Bukaidou Clan (Pending)

Clan Name: Bukaidou Clan

Kekkei Genkai: Saketeshi - The bloodlines of the Bukaidou Clan have discovered their power to control gravity, but it is hard for them to inherit their kekkei genkai that easy..They have to train hard to acquire that kind of power..But for the 4 shinobis, It is easy for them to use it..Saketeshi is also an eye if used..It is like a five-star shuriken and it is colored white.

Secret Clan Jutsu:
Name: Saketeshi: Taro Sanbun (Eclipse)

Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu

Element: N/A

Description: The most important jutsu of Bukaidou Clan..If they do not have this jutsu.. They will be considered as a ninja with no clan..It makes the gravity light and feels like a ninja in space..They control gravity by controlling chakra in their veins..but this jutsu costs a lot of chakra to control gravity..As the chakra flows they become weak after they used this jutsu..This jutsu takes years before it can be mastered..It is possible for them to use this jutsu because their chakra was pure space-like and they can balance the gravity..However this only works for a short period of time only.

Clan: Bukaidou Clan

History: Bukaidou Clan was formed by a family of shinobi that likes to travel throughout space..So they formed Bukaidou Clan meaning Space Nomads..The four shinobi formed this clan was named: Ayame Bukaidou,Mitsu Bukaidou,Sakeri Bukaidou (the one who formed Saketeshi) and Sanmu Bukaidou (the one who discovered Saketeshi: Taro Sanbun as their important and starter jutsu of each Bukaidous)..They decided to travel to space and identify gravity..So these 4 shinobis became the Masters of Gravity..and they are able to cast Saketeshi: Taro Sanbun without spilling any chakra and they don't become weak after they use it because those 4 shinobis are experts from space and anatomy.

I'm afraid you're going to need a lot more detail in all things. The kekkei genkai needs to be better explained, and the secret clan jutsu needs to be put into the correct jutsu template and put in better detail (How do they control Gravity, what limitations does it have?)
Also, Please lengthen the history, more details on how it was formed, conflicts, just more detail in general.
I do like the concept....but I could see it being Oped. even when you fix all these, I can't approve it unless Adam or Matthew allows this KG.

KG? Err.. I'll fix it up.

Well, It would not be a genjutsu, change it to Ninjutsu please. also, go into greater detail about how it controls gravity, I.e, to what extent it can be controlled, and how it is possible.

Edited it.

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Description: The most important jutsu of Bukaidou Clan..If they do not have this jutsu.. They will be considered as a ninja with no clan..It makes the gravity light and feels like a ninja in space..They control gravity by controlling chakra in their veins..but this jutsu costs a lot of chakra to control gravity..As the chakra flows they become weak after they used this jutsu..This jutsu takes years before it can be mastered..It is possible for them to use this jutsu because their chakra was pure space-like and they can balance the gravity..However this only works for a short period of time only.

Hmm, sounds alright, except chakra doesnt flow through veins XD.
Well, I want to see some more detail in the history. Explain how they became masters of gravity, hell, explain how they learned to manipulate it. Explain how it's possible that they travel through space, etc.