More new jutsu

Name:Chakra Siphon
Rank: B
Type: Genjutsu
Element: Shadow
Description: A subtle genjutsu, which effects certain chakra channels in the brain. IT causes no sensory malfunction, but it confuses the afflicteds brain, and prevents it from channeling chakra properly. Thus for every post they are afflicted with this genjutsu, each jutsu they use, they must use 25% more chakra to perform it, and the excess chakra used is channeled back into An'barak, as the chakra being used is linked to his own chakra canals, allowing the overrused chakra to flow down this path, increasing his own resivoirs. This genjutsu is extremely difficult to detect, but not terribly challenging to remove, as it causes no noticeable effect other than the seemingly rapid loss of an opponents chakra

Name: Unstable Affliction
Rank: B
Type: Genjutsu
Element: shadow
A genjutsu which must be used in unison with other genjutsu in order to be effective. It places certain restraints on the brain's chakra channels, that take no effect, until the affected enemy attempts to clear the chakra channels, when dispelling another genjutsu. l cause this chakra to create a volatile reaction, sealing chakra canals teh teh brain, and ultimately, limiting their opponents chakra use, in addition to causing a severe headache when teh genjutsu release is attempted to be performed. This reaction affects whomevers chakra is used to alleviate the other genjutsu's affecting the targets brain. (so, if an ally tries to free their comrade they will suffer the results.) After the initial headpains are inflicted, the person will be unable to channel, for the next to posts, any more chakra than it would take to perform a C-rank jutsu (so, results are severe headpain, and no using jutsu above C-rank for 3 posts) . However, given that this genjutsu has no other effects than that, it must be used in unison with other genjutsu, in order to convince the opponent to perform a genjutsu release.

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- On Chakra Siphon make it 25% and do they know that this is happening, can they judge it, or is it willingly?

- Unstable Affliction is fine, but you need to correct the formation of the description and some spelling mistakes i.e "the" not "teh" ^^

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For the Siphon, i would like a description of the science behind HOW, the excess chakra gets back to you, I can figure it out for myself, but Id still like it set in stone.

The other one is approved for trainng

Training for both jutsu:

An'barak shrugged, and followed his comrade, not paying much attention to his words and willingly just being dragged along: he was too engrossed in the scroll of Gul'dan. He was looking for a summoning technique for a demon whom he had only heard rumors of. A small, paristic monstrosity, that could possess anothers body. However, while he had be incapable of finding such a technique, he had still come across something quite interesting. Within the scroll there had been two genjutsu, that had been of great interest to An'barak, and that he had been throughly studying for the past mile and a half. The first one was known as Chakra drain, a genjutsu which was very complicated in its casting, but incredibely potent in its usage. The jutsu, which he was sure he had mastered at this point, would force his enemies to consume more chakra every time they used a technique- Chakra that would be funneled back to An'barak for his own usage. The implications for a such a technique were endless: In long lasting battles, it would undoubtedly give him an edge, and allow him to outlast his opponents. Supposedly, it was incredibely difficult to sense, only experience genjutsu users would realize that they were even being effected. The other technique which had been thoroughly studying was known as unstable affliction: a genjutsu technique even more complex than the first, but when used in unison with Zutto's own genjutsu, it would enable them to trump even the most talented of enemies with ease: the genjutsu would only take effect after the chakra channels had attempted to be cleared, and then it would hit the enemies with a migraine headache, and prevent them from channeling enough chakra in order to effectively fight back... Such sophisticated genjutsu... An'barak had never imagined that such techniques had existed, let alone that he would wield them. Indeed, he was so absorbed in his reading, that he almost missed the distinctive scent that had begun permeating the air. He looked up from the scroll, sniffing the air intently, before calling out to his partner "Stop. Up ahead of us is one of the poison gas fissures this land is famous for... We have to be careful. I can cross the gorge, but unless you have a similar special breathing technique, it would be suicide for you to get too much closer." An'barak had already completed the handsigns, and had at this point quite easily been holding his breath for well over a minute without any discomfort, and he could continue to do so indefinitley. "Find a way across. I'll meet you on the other side." After saying this, An'barak ran forward and leapt into the ravine, dissapearing from sight. Land gracefully at the bottom of the ravine which was shrouded in green gas, he immeadiatley channeled chakra to his feet, and started ascending the opposite wall. After about a minute of his feet tapping against the hard, lifeless rock of the stone wall, he took a final jump, and landed atop the ridge in a crouch, robe making a slight swishing sound as he landed. He ran forward about 40 feet, and then turned around, releasing his breath-holding technique, and looking back for Zutto, however, he couldn't see his partner through the fumes emnating from the ravine. Shrugging, he continued walking forward, in the direction of the village hidden in the stars. He was sure Zutto would be able to catch up.

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