menace of Marin (done) and approved from jounin by adam Thu Dec 10, 2009 4:14 am | |
| And still is plagerising seeing as you would've c/p from Ingoo thus the owner's name would be ON already. Thus you removed them yourself. Even with giving the user credit, did you get physical permission to use them from Hageshii Ame/The Janitor/Indan? | |
| | | | Ragna
Sand Jounin
| | Subject: Re: Ragnarok, The Menace of Marin (done) and approved from jounin by adam Thu Dec 10, 2009 4:19 am | |
| i assumed since it was in the open canon list it would be fine if it is a issue i can remake my jutsu no harm no foul, my intention and also i didnt think i had to keep the name on it i meant to post that some of the jutsu came from ingoo but i honestly forgot. if it will solve the issue i will delete them and make up a new set. good? | |
| | | | Ragna
Sand Jounin
| | Subject: Re: Ragnarok, The Menace of Marin (done) and approved from jounin by adam Thu Dec 10, 2009 4:30 am | |
| there all my jutsu for fire and earth are canon, good enough? | |
| | | | Travis
Akatsuki
| | Subject: Re: Ragnarok, The Menace of Marin (done) and approved from jounin by adam Thu Dec 10, 2009 4:38 am | |
| I overreacted a bit. Just add in his name and ask him. His name is Indan on here. Then it will be fine. | |
| | | | Ragna
Sand Jounin
| | Subject: Re: Ragnarok, The Menace of Marin (done) and approved from jounin by adam Thu Dec 10, 2009 4:38 am | |
| i already changed the jutsu to canon type only so that it would save me time i hope that would be good enough | |
| | | | L33
Leaf Genin
| | Subject: Re: Ragnarok, The Menace of Marin (done) and approved from jounin by adam Thu Dec 10, 2009 4:50 am | |
| - Quote :
- Personality Trait's: Ragnaroks most dominant trait is his the way he refers to himself, he acts as if he is The ruler of the world and will often act as such. Thinking his jutsu is the
I think your missing some information ^^ - Quote :
- He is able to control his chakra so that he never uses more chakra than needed
Please give a more indepth explanation. - Quote :
- He can weave hand signs with a single hand
To my knowledge only someone from the 'Haku Clan' can perform jutsu with only a single hand. However i could be mistaken so this point is open to discussion :3 - Quote :
- He can also weave two separate jutsu simultaneously so long as it is not magma jutsu
To my understanding i read that your allowed to use two jutsu provided the end result is magma. So, you can combine one earth with one fire allowing you to fuse them. Obviously this is a result of element combination but bare in mind you'll burn up chakra much faster performing jutsu in this manner ^_^ - Quote :
- He has 20% more chakra than normal for his level
Why? ---- Could someone whose familiar with Ingoo jutsu please take alook over them? | |
| | | | Ragna
Sand Jounin
| | Subject: Re: Ragnarok, The Menace of Marin (done) and approved from jounin by adam Thu Dec 10, 2009 5:00 am | |
| i am very much aware of how the using two jutsu may take a toll on his chakra i have prepared for such things. also i meant to erase that last part about his personal trait ^^.
-Edited- | |
| | | | Travis
Akatsuki
| | Subject: Re: Ragnarok, The Menace of Marin (done) and approved from jounin by adam Thu Dec 10, 2009 5:03 am | |
| - L33 wrote:
- Could someone whose familiar with Ingoo jutsu please take alook over them?
They are canon ones that are from the Canon list on the site. They are pre-existing. | |
| | | | Ragna
Sand Jounin
| | Subject: Re: Ragnarok, The Menace of Marin (done) and approved from jounin by adam Thu Dec 10, 2009 5:05 am | |
| is that bad? or good? i rather not get in trouble again | |
| | | | L33
Leaf Genin
| | Subject: Re: Ragnarok, The Menace of Marin (done) and approved from jounin by adam Thu Dec 10, 2009 5:05 am | |
| Thanx ^^
Trav whats your opinion on him mimicing haku and only using one hand to perform jutsu dude? | |
| | | | Travis
Akatsuki
| | Subject: Re: Ragnarok, The Menace of Marin (done) and approved from jounin by adam Thu Dec 10, 2009 9:34 am | |
| Takes him longer to preform them, or not super fast seeing as it takes a lot of skill and practice.
And Ragna, its fine there all canon. | |
| | | | Ragna
Sand Jounin
| | Subject: Re: Ragnarok, The Menace of Marin (done) and approved from jounin by adam Thu Dec 10, 2009 9:44 am | |
| kool i do have a question about the one hand sign issue, if i trained to use one hand to weave jutsu could i not learn to use them at a speed that is average for a hounin of my level? | |
| | | | Ragna
Sand Jounin
| | Subject: Re: Ragnarok, The Menace of Marin (done) and approved from jounin by adam Fri Dec 11, 2009 7:11 am | |
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| | | | Travis
Akatsuki
| | Subject: Re: Ragnarok, The Menace of Marin (done) and approved from jounin by adam Fri Dec 11, 2009 7:12 am | |
| Ask Adam or an Admin bout that. | |
| | | | Ragna
Sand Jounin
| | Subject: Re: Ragnarok, The Menace of Marin (done) and approved from jounin by adam Fri Dec 11, 2009 1:44 pm | |
| just forget the one hand weaving i will just learn it later if i can. | |
| | | | Ragna
Sand Jounin
| | Subject: Re: Ragnarok, The Menace of Marin (done) and approved from jounin by adam Sat Dec 12, 2009 5:09 am | |
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| | | | Travis
Akatsuki
| | Subject: Re: Ragnarok, The Menace of Marin (done) and approved from jounin by adam Sat Dec 12, 2009 6:55 pm | |
| Its been a little more than 12 hours, wait next time.
For Chakra storage, you should create a scroll and I think you'd have to do a topic saying you refilled the scroll each time otherwise I could see that as a bit cheap as 30% of your chakra is revived. | |
| | | | Ragna
Sand Jounin
| | Subject: Re: Ragnarok, The Menace of Marin (done) and approved from jounin by adam Sun Dec 13, 2009 3:42 am | |
| i know that much but i will edit so that the jutsu says as much | |
| | | | Senkou
Akatsuki Leader
| | Subject: Re: Ragnarok, The Menace of Marin (done) and approved from jounin by adam Sun Dec 13, 2009 4:30 am | |
| I vote approved. There you go | |
| | | | Absolute Greed.
Leaf Jounin
| | Subject: Re: Ragnarok, The Menace of Marin (done) and approved from jounin by adam Fri Dec 25, 2009 11:08 am | |
| Unnapproved for two reasons.
1. Chakra Storage: That is extremely Op, you can reach almost double the amount of chakra for a regular jounin. I am absolute in this, this technique is going to be remove, .
2. You can weave two seperate jutsu at the same time, beyond just your kkg's abbility. | |
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