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 Kohaku's person. [Done]

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Leah
Sand Jounin
Sand Jounin
Leah



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PostSubject: Kohaku's person. [Done]   Kohaku's person. [Done] EmptyFri Sep 25, 2009 8:05 pm

Name: Shizuki Kanahama
Age: 24
Gender: male
Looks:Kohaku's person. [Done] Disninjam3ll
Rank: ANBU (A rank)
Specialties:
main: Fuinjutsu
sub: Taijutsu
Element Affinity:
Earth (Daton)
Fire (Katon)


Jutsu:

CLAN JUTSU
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Leah
Sand Jounin
Sand Jounin
Leah



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PostSubject: Re: Kohaku's person. [Done]   Kohaku's person. [Done] EmptySun Sep 27, 2009 2:53 am

Doki No Ichi:
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Doki No Ni:
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Doki No San:
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Doki No Shi:
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Doki No Gou:
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Doki No Ruk:
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Kichoyose No Hachi:
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Absolute Greed.
Leaf Jounin
Leaf Jounin
Absolute Greed.



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PostSubject: Re: Kohaku's person. [Done]   Kohaku's person. [Done] EmptySun Sep 27, 2009 3:57 am

eh.. that's awefully Op.. do they dissapear like a regular shadow clone?
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Leah
Sand Jounin
Sand Jounin
Leah



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PostSubject: Re: Kohaku's person. [Done]   Kohaku's person. [Done] EmptySun Sep 27, 2009 4:00 am

No they are summons!
And they cannot all be summoned silly. They take up a bunch of chakra.
And he is an elite A rank ninja, and he only has a couple jutsu.
so he is not that OP.
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Absolute Greed.
Leaf Jounin
Leaf Jounin
Absolute Greed.



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PostSubject: Re: Kohaku's person. [Done]   Kohaku's person. [Done] EmptySun Sep 27, 2009 4:01 am

Wait..
So theres him. Then he summons ANOTHER ninja? that's really over powered leah.
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Leah
Sand Jounin
Sand Jounin
Leah



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PostSubject: Re: Kohaku's person. [Done]   Kohaku's person. [Done] EmptySun Sep 27, 2009 4:06 am

ummm...
its the same as a normal summoning?
I dont see what the difference is?
And ummm...
none of the ninja he summons can really perform jutsu...
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Adam
The Fourth Hokage
The Fourth Hokage
Adam



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PostSubject: Re: Kohaku's person. [Done]   Kohaku's person. [Done] EmptySun Sep 27, 2009 7:46 pm

Then they are pissy little summons, meaning you terribly over-ranked him.

Not only that, you haven't shown how he serves a purpose, i think that bit needs to be added to the template which I'll do so immediately.

16 year old ANBU member is also rather stupid.... Do not use Itachi as an example since he was exceptional and OVERPOWERED in the RPG world. So.... this doesn't have any need to be approved.
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Leah
Sand Jounin
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Leah



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PostSubject: Re: Kohaku's person. [Done]   Kohaku's person. [Done] EmptySun Sep 27, 2009 11:31 pm

Ok, iedited his age so he is much older now.
And I brought down the rank of the jutsu by one, save the S rank.
And as far as his purpose? He is a suna nin which aids mr in mssions. Our clans were allied in the war, and were the last of them.
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