pet wolves [WIP]

Name: Zeinzu

Nickname: Yan Bureddo

Species: Wolf

Looks: A bloody thirsty killer when its time to fight. Has very long ears so he can hear about a mile away. Zeinzu has acid that drips from his mouth but takes five minutes for the effect to work on opponent.

Personality: He is a loner who loves to fight and doesnt really like to be around alot of people. Zeinzu isnt loyol to anybody unless they earn his respect. Admires the smartest, bravest, and strongest of warriors. Always in a very calm state till it's time to fight seriously.

Age: Dog years(2)

History: Zeinzu met Zaku in the forest right after he moved to the mist village. He hid in the shadows then watched Zaku training everday in that forest and saw alot of potential in him. After a year of training Zaku finally asked if they was going to come out and atleast train with him. Zeinzu ran out of the shadows with a killers instinct and attacked him. Zaku jumped back and smiled at the beast then cut him on his left eye.

Jutsu's:


Name: Toochusutairi Jatsu (torch style jutsu)
Rank: C-rank
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fire
Description:[b] The users body is sheilded by a coat of fire. If touched the opponent will be set on fire by the the thin coat of fire that surrounds him. This attack will last for about five minutes.

Name: Yanburedojatsu (yangblade jutsu)
Rank:B-rank
Type: Ninjutsu
Element:
Description:[b] The user turns there body into a black sword.

Name:Exploding wolf
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Resembling himself, the Akamaru replacement is actually a booby trap. Once an enemy is lured in thinking Zeinzu is injured, the replacement dog will explode and launch a hail of kunai in every direction.



Name: Enzeru

Nickname: Uin Bureddo

Species: Wolf

Looks: A kind hearted animal who always have a glow to her. May look like she is easily tricked but she can see threw most tricks. She has a gem on her head that gives her the power to cumminicate with all creatures and humans.

Personality: This wolf thinks of every step before it even takes one step. She is able to talk to humans and speak to all types of animals. Uin makes shore she gets all the info she can on all her opponents before the battle begins.

Age: Dog years(2)


History: Enzeru met Zaku in the forest right after she moved to the mist village. She hid in the shadows then watched Zaku training everday in that forest and saw alot of potential in him. After a year of training Zaku finally asked if they was going to come out and atleast train with him.


Jutsu's:

Name:Sutechikkujatsu(static jutsu)
Rank:C-rank
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: ligtning
Description:[b]. The users body is sheilded by a coat of lightning. If touched the opponent will be shocked by the the thin coat of lightning that surrounds him. This attack will last for about five minutes.

Name- Lightning Flash
Rank: C-rank
Type- Ninjutsu
Elements: Lightning Chakra
Description: creating a charge of lightning in the tail u can make a quick streak of lightning by doing a slashing movement with the tail cutting whatever is in the lightnings path

Name: Uinburedojatsu(yinblade jutsu)
Rank:B-rank
Type: ninjutsu
Element:
Description:[b].The user turns there body into a white sword

Name:Exploding wolf
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Resembling himself, the Akamaru replacement is actually a booby trap. Once an enemy is lured in thinking Enzeru is injured, the replacement dog will explode and launch a hail of kunai in every direction.

You need to remove or heavily modify fang over fang unless you plan on making your character an Inzuka. Everything else is fine

ok i removed it

I just noticed you have a A Rank tech for each Summon making them A Rank Summons. Since your Genin you wouldnt be able to summon them (limited to C Rank or lower). I am happy to approve them but you wont be able to use them yet as they stand. You also need an associate summoning contract and technique

Are these pets or summons? No if they are pets but if so they possess to high level Jutsu. A pet should always be the same rank as its owner

yes these are pets and i switched the jutsus up

first one looks cool

what about the second

You need to decide if these are pets or summons

and Helipocter32 DON'T post in app, you are not an admin or mod

these are my pets

I still see quite some problem on this app

The shield tech need to be more detailed, bacause right now they don't make much sense.

The sword tranformations: these are acceptable, but are in my opinion higher than a C-rank

The trap tech appears okay aswell, but please write the wolfs name instead of Akamaru.

ok its changed

Dog years 2? one human year is 7 dog years....
Torch style technique....People aren't flammable...Unless you body slammed them, they wouldn't simply burst into flames.
And what does the yangblade jutsu do? just turns it into a sword