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Kanashii
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PostSubject: Kinko Clan   Kinko Clan EmptySun Oct 11, 2009 8:02 am

Name:Kinko Clan-Safe Clan
Also know the Koigokoro Clan-Love Clan
Because they will die for others.
Love is the best medicine, and there is more than enough to go around once you open your heart.

Kekkei Genkai:Force Field Pure charka coming out of the body to make shields.
Their charka is White. It cannot block Genjutsu, only ninjutsu and taijutsu. Its found that only wind and lighting can be combined in an even balance to make a perfect shield. Shields cannot be overused for even one shield takes plenty charka. Most shields are fairly close to the user but some jutsu allows it to go further, These shields are pure charka so they can take a beating but they can still be destroyed with brute force.

Only Kinko Ninja can learn these
Secret Clan Jutsu:
Name:Kijan Kinko No jutsu Lignting Safe no jutsu
Rank:B
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:Lighting
Description:It creates a small force field. It can break by a B ranked jutsu and higher. This shield cancels a B ranked Earth jutsu. It can negate the attack of a C ranked jutsu and lower. Takes some charka to use this.
The force field is only wide enough for one person. It can be made into a small dome and a wall. If someone else touches the wall they well be shocked. The shock is not lethal. It can only stun for 1 post, if other than the user touched it.This Jutsu was created by Kija. It pops out pretty quick and leaves quick within 2 posts. Genjutsu easily passes through this jutsu. It can also protect against an A ranked earth jutsu.


Name:Tezema Kinko No jutsu Small Safe no jutsu
Rank:C
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:N/A Charka
Description:It creates a small force field. It can be broken by a B ranked jutsu and higher. The force field is only wide enough for one person. It can be made into a small dome and a wall. Genjutsu easily passes through this jutsu. It last only about 2 posts.

Name:Purotekuto Kinko No jutsu Protect Safe no jutsu
Rank:C
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:N/A Charka
Description:Lets Kija bring miniature shields to his hands. The shields
Are about twice the size of his hands and he can use them against Taijutsu.
It stops Taijutsu attacks about 2 inches away from his hands. These can break against a A ranked Taijutsu. Very useful. Kija can end this jutsu whenever he wants. It takes alot of charka manipulation to complete this jutsu. Takes alot of charka. These sheilds have a different structure, you can these shields 5 times per post. They come and leave so fast it doesn't take that munch charka. These are pretty much useless against ninjutsu. Genjutsu easily passes through this jutsu.

Name:Ookii Kinko No jutsu Big Safe no jutsu
Rank:B
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:N/A Charka
Description:It creates a big force field. Big enough for 2 people standing in a horizontal line. It can be a full dome or just a wall. Depending on how the user is using it. The sheild is wide and somewhat thin. A strong B ranked jutsu can cancel the shield. A or S ranked jutsu well destroy it. It last only about 3 posts.
Genjutsu easily passes through this jutsu.

Name:Kinko Yonin No jutsu Others Safe no jutsu
Rank:A
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:N/A Charka
Description: This jutsu is a very hard one, the user can cast this jutsu in front of someone else using their own charka. It brings up a shield in front of the objective for protection, it last about 3 post and takes charka. The user has a range to 25 yards and under. Genjutsu easily passes through this jutsu. The user cannot move while using this jutsu, If he does than the jutsu is canceled.


Name:Hanshateki Kinko No jutsu Reflect Safe no jutsu
Rank:A
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:Wind
Description:It creates a wall or dome. The dome can vary in size. Most times it is just big enough for 1 or 2 people. What the wall does it reflects the jutsu back to its user. It is mostly used to block ninjutsu and other jutsu that can be blocked by a shield. The wind reverses the jutsu to face the oppisite which is where the jutsu user is usually standing. It can last up to 3 posts which uses alot of charka.
This can block against A ranked and lower. Genjutsu easily passes through this jutsu. It also can protect against an A ranked Lighting jutsu.

History:
The Kinko clan were always loving. They were formed by The 4th Hokage. They would offended be sent as a token of gratitude. They were adored, they kept the village safe. Alot of them would often go out to the battle field to protect many of the ninja. They would also go to lower villages and help there. Although going through his process they slowly decreased. Now they are very few, The story is...

There was an air temple high in the air, They soon had to land. Reason, They had few ninja. The ninja that came from the temple were Kinko ninja. They survived many years up by themselves. They usally would train their children to love and compassion. One day the child of father was evil. Such evil thoughts. He forced the temple down. He thought they wouldn't be able to survive down there. As soon as he landed he was attacked by Konoha ninja. They was killed. The Kinko clan thought.
Maybe they can form an alliance with this village. They were stray and up in the sky was there own village. They were kept from the darkness of the land.

The Hokage found out that these marvelous ninja were useful. They would be used so often. Many of them became ANBU to protect the Hokages. They even evolved to be stronger here. They learned more ninjutsu. They learned plenty of things.
They have been in the land of the shinobi long before Konoha was built.
Once they reached the ground they slowly decreased. Now their are less the 100 left. They are scattered across the land. Some don't even know they are descendants of the clan. They have a spacial charka that is the same color but Kinko ninja can tell when they are near another Kinko ninja. The tell stories and quotes.
Very intelligent ninja.

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PostSubject: Re: Kinko Clan   Kinko Clan EmptySun Oct 11, 2009 11:12 am

First of all could you make it a little neater. There should be spacing inbetween different sentences, and don't cut down to a new line everytime..It makes it look untidy and annoying to read.

I would like you to describe your KKG better instead of just saying what it is. Can it only block against physical attacks? can it block genjutsu? is it pure chakra related or combined with elements? what elements can it combine with? what strengths and weaknesses do these offer for the shields? How many can be used in a battle? Do they need any hanseals or is a supplimentry technique? What are the ranges and how many attacks can they with stand?

If you do not wish to explain this in the KKG itself atleast explain this in the jutsu's (Which you have not)

Quote :
Name:Hanshateki Kinko No jutsu Reflect Safe no jutsu
Rank:A
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:Wind
Description:It creates a wall or dome. The dome can vary in size. What the wall does it reflects the jutsu back to its user. It is mostly used to block ninjutsu and other jutsu that can be blocked by a shield.
This can block against A ranked and lower.
Please explain this jutsu better. I presume that because it has wind element that is why it can reflect other jutsu? Please state the varied sizes of which it can reach. Note that this can only block against physical attacks not genjutsu etc.

Also i suggest making a complete shield for each element such as wind and lightning and having a rank increase for each stage. Because when i look at your jutsu they are all pretty similar in a way. For example:

C-Rank= ##size, ##strength against attacks, ##number of people it can protect, ##How long it lasts
B-Rank= ##size, ##strength against attacks, ##number of people it can protect, ##How long it lasts
A-Rank= ##size, ##strength against attacks, ##number of people it can protect, ##How long it lasts
S-Rank= ##size, ##strength against attacks, ##number of people it can protect, ##How long it lasts

Something like that but its jsut an idea ^^
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PostSubject: Re: Kinko Clan   Kinko Clan EmptySun Oct 11, 2009 11:41 pm

I think I got most of it done. I just didn't want a fire shield and a earth shield and such.
I think I got almost everything, let me know if their are still some problems.
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PostSubject: Re: Kinko Clan   Kinko Clan EmptyMon Oct 12, 2009 12:55 pm

Much better thank you.

But insteadof using time which has been used on many of your jutsu, it is easier for members to understand a post length system i.e takes 2 posts to effect target. You have done this in some jutsu but have reverted back to the other way in some others, please can you change this.

Then you shall be approved ^^
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PostSubject: Re: Kinko Clan   Kinko Clan EmptyMon Oct 12, 2009 8:23 pm

Ok Changed to posts.
^^
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PostSubject: Re: Kinko Clan   Kinko Clan EmptyTue Oct 13, 2009 10:47 am

Approved.

Note: The shields may last 5 posts but if they are broken the post length cancels.
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