Poisonous Nano Bugs Technique

Name: Poisonous Nano Bugs Technique
Type: Ninjutsu/Hidden Clan Technique
Rank: A
Element: N/A
Description: The user could enable their hand or body to insert poisonous nano-sized bug in the opponent's body which creates a painful and mostly fatal injury. These insects are transferred in to the victim's body with a mere touch of the skin. Although from the Aburame Clan this is apparently even secret among them. It's claimed that Orito Aburame created an antidote for this jutsu. The jutsu is seen to hold somewhat of an acid like effect, spreading poisonous acid like fluids that melt the users skin. It can quickly spread due to the merely fact that they are nano sized bugs, millions of them. So eventually the poison could consume the user completely.

would it be out of place for me to add input onto this technique?

Ok here we go..

1. In order for the last sentence to hold true you would have to create a seperate item or jutsu in order to actually have an antidote. As you have a medical specialty, that shouldnt be a problem, but just to keep in mind.

2. I would like you to describe said injury. There are several types of injuries, and it would have to be much more specific.

1.I'll develop some kind of item that allows me to fix this jutsu's effect, the said antidote.

2. The jutsu is seen to hold somewhat of an acid like effect, spreading poisonous acid like fluids that melt the users skin almost. It can quickly spread due to the merely fact that they are nano sized bugs, millions of them. They would travel quickly, as seen in the new manga chapter. So eventually the poison could consume the user completely.

I read the new manga, I know how it works, but it needs to be edited into the description please.

Fixed.

Approved for training