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PostSubject: The name's hero   The name's hero EmptyMon Aug 10, 2009 3:24 am

Name:Herocou Minzaku (hero 4 short)

Age:13

Gender:Male

Looks:.The name's hero Heroco11 Has a blue jacket with an orange short sleeved shirt .On both sleeves of the the jacket is an orange and red uchiha symbol coverd with a white leaf village symbol(same as back of the shirt).Has blue and orange sweats that has the e.Has blue sandals and white sacks on as well.He also has three strikes on his face that look like whiskers but are not whiskers because it's attached to his skin.Usually carries a 2 meter long thin katana on his back.

Personalty:
Herocou is one of the most stubborn,loud mouth, trash talkers ever.But... he is also one of the most bravest,courageous,stronghearted people ever. When he see someone in trouble, he does everything in his power to help them no matter wat the risk.A big part of his personalty is his agressiveness. He loves challenges and he loves when he fails (besides exams)so he can try again, and again, and again.

With this aggressivness,courage,bravery,and smarts herocou gains an ego.He is always talking about him self thinkin he's the best. Lastly hero does have a calm side.When he's relaxing with his friends and in beautiful paradise eating cheeseburgers(his fav food)he calms down and shows that"i'm a nice guy "attitude.Why do i have to tell u more about him when you can find out yourself.

Personality Trait's:He is crazy about his word.When he vows he sticks to it.He hates people thinking people are better than him or them.


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PostSubject: Re: The name's hero   The name's hero EmptyWed Aug 12, 2009 12:01 pm

Uchiha is closed. Even if this is a decendant of uchiha, it still counts ^_^

as for history, it needs to be in arcs like Birth, childhood, academy, genin. Each need to be a solid 2 paragraphs, except for genin.

You cannot have a sword without kenjutsu specialty.

You'd need shadow clone technique to use demon wind bomb. Shadow clone is B rank, and you may not have it, as such.

you're special characterisitcs are too vague explain better or remove.
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PostSubject: Re: The name's hero   The name's hero EmptyWed Aug 12, 2009 12:59 pm

Rank Info:
Rank: Genin
Village:Sand village

Skill info:
Skill specialty:Ninjutsu, and weaponry
Speacial characteristic:
Main:Ninjutsu
Sub:fuuinjutsu

Elemental affinity:Wind
Main:Fire
Sub:Wind

Special chracteristics:Can change apperance into a canine

Items/Weapons:
Katana
Looks:It look like this. http://www.rsw.com.hk/katana-full.jpg
Special:The katana can ignite on fire at will. This will cause a lot more damage with jutsu (espicially wind)
Origin.Hero was on his way home when suddenly some sand got in to his eye.Hero yelped and was falling back toward a small cliff.Hero fell off the cliff and was unconcious for half and hour.Once hero awoke Hero saw a something in the distance.It was falling from the sky. It then landed and hero ran toward it.It was a KATANA.Smoke just finished coming from the sword and hero then picked it up.He went home with the sword( ot saying a word) and let go of the sword.It got on fire."AAAA!"Hero yelled. Hero got a bucket of water and poued it on th sword but it was no use, the flames would not go out.Hero finally relized the flames did not spread. it just remained on the sword.Hero picked it up and the flames stopped.He put it back down and it started again.Hero picked it up said"OOOOOOOOO."Hero put it in a sword case he kept for when he just got a sword. and then he put the case on his back."Sweeet."Hero tought and he imagined what he was gonna do with the sword.

Jutsu List

[summon]
Name: The kitsunabi contract

Physical Description: The name's hero How-to10.Kitsunabi is a golden coyote about feet tall and has three tails.Kitsunabi also has a three blue tattoos on it's face.He's about 5'7.It's taile are golden to but the tip is lighter.
Rank:C
Type of Summon: blood donation
Species: coyote
Story: Story: The person who raised herocou taught him this technique.A few weeks before his death he taught hero this technique in the traning area.It took hero hours to summon it but he did.The canine was surprised to see a little boy to summon him."His power is just like...that other guy".The coyote asked him how he knew about the canine and the ninja said his god brother knew you so he snook up on him traning.The canine then attempted to eat the nice ninja because he thought he knew to much, but Hero stood in front of him making the canine stop in it's tracks."Who are you kid" The canine asked hero."I'm the person who summoned you."Hero responded."And I won't have you doing this to my friend."The two stared at each other seriously for about 30 seconds and then the coyote said."Alright fine...but i make the rules around here you got that."The coyote said looking up at the to determined ninja."Snot nosed brat...he has alot of guts standing up to me"The canine thought."Fine with me.Fine with you?"Hero asked the ninja.When Hero turned around he noticed the ninja had fainted.Hero and the canine started laughing and they both knew this was the beginning of something beautiful.

Elemental Affinity: Fire
Clan: No.(It just makes hero have the looks of a coyote.(in clan info)
Summons:http://www.dragoart.com/tuts/309/1/1/how-to-draw-a-kitsune.htm.



Jutsu list:

Jutsu name:coyote bark
Type:ninjutsu
Rank:c
Description:The coyote barks out balls of fire and the balls are 5 feet tall.Usually barks out 3 but it's limit is five.Once hits opponent the opponent flys backward until hitting an object.

Jutsu name:coyote nest
Type:ninjutsu
Rank:d
Description:Creates a circle of fire around opponent while running around him or her.Once circle is created the blazing fire goes to about 20 feet high.This technique is perfect to corner an opponent.

Jutsu Name: Talk
Type:ninjutsu
Rank:e
Description:Has the abilty to talk to humans

Jutsu name:Transformation
Type:ninjutsu
rank:e
Description:Can turn shape and form to look like other objects or living things (even human).


[my jutsu]
Name: Fire Release: Phoenix Immortal Fire Technique
type:Ninjutsu
Rank:C
Type:Fire
This jutsu sends multiple balls of fire at a target. It is also possible to hide shuriken within the fireballs, creating an unexpected secondary surprise attack. For the most part, however, this jutsu is used as a distraction.

Name: Body flicker technique
Type:ninjutsu
Rank: D
Type:Wind
This jutsu is a high-speed movement technique, allowing a ninja to move short to long distances at an almost untraceable speed. To an observer, it appears as if the user has teleported.

Jutsu name:Fire Release Ninja Art: Running Fire
Type:ninjutsu
Rank:C
Type:Fire
This jutsu will create jets of fire that can be manipulated into several forms (so far, rings of fire or a circle of fire) before striking the target. It can also be used in combination with Wind Release: Godly Wind from the Mountains to create a tornado of flames.The user does a couple hand signs then blow fire circling opponent.

Name:Small fire stream
Type:ninjutsu
Rank:C
Type:Fire
Desription:Hero releases a small short ranged stream of flame at the opponent, causing them to collapse and get burned..This move requires no hand seal.Reaches only to 4 yards.

Name:godly wind from the mountain
Type:ninjutsu
Rank:C
Type:Fire
Description:This technique creates a vortex of wind to blast at a target.This jutsu is mainly either to knock a person off balance or to block an attack.The user of this attack does a few handsigns. spin their arms infront of them (creating vortex)then pushes vortex away.

Styles:Name:none
Type: none
Rank: none
Element: wind
Description:none

History:When herocou was born both of his Hero's uncle died .Nobody knows why he just did.So he grew up a screw up and got in to a lot of mischeif.Right when herocou was bout to do somtihng extreme a sand ninja stopped him in his tracks and convinced him not to paint the whole village black.That is when herocou grew a bond with this guy. The ninja gave herocou the nick name "dragon of the sand" because herocou always said he was "hot stuff" and herocou was always in that "go with the flow mood".One day not only did that ninja die his whole clan died. That ninja was killed by a ninja of his on kind till this day herocou searches for the killer and gets closer every day.With a little help at least.

Pre academy.
The first day of pre academy herocou was very nervous.All these other kids were so different than the area he grew up in.Once they went inside the school they all sat down in assigned seats."Herocou Minzaku ..."Sensei said. "Here "Herocou replied. "Alright you sit in the first row next to shiko and kairai" I walked over to these 2 kids hero never seen in my life. I sat down and class had begun."Alright students today we're gonna start off with..."my sensei voice faded out. "Hi i'm shiko."The kid on my right said.Hero looked for the person he was talkin to but couldn't find him"Are you talkin to me?'Hero asked him.Shiko laughed. From that day on i knew he would be something very important to me.Hero and him were friends ever since.

Pre academy.
The first day of pre academy herocou was very nervous.All these other kids were so different than the area he grew up in.Once they went inside the school they all sat down in assigned seats."Herocou hirameki ..."Sensei said. "Here "Herocou replied. "Alright you sit in the first row next to shiko and kairai" I walked over to these 2 kids hero never seen in my life.

I sat down and class had begun."Alright students today we're gonna start off with..."my sensei voice faded out. "Hi i'm shiko."The kid on my right said.Hero looked for the person he was talkin to but couldn't find him"Are you talkin to me?'Hero asked him.Shiko laughed. From that day on i knew he would be something very important to me.Hero and him were friends ever since.


Academy:
Herocou and Shiko walked into the school as acdemy students which was really surprising to herocou and shiko. They both knew hero would pass(he got all a+ on my report card.)Shiko did not.He got some b's the rest wre c's and maybe d's.So now he would be more focused on school work(he says).Herocou grew closer and closer to shiko the more he was with him.Hero found out that shiko didn't have any parents just like me. So now with new seats in our classes (me and shiko still next to each other) we began to talk.

Shiko passed me a note saying"do u thing we should have another recruit lol."Hero thought about it.This whole time Hero and shiko were together.This is also where hero meet him.I whispered back"sure".After a hard day at work looking for a new friend at school Hero and shiko saw kairai boushi. Hero and Shiko both had the same look in our eyes.He was perfect.He had a really good talent with building stuff(plus he let shiko borrow his homework sometimes)He was perfect.When we walked over to him he smiled.Then we all smiled.Hero,shiko and kairai all walked home that day and ended it with laughter.

Genin:Hero inhaled."Aaaaaaaaah."Hero stood on his patio looking outside at the people of the sand village."These people...don't deserve war!"Hero slamed his fist on patio."I will become kazekage!"Hero said.Hero heard a knock on his door."Are you still taking to your self."Hero's friend Sheekoe asked him.Hero looked back at his door and chuckeled."Maybe."Hero laughed.Hero put on his orange shirt,blue and orang pants and blue and orange jacket, slipped on his sandals and went to spend a day with his pal.

Rp sample
The deep black eyes belonging to the genin blinked a few times. His gaze was directed above, straight into the blue sky. Staring out into the endless space as the brisk morning air softly blew his black hair slightly to the side, in his mouth perched a tooth pick that leaned slight to the side. The genin slowly moved his tounge around the end of the tooth pick from the inside of his mouth, he felt the sharpness of the end as he took a deep breath in and out his nose. Everything was so.... Peaceful. The looming gray clouds from the night before had turned into white puffy ones that hung in the sky ever so softly. The relaxed hirameki slowly sat up and looked around, nothing was there to disturb him.

This was Herocou's normal life ever since he had became an genin , just relaxing and training, day in and day out. His days could be predicted just like the sun rising and setting, nothing really too interesting could be found in the young students life. But most children at the age of 13 have a similar life, so he didn't really want to ask for much more, since it was obvious he had it luck as is.

A slow drip landed on the bridge of Hero's nose, he slowly tilted his head upwards and looked into the sky. Drip after drip came down on him through the tree overhead, it was clear that it was raining, or drizzling or whatever you would like to call it. The lonely genin slowly paced back to his home, at least a two mile walk at best. Hero hated the rain. Being a fire element and all, he had grown hatred toward rain and other forms of precipitation. It wasn't very common to get rain in the sand village, so those who didn't like it were very annoyed.

After a few minutes of walking Hero's spiky hair was down on his face, covering parts of his eyes. He attempted to flick it away multiple times, but to no avail. Hero let out a slow yawn, his feet casualy kicked up small amounts of water as he walked. The soft pitter patter of the rain hitting to local shops created a rhythm with the students's foot steps, as he walked home everything made a certain music..... Everything was perfect(sarcasim)..


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PostSubject: Re: The name's hero   The name's hero EmptyWed Aug 12, 2009 12:59 pm

ready
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PostSubject: Re: The name's hero   The name's hero EmptyThu Aug 13, 2009 1:44 am

You still have the sharingan, which you cannot have unless your a Uchiha, which you cannot become because it is closed.
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PostSubject: Re: The name's hero   The name's hero EmptyThu Aug 13, 2009 1:51 am

No i have chidoku. it's in the sand village. and we came from hyuuga not sharinga.PLEASE UNDERSTAND.I JUST LEFT INGOO BUT I REALY LOVED MY CHRACTER.I'M TRYING NOT TO CHANGE IT PLZ UNDERSTAND.
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PostSubject: Re: The name's hero   The name's hero EmptyThu Aug 13, 2009 1:52 am

I understand, but changing the name doesn't make it not the Sharigan. It's still the sharigan with a different name. Sorry Hero.
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PostSubject: Re: The name's hero   The name's hero EmptyThu Aug 13, 2009 1:54 am

Yeahp.
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PostSubject: Re: The name's hero   The name's hero EmptyThu Aug 13, 2009 2:35 am

k what about now
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PostSubject: Re: The name's hero   The name's hero EmptyThu Aug 13, 2009 2:45 am

Can change apperance into a canine - you could pull this off with a transformation technique, not a special characteristic.

Many of your jutsu will need alot more description.
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PostSubject: Re: The name's hero   The name's hero EmptyThu Aug 13, 2009 2:49 am

actually wtf lash i did noy come up with this idea.is on custom clans.
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PostSubject: Re: The name's hero   The name's hero EmptyThu Aug 13, 2009 3:02 am

i edited
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PostSubject: Re: The name's hero   The name's hero EmptyThu Aug 13, 2009 3:43 am

You'll have to have Pat check the Summons because im not sure how they work here either..
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PostSubject: Re: The name's hero   The name's hero EmptyThu Aug 13, 2009 4:09 am

ok ill go ask
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PostSubject: Re: The name's hero   The name's hero EmptySat Aug 15, 2009 10:38 pm

put the summon in your app.
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PostSubject: Re: The name's hero   The name's hero EmptySat Aug 15, 2009 10:41 pm

i did
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PostSubject: Re: The name's hero   The name's hero EmptySat Aug 15, 2009 10:46 pm

read the summoning guide for jutsu allowances for summons.
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PostSubject: Re: The name's hero   The name's hero EmptySat Aug 15, 2009 11:30 pm

im done
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PostSubject: Re: The name's hero   The name's hero EmptySun Aug 16, 2009 12:07 am

2 paragraph looks if you don't have a picture.

where is your jutsu?
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PostSubject: Re: The name's hero   The name's hero EmptySun Aug 16, 2009 12:11 am

jutsu is below summoning. and is labled [my jutsu]
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PostSubject: Re: The name's hero   The name's hero EmptySun Aug 16, 2009 12:30 am

my avatar is my pic ture. 4 som reason my computer isnt letting me put avatar in post. plus thiis way. when people are rpin with me they get a more clear picture in their head. so am i good...
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PostSubject: Re: The name's hero   The name's hero EmptySun Aug 16, 2009 2:22 am

Hmm.. though a bit unorganized, it is a complete app... consider it approved unless otherwise noted.
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