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PostSubject: Kuchinawa Paksennarion   Kuchinawa Paksennarion EmptyMon Aug 24, 2009 12:02 am

General Information:
Name: Kuchinawa Paksennarion (Paks)

Nickname/Alias: -

Age: 10

Gender: Female

Looks: Paks is extremely short, almost to the point of being labeled a midget. She is commonly mistaken for a young child, standing at four feet and four inches. She has long thin limbs, and a slim build. Her overall physique appears to be fragile due to her smallness and lack of bulk. However, hidden behind the childlike façade, Paks turns out to be quite solid and strong. Her eyes are a reddish-garnet color, and bigger than normal thus adding even more so to her resemblance of a small child. When she feels strong emotions her pupil compacts themselves and resemble slits more-so than normal circles. Her canine teeth are notably pointed more than normal and resemble small fangs. Paks has vibrant red and black colored markings on her face in the form of tiny stripes.

Paks wears a dark purple shirt, the sleeves reach her wrists. It is loose enough for her to hide her nin-snake, who usually curls up around her upper arm. A wide black sash is tied tightly around her stomach, with the ends left to flutter behind her. A thin black parasol is thrust in the back of her sash so that the handle reaches just above her shoulder. She wears tight gray leggings, with bandages wrapped around her left leg and a normal ninja pouch on her hip. Her left arm is swathed in white bandages, under which her skin is red and tight with splotches of color, looking like someone spilled hot oil all over it. She keeps her supply of kunai, ninja wire and exploding notes in that pouch. Her dark purple hair is held up into short pigtails at the base of her neck, and she keeps several senbon hidden there.

Her left wrist has a small black seal on it, in the shape of a swirl pointing upwards. Her right collarbone has the same seal, only it points downward.

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Personality: Paks is very intense, in both her beliefs and actions. Everything she does is controlled, and fluid. She tends to act very haughty and disdainful of others. Seeing as she's had little to no contact with other children her age, she is serious most of the time, and looks down upon her peers for their childishness. She can be found highly arrogant, and cruelly callous, although that is mostly in part due to her upbringing and she hardly notices it.

She tends to act in a sort of mechanical way, with rote actions and responses. Paks grew up in a tightly controlled environment, where things were extremely formal and conservative. Because of that, casual actions, slang and all sorts of normal interpersonal relationships are totally alien to her, she can neither comprehend them nor feel comfortable around them. Paks can also be vicious in her approach, she will do anything to become a shinobi, and no one will get in her way, at least in her opinion. She cares not for herself or anything else in the pursuit of strength and the accomplishment of her duties.

Personality Traits: Poison's, snakes, herbs and plants.

Catch Phrase: -

Clan Information

Clan Name: Kuchinawa Clan

Kekkei Genkai: The Kuchinawa’s bloodline deals with their affinity for snakes along with the poisonous state of their blood. All members of the Kuchinawa Clan have toxic blood, although each members blood is different. Once spilt, the blood can be used in many different ways. Mainly though, it is a strong corrosive acid that can eat through skin and metal. If the blood gets on soft tissue, like eyes or other such things, it can quickly do irreparable damage. At birth their blood is only a small irritant, but it swiftly increases in potency as the member grows. Their bodies have a built up immunity towards their own blood and at best, it will cause small burns when in contact with skin.

Because their blood is such an acidic substance, most if not all poisons do not work on Clan members. Even if they do, it is at a lesser effect and the body heals quickly. This is why some members choose to work exclusively with poisons, and most members can become fearsome shinobi for that ability alone.

The very same blood that can be used as such a great tool of destruction is also a bane, a double edged sword. There are many cases of a Clan members blood increasing in potency too fast for their body to adjust to. In these cases, the members blood will very slowly begin to eat them from the inside out. However, it is rumored that some Clan members have grown able to control this, and even gained a greater control over their blood, living off of the toxin that courses through their bodies.

Another aspect of the Kuchinawa Clan is their ties with snakes. The Clan holds the snake summoning contract, and once a member has proven themselves worthy they sign the scroll. Along with that, Clan members have bonds with nin-snakes. Almost like the Inuzuka Clan of Konoha, they are able to use their companions in battle and for other purposes, even going so far as being able to talk to snakes.

Like the Inuzuka Clan, members also have senses more in tune with their companions. Elongated canines, usually resembling fangs and the bright facial markings are the more obvious ones. However, most members also tout slitted eyes which allow them to see in the dark, along with various levels of heat sensitivity. Their sense of smell is also much stronger than a normal humans, and their hearing is aided by vibrations carried through the air and ground. A less noticeable trait is that their tactile senses are largely increased, which can both prove a major hindrance when wounded or a large blessing.

Clan Symbol: Kuchinawa Paksennarion Bswirl

Clan History: The Kuchinawa Clan is an old and long mistrusted and/or feared Clan. Renowned for their high-handed ways, and disregard for even their own members wellbeing or lives, they are perhaps rightly feared and reviled. Long ago, they resided within Konohagakure. However, their cruelty, and ambitious goals soon caused them to be exiled.

From that point on, the Kuchinawa Clan wandered. They could find no Village that would accept them, either for fear of retribution from Konoha or from disdain of their ways. That was, until they went to Sunagakure. Once there, the Clan head met with the Kazekage, promising that if they were given a home with no judgment on their ways and respectable power in the Village, they would provide Suna with a strong kekkei genkei. Every child born after that day became a shinobi, no matter their aptitude or wishes. And with that pact, they sealed their placement as one of the more prominent Suna Clans.

Rank Information:
Rank: Genin
Village: Sunagakure

Skill Information:
Skill Specialty: Ninjutsu, Taijutsu
Main: Ninjutsu
Sub: Taijutsu

Elemental Affinity:
Main: Raiton
Sub: -

Special Characteristics: Paks is extremely acrobatic and flexible, and she has trained primarily her speed and agility over other things. As well she has a good knowledge of anatomy and a working knowledge of plants and herbs and their effects. Her skill with senbon is much higher than her skill with any other weapon.

Items/Weapons:
Name: Kinubari Senbon
Appearance: These senbon are specially crafted out of a precious metal which absorbs light instead of reflecting it. They are made to be thinner than normal senbon and thus much harder to spot, since light doesn’t bounce off of them this makes them extremely more subtle than normal senbon. They are lighter than normal senbon also. These senbon are hard to use. Only someone who intimately knew senbon would be able to successfully employ them. They are lighter and thinner which makes them weaker than normal senbon, thus they do notably less damage.
Rank: C
Special Abilities: These senbon are almost exactly the same as normal senbon, the only special thing about then is that they do not send off light like normal weapons. They can be slightly faster too, but that depends on the users skill.
Origin: Kinubari Senbon are senbon that were specially made for Paks in the fashion of her Clan tradition, in order to better equip her for her particular style of fighting. Her mastery of these senbon was a show of skill, and somewhat like a coming of age. Showing that she was skilled enough to begin working as a Shinobi in the world.

Jutsus:

Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu, "Body Replacement Technique"
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: -
Description: This jutsu lets the user quickly switch places with another nearby object, such as a plant (normally a section of a log), an animal, or even another person within reach, leaving the opponent open to a counter-attack. Explosive tags can be attached to the replacement for an added surprise. Fundamentally, all ninja know this technique.

Name: Bunshin no Jutsu
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: -
Description: This technique creates intangible clones of the user. The clones are simply illusions and will dissipate when they come into contact with something. The illusions can be seen through by the Byakugan and the Sharingan. A person with normal eyes can also distinguish the clones from the original, since the clones will not disrupt the area around themselves with their movement (won't kick up dust, crush grass, etc.).

Name: Seimai Manako (Narrow Eye)
Rank: D
Type: Clan Ninjutsu
Element: -
Description: A basic intimidation skill, Seimai Manako can vary in effect depending on the users skill level. It costs no chakra, because it is basically a calculated and released burst of killer intent along with a practiced facial expression; normally a glare. At most it can cause a paralyzing fear, or even cause someone to run away, and at least it will draw someone’s attention to the user.

Name: Hebi Joukei (Snake Sight)
Rank: D
Type: Clan Ninjutsu
Element: -
Description: Part of the bond between Kuchinawa member and nin-snake is that they can link themselves with the other for a short while. While linked, the user is able to see what they see, hear what they hear, basically experience everything they experience. The range for this technique is 50 meters.

Name: Shinku Dougu (Crimson Tool)
Rank: D
Type: Clan Ninjutsu
Element: -
Description: Using just a bit of blood and no seals, a Clans member can form a small makeshift tool. Perhaps a lockpick, or a senbon or a small razor blade. The shape generally cannot be too elaborate, unless lots of attention is put into it.

Name: Shin-dashin no Jutsu (New Approaching Technique)
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: -
Description: This jutsu envelops a target in a puff of smoke and drags them to the user's location. When Ino used it on Naruto Uzumaki, she only dragged him a few feet.

Name: Raikou Sensu - Thunder style
Rank: C
Type: Taijutsu
Element: Raiton
Description: Raikou Sensu is a kata that incorporates the user’s own fighting style making it somewhat more efficient. It will focus on manipulation of the lightning element. Extending lightning chakra from the users fingers or hands in a thread like strings. The lightning can then stun or cut an opponent causing harm which will depend entirely on the amount of hits administered. The sudden release of the lightning chakra makes it very formidable, as it lashes out as if it were lightning striking down. Which is very fast. Raikou senseu doesn’t necessarily need precise movements, but it is useful. In cases where the user is striking out at pressure points on the body.

Name: Ritoru Fuu - Little Seal
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: -
Description: Ritoru Fuu is a jutsu created by Paks for necessity. Using this jutsu, Paks will seal items into small trinkets. She cannot seal anything large, but small items like bandages or books or clothing etc. can be easily sealed. She can unseal them with a touch of chakra, and this way she won’t have to carry many of the items she would find useful to have at a later date.

Background Information: Paks grew up in Sunagakure. Her earliest memories are of her father talking to her about the proper way to throw a kunai. She grew up in a flurry of training, all aimed at being a proper shinobi. There was never any other choice, she couldn't imagine wanting to be anything but. Paks didn't find anything out of the ordinary with the fact that while she read books about wars other children her age were making friends and playing. Both her parents were shinobi, and were frequently away on missions. But Paks was used to their absences and went on with learning all she could about the art of the shinobi.

Eventually, when her skill was deemed appropriate for one from the Kuchinawa Clan, Paks’ father finalized her training. Instead of sending her to the Academy to be trained he held her back at the Clan compound, training her as a proper Clan member should be trained. It was a great honor for Paks as she had struggled to maintain the high standard that had been expected of her.

Her training consisted of the normal skills, along with a higher focus on the Clan skills and expectations. Because she was not attending the Academy, Paks was relatively isolated from her peers, surrounded by only the influence of her Clan. Thus she had no friends or even acquaintances, and she didn’t know enough to mourn the absence.

When she was eight, it was decided that her skill was adequate enough. At the time, the Elders of the Clan were trying to get as many Kuchinawa members into active duty as they could, and so Paks was pushed to take the exam at the Sunagakure Academy perhaps earlier than she should have. Paks of course could not refuse and so she stepped outside of her bubble and took this exam, rather annoyed with the show of skill that the Academy Students so much older than her put out. In the end she passed the test with top scores, fulfilling her obligation to her Clan.


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PostSubject: Re: Kuchinawa Paksennarion   Kuchinawa Paksennarion EmptyMon Aug 24, 2009 12:03 am

RP Sample: (I know, it says brief... But, I'm not very good at brief, and this was the only sample I could find quickly.)
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PostSubject: Re: Kuchinawa Paksennarion   Kuchinawa Paksennarion EmptyMon Aug 24, 2009 5:59 pm

Bump.

I apologize sincerely for doing this. It's rude and perhaps unneeded, but I really really want to start role playing on this site, so I will use any and all tactics to further myself in that area. XP
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PostSubject: Re: Kuchinawa Paksennarion   Kuchinawa Paksennarion EmptyMon Aug 24, 2009 9:03 pm

Quote :

Name: Seimai Manako (Narrow Eye)
Rank: D
Type: Clan Ninjutsu
Element: -
Description: A basic intimidation skill, Seimai Manako can vary in effect depending on the users skill level. It costs no chakra, because it is basically a calculated and released burst of killer intent along with a practiced facial expression; normally a glare. At most it can cause a paralyzing fear, or even cause someone to run away, and at least it will draw someone’s attention to the user.
-Sounds like a high level Genjutsu, even if you are making your eyes scary. If it causes paralyzes and immense fear then it should be B+ Rank.

Quote :
Name: Kugutsu no Jutsu - Puppetry Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: -
Description: This jutsu uses strings of chakra from the user's fingers to control puppets like marionettes. Apart from being used to control marionettes, the chakra strings can be attached to other objects, allowing the user to control, or at the very least disrupt, other things. In one instance, Kankuro uses chakra strings to trip Naruto Uzumaki when they first meet.
-Please Remove. Puppetry isn't one of your specialties.
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Name: Hebi Joukei (Snake Sight)
Rank: D
Type: Clan Ninjutsu
Element: -
Description: Part of the bond between Kuchinawa member and nin-snake is that they can link themselves with the other for a short while. While linked, the user is able to see what they see, hear what they hear, basically experience everything they experience.
-Please include a range of how far your snake has to be in order for this to work.
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Name: Shin-dashin no Jutsu (New Approaching Technique)
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: -
Description: This jutsu envelops a target in a puff of smoke and drags them to the user's location. When Ino used it on Naruto Uzumaki, she only dragged him a few feet.
-Explain this in more detail.

Quote :
Name: Raikou Sensu - Thunder style
Rank: C
Type: Taijutsu
Element: Raiton
Description: Raikou Sensu is a kata that incorporates the user’s own fighting style making it somewhat more efficient. It will focus on manipulation of the lightning element. Extending lightning chakra from the users fingers or hands in a thread like strings. The lightning can then stun or cut an opponent causing harm which will depend entirely on the amount of hits administered. The sudden release of the lightning chakra makes it very formidable, as it lashes out as if it were lightning striking down. Which is very fast. Raikou senseu doesn’t necessarily need precise movements, but it is useful. In cases where the user is striking out at pressure points on the body.
-Taijutsu isn't one of your specialties please remove.

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Name: Ritoru Fuu - Little Seal
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu/Fuuinjutsu
Element: -
Description: Ritoru Fuu is a jutsu created by Paks for necessity. Using this jutsu, Paks will seal items into small trinkets. She cannot seal anything large, but small items like bandages or books or clothing etc. can be easily sealed. She can unseal them with a touch of chakra, and this way she won’t have to carry many of the items she would find useful to have at a later date.
-I dont think this is needed, all you need is to add scrolls to your arsenal. Even if so just keep it as Ninjutsu.

Is that RP sample yours or someone else's?
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PostSubject: Re: Kuchinawa Paksennarion   Kuchinawa Paksennarion EmptyMon Aug 24, 2009 9:23 pm

Ah... If I listed an RP sample doesn't that imply it is mine?

Seimai Manako is a variation of the canon jutsu Kanashibari no Jutsu which is also a D rank. And I would like to note that Seimai Manako does at most a paralyzing fear, and that the strength of the jutsu depends on the users skill. Meaning that most people wouldn't be able to achieve the effect of paralyzing fear, especially considering that this character is a Genin.

Leafninja.com wrote:
Kanashibari no Jutsu - Temporary Body Paralysis Technique
Rank: D
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m)
Type: Supplementary

Kanashibari no Jutsu is an advanced Ninjutsu technique used to temporarily bind an individual or animal. With the person frozen in place, the ninja can either take the opportunity to attack or to retreat.

I have removed Kugutsu no Jutsu, I'm sorry, I wasn't aware that this site restricted the users jutsu to those that they had a specialty for. I've substituted it for another jutsu:

Paksennarion wrote:
Name: Shinku Dougu (Crimson Tool)
Rank: D
Type: Clan Ninjutsu
Element: -
Description: Using just a bit of blood and no seals, a Clans member can form a small makeshift tool. Perhaps a lockpick, or a senbon or a small razor blade. The shape generally cannot be too elaborate, unless lots of attention is put into it.

I've added a range to Hebi Joukai.

Shin-dashin no Jutsu is a canon jutsu, so I can't really add any more description. That's all that it says. Basically, the jutsu envelopes the victim in smoke and drags them towards them.

I've swapped my sub specialty from weaponry to Taijutsu so as to allow the Taijutsu technique.

Ritoru Fuu has been changed to Ninjutsu.

Thank you very much for looking at my application, I'm sorry for the issues, please bear with me.
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PostSubject: Re: Kuchinawa Paksennarion   Kuchinawa Paksennarion EmptyTue Aug 25, 2009 8:53 am

This looks very nice... But It's a bit complex. If no other mods have a problem, I'll approve this.
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PostSubject: Re: Kuchinawa Paksennarion   Kuchinawa Paksennarion EmptyTue Aug 25, 2009 2:27 pm

Because I'm willful like this, I will take that to mean that I can RP unless someone says otherwise. In which case, people can just delete teh posts. XP

Thanks Pat-san!
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PostSubject: Re: Kuchinawa Paksennarion   Kuchinawa Paksennarion EmptyTue Aug 25, 2009 3:05 pm

I don't seem to have a problem with this. If Pat's happy with it, then so am I.

Approved.
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PostSubject: Re: Kuchinawa Paksennarion   Kuchinawa Paksennarion EmptyThu Sep 10, 2009 10:09 pm

Name: Ninja Wire
Appearance:
Spoiler:
This ninja wire is made from a special metal which absorbs light, and thus it does not glint. It is also thinner than regular ninja wire, with razor sharp edges.
Rank: C
Special Abilities: This ninja wire is resistant to katon chakra as well as fuuton chakra, and it is especially conductive towards raiton chakra.
Origin: Paks had this ninja wire created using the same metal as her Kinubari Senbon. After coming up with the general concept for them she commissioned the wire from a well-known blacksmith who works for shinobi.

Name: Blast Balls
Appearance: These are small balls filled with concentrated explosive powder that function as explosive tags, however they function with twice the strength. If moisture touches them before they explode they turn into duds.
Rank: D
Special Abilities: -
Origin: Paks bought these weapons soon after becoming a Genin, after seeing another shinobi use a violent explosion during a spar to sneak behind their opponent and incapacitate them.

Name: Fumei Yuge (Obscuring Vapor)
Appearance: Fumei Yuge is a small cloth ball that is filled with a particular blend of herbs. When the user adds a small bit of chakra to the mix, the ball explodes into an airborne vapor which acts like a smoke bomb in that it obscures vision (Excluding Doujutsu) and neutralizes any sense of smell due to the cloying fumes from the herbs.
Rank: C
Special Abilities: -
Origin: Fumei Yuge is one of Paks' experiments. While working with her herb garden, she found a few plants which seemed to dillute her sense of smell whenever she was near them. After some tests, she found a perfect mixture of plants which would work together to effect the enemy as an improved smoke screen.

Name: Futsuriai Yuge (Unbalancing Vapor)
Appearance: Futsuriai Yuge is a small ball similar to the ones used to contain smoke bombs. When it is thrown with sufficient force or crushed, the ball will break open and a pale purple poisonous miasma will envelope the area. This poison can enter the body either by being breathed in, or by fetching onto open wounds. Once inside it will cause vertigo and a loss of balance, disorientating the victim.
Rank: C
Special Abilities: -
Origin: Futsuriai Yuge is a poison fashioned out of several potent herbs that Paks grows. If treated appropriately, after drying them she is able to turn them into a vapor and contain them in small balls so that she can use them in battle.

Name: Nagaredasu Ketsueki (Pouring Blood)
Appearance: Nagaredasu Ketsueki is a small ball similar to those used to contain smoke bombs. Inside of the ball is a light, pinkish colored gas. When dispersed, this gas floats in the air unmoving, almost like a dense fog bank, however it does not effect visibility. This poison effects open wounds, stopping them from clotting and even encouraging the wound to bleed much more profusely. Even if a medic-nin were to attempt to heal the wound, the blood will continue to seep from the person's pores where the wound had been until it is purged. If breathed in, the poison has the same effect, not allowing injuries to clot. If the victim isn't injured when they breath it in, the poison can stay dormant inside the bloodstream for up to half a day.
Rank: C
Special Abilities: Nagaredasu Ketsueki is resistant to wind, and seems almost stationary once dispersed.
Origin: Paks created Nagaredasu Ketsueki after an interesting day of training where she continuously pushed herself to see where her blood loss limits were. Finding that blood loss could have some rather severe repercussions she decided to see if she couldn't recreate the situation with a poison. Upon failing that she instead tried to see if she could enhance blood loss, and thus created this. It is made using several different types of plants along with some ingredients from a few animals.
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