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PostSubject: Ryouken Character Application (Needs attention)   Wed Dec 09, 2009 5:16 am

General Information
Name:
Konpaku Ryouken

Age:
10

Gender:
Male
Looks:
Ryouken is a young slender and short boy. Usually wears long sleeveless shirt and Baggy greyed pants with some tares in them. A black ribbon to tie back his long black hair that has grown out in length since a younger age. His physical body looks are somewhat weak and easily mislead. his stature which he's picked on for. Yet he works out to the extent that he carries no fat. His muscle span is small,yet lean. Skin tone is a light burned tan from staying about sunlight for long periods of time.

His Facial looks are smooth. Spotless from imperfections or cuts. His nose just slender and small as his lips,Pushed into a thin line. A smile is rarely seen but he's gentle dark red eye's speak for his intentions. He's usually seen wearing a long cloak or no shirt what so ever while he's going about for a jog early in the morning.His physical in hieght is small and deminor. Though his posture is strait and walks within a swift,slow or average pace in strait line.


Personality:
Ryouken is a soft and kind boy. Seeking many things through curiosity but never rude to others. Sometimes he could be out going.withdraws when it comes to personal pain or stress on his mind. He hides his darker and sad interior. a peppy and upbeat outward attitude is usually given. Though the reason not to lead others into thinking of him as a certain class of person.

Sometimes he would laugh. Some of the time he would cry. Some say he's mentally ill. His eye's always shaking from time to time. A nervous break down then amoments of silnce would pass.

Personality Trait's:
Ryouken centers around simplicity, finding a color full leaf on the ground; he would take in his hands and observe it for hours on end. Or get mesmerized by a cloud in the sky. He has an interest in all things he see's yet usually dies downward and finds something else to get interested in.

Catch Phrase:
Bleed with joy.

Clan Information

Clan Name:
Konpaku (Ghost)

Kekkei Genkai:
The Kekkei Genkai of the Konpaku Clan is the ability to become an illusion themselves, not physically distort but to cast a wide spread illusion to fool enemies and friend into thinking the illusions are real. This ability allows the Konpaku to relate with imagery and fantasy, or rather a wide assortment with illusions and trickery. And also to distort chakra over the Konpaku's skin, to manifest it into actually be seen by the naked eye. To manipulate it into an illusion to maybe a disfigurement to scare or repulse others. This also benefits the Clansmen with the ability to wield Genjutsu and multiple ways to deal harm or false bliss to an enemy or victim.


Clan Symbol:
The symbol of the Konpaku clan is rather unknown of nationality but resonates from a foreign country past the coasts of Japan.

Clan History:
The Konpaku, the "Ghost" clan. Ambling to Master Illusions and to find weakness in others. The origins of the clan are surrounded in mysteries and unknown. The abilities are kept a dark secret from others and only the Konpaku can relate to one another, though the clan is small in size their nationality spans across all villages. The clan isn't revolved around the Shinobi world rather then the entire world itself. Working in jobs that involve Illusionary capabilities, the Konpaku soon found their gifts in the shadows of Ninja through the arts of Genjutsu. Mastering the unreal and illusions to fool many into think one thing over another.

The clan soon settled down and took an easier reproach around the countries. Settling down to let go of their natural roots and powers to live different lives, others use their powers for evil deeds. To haunt and torment villages or certain individuals with terrifying images within their minds till they become insane, or break down to snivelling pile's of flesh.

The powers of Konpaku differentiate through clansmen, some carry the full power while other don't even get the closest amount to knowing how to set out a genjutsu. Not many even remember the name nor heard of it. As said, a clan of unknown that has been forgotten in history. Now this clan will be brought to light and its story, will slowly unravel.

Activation:
The form of the Konpaku is through a physical trait that is continously turning of the Konpaku's hair white. The color distinction between the young dark hair colors to white distinct the age and strength of the Clansmen. Also the Konpaku become more emotionless then others when going through the stages, there faces are seen as plain and unmoving of reactions other then the movements of the eye's.

Rank D: Genjutsu seem more open art to the Clansmen.White hair starts to appear at roots and the eye's of the Clansmen become more clear and darker.
Rank C: Genjutsu becomes a more facination to the Clansmen and is studying well into the strengths of Genjutsu. Giving aditional Resistence and Mastery of small portion towards Genjutsu.The white hair has past it's roots.(Starts with 5%)
Rank B: Genjutsu becomes clear and is a concept of combat for the Clansmen. Hair is fully whitened and eye's become empty,dark. Higher chances to Resist and Mastery of Genjutsu then former rank.(10%)
Rank A: Genjutsu Masters walk within Clansmen at this point. Eye's are empty, Hair has become pure translucent white. Clansmen walk about as if like Ghosts or specters. Soundless and calm.
Genjutsu seems easy concept to them no matter the power needed. (15%)

Secret Clan Jutsu:

Rippling World
Genjutsu
Rank: D
Element: N/A
Description:
Rippling World is a Bloodline jutsu that the Konpaku Ryouken created to disrupt one's site. Causing the victim to have troubled focus on any targets in their field of vision. Whatever objects they may see are disturbingly twisted in shape and blurred. Anything that moves causes heavy strain to watch and may run down the Victims endurance to prolong the fight. The illusion is a blinding light of chakra that hits the Victims eyes. Everything will appear bended and blurred while the Konpaku and the world around the victim is really just as plain as ever.

Vanishing Blade
Genjutsu
Rank: C
Element:N/A
Vanishing Blade is a genjutsu that is a combination towards the Rippling World jutsu. This Jutsu causes the wielders weapon to become unnoticeable to the victim till it is too late. The weapon would be coated with a mist of moving manifested chakra which causes the victim of Rippling World to see nothing of the actual weapon, as when the blade strikes it would seem as if it came out of thin air. Though once hit with the "invisible" weapon. The effects of Rippling World will wear off, due to the sudden shock and realization of pain and heavy bleeding from a crucial hit.

Mind Eater
Genjutsu
Rank: C
Element:N/A
Through deep Meditational training the Konpachi learns of how the mind works. The standard fears of man and how to weaken the victims he casts out to. This Jutsu allows the Konpaku to hit his victim’s mentally, weakening them into a false sense of security into thinking more along the lines of illusions then reality, making them an easier target for Genjutsu assaults. The victim has to make eye contact with the Konpaku to initialize the effects. the Victims will then see a horrible image of the Caster in some way that the caster wishes to be seen as. Either a vicious and horrifying monster. Or a lovely seductive woman coaxing the victim to come closer.

Burning void
Genjutsu
Rank: D
Element: Fire
Once the Konpaku has learned the arts of the mind and how to manipulate them he can focus on a certain sensation's that will cause bodily harm that only the victims mind will feel, rather then his or her body at first. Since the mind controls everything the body feel's, the illusion must trick the mind into thinking the body is actually going through this state of pain from what it see's,feel's,taste's,sound's and so on and so fourth. To target the victims the Konpaku has to get the victim to follow his finger as he points outwards. The Konpaku will make a statement that the victim is on fire, and the victim will soon see his or her clothing ablaze. All of this had to do with the concentration of the pointing and fooling the victim to make a contact look to the illusionist. While under the spell of the Burning Void, the victim will start out feeling rather heated, then the pain of first degree burns will run along the victim’s body, the pain will escalate to second and onward to third. Till the victim is racked with pain. Any physical attacks afterwards will cause additional burn status damage to the skin.

More Jutsu's will be unlocked with higher ranking of the Main Character of this clan.

Rank Information:
Rank:Genin
Village: Sunagakure

Skill Information

Skill Specialty:
Main:Genjutsu
Sub: Ninjutsu

Elemental Affinity:
Main: Fire
Sub: Wind

Special Characteristics:
Ryouken has an in-depth perception and understanding of Genjutsu and the illusions as he reads mostly through books to learn certain things as any student would. And in doing so, he has certain favouritism towards Genjutsu and its understandings. Making the learning process easier when confronting Genjutsu. Also his clan’s preference over Genjutsu gives him a deeper understanding of illusions and is harder to fall under them.



Background Information

Ryouken is son of a well known Blacksmith Father and a Shinobi Mother. Carrying on work for his parents he was grown up in a busy environment. Though his small stature is made up for his ever going curiosity about the world around him, Ryouken lived an easy and fun childhood. Till came the day his mother fell ill and could no longer support him. He had to learn the harshness of reality when his mother passed away on his eighth birthday. It was the hardest thing to endure, losing a mother so loving and kind to him. She was a Konoichi of the Uchiha clan. Not one of renowned rank but a kind women none the less and took care of her friends and comrades as well to her abilities of healing arts.
After his mother's death however, Ryouken began to fall downwards in a world ever changed to him, He became distant sometimes. Deep in thought, his eye's seemed cold and lost when he walked alone among the people of his village. In his eye's showed sign of the Konpaku's gifted eye sight capabilities. To see the undead. He had begun the process of a dark path in his mind. Swearing that he would become stronger.

He happened upon news of Academy Acceptances in the village square one day, and decided then and there on pure childish dreams to become a strong shinobi like his mother, if not better then her. So he prepared his training since then and somewhat before. Reading about the many arts of Shinobi’s dealings through his mother’s books and scrolls. He learned how to wield many weapons from his fathers cast and helping to craft his own blade. The Gaihinigai.
And so he entered as an Academy Student of Sunagakure's Hidden Sand Shinobi's. It was his first step to realizing his childish dream and destroying it. Though, who's to say that dream may still live, crumble to the darkest part of the mind of a child who bravely steps forward into the world of Ninja’s?

And so time had passed, lessons were learned and a life changed. Ryouken graduated from the Academy with a somewhat ease, thanks to his motivations he persevered through all his hardships and got to where he was with diligence. He was now ready to take on the role as a young Shinobi, to further his goals in a darker world.

He then learned about his powers through his training one evening, he was getting far better with Genjutsu techniques then most of the other graduates. And also something shocking to him, He saw his mother in his home the day he came home after graduated. She was sitting at the table alone. A beautiful smile on her face and acceptance in knowing what had become of her sons future.

He was so happy with delusions he ran over to her to embrace her. But rather, she disappeared when he touched her. She was gone, and he was in tears. Though he could hear her sing and hum to him. It comforted him and made him smile. She then spoke to him about their family, the Konpaku. The clan of mystical prowess. He smiled as he reaches out to her one last time. His hand could almost touch hers. But then it left him, he wasn’t strong enough yet so began his training under the sword and illusions. Creating what would seem the basis of all Konpaku Jutsu's and powers to knowledge.



RP Sample:

The sky was warm and the breeze was nice and chilled as Ryouken walked along the dirt path along the rows of clouds hanging over him, they were puffy white and shaped differently, he was simply fascinated by them. Their light white color made him remember of his dear mother, her soft and kind nature resembled deeply in these clouds. He took a simple breath and held it in as he walked and stared at them intently, he couldn’t help holding back a few tears which he wiped away with his left forearm and continued walking with a gentle hum as he stared off in the clouds.
"I hope your watching...Mother." He whispered with a smile on his lips, his hand holding onto nothing as he walked alone, as he headed home to get some studying done.


Last edited by Ryouken on Thu Jan 07, 2010 5:38 am; edited 10 times in total
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PostSubject: Re: Ryouken Character Application (Needs attention)   Thu Dec 10, 2009 4:29 am

Hello ^^
Do you have permission to create an Uchiha?
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PostSubject: Re: Ryouken Character Application (Needs attention)   Fri Dec 11, 2009 11:34 pm

Bumps
And I have no idea who I need to ask for permission?
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PostSubject: Re: Ryouken Character Application (Needs attention)   Fri Dec 11, 2009 11:56 pm

adam, the site admin, also konoha is closed.
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PostSubject: Re: Ryouken Character Application (Needs attention)   Sat Dec 12, 2009 10:32 pm

Edited.
Also asking for acceptance as an Uchiha
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PostSubject: Re: Ryouken Character Application (Needs attention)   Sat Dec 12, 2009 11:29 pm

Edited once again.
Losing Uchiha and creating own Clan, also will be posting Jutsu creations soon.
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PostSubject: Re: Ryouken Character Application (Needs attention)   Sat Dec 12, 2009 11:55 pm

Editing etheral capabilities and dropping them.
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PostSubject: Re: Ryouken Character Application (Needs attention)   Thu Dec 24, 2009 4:58 am

Clan has been edited to fit.
Waiting for charecter approval now.
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PostSubject: Re: Ryouken Character Application (Needs attention)   Sat Dec 26, 2009 7:31 am

you need 2 paragraphs for looks and personality.

You can only have C rank an below weapons. you have no jutsu?

Your kkg needs a jutsu in which you manifest it's ability and it has to have a varying rank.
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PostSubject: Re: Ryouken Character Application (Needs attention)   Sat Dec 26, 2009 7:41 am

How much of a paragraph are we talking about? A test book description of a paragraph is one or two sentences in length. I can not be more descriptive unless I fool with words on the sentence to make it more lengthy, as I am doing now with my writing. I'm merely just adding additional filler at best.

Weapon dropped

I have KKG jutsu's with Clan. I'll copy and past them from the Clan section which was approved. If this is nto what you meant, please PM me.
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PostSubject: Re: Ryouken Character Application (Needs attention)   Sun Jan 03, 2010 2:08 am

Has this been looked over yet?
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PostSubject: Re: Ryouken Character Application (Needs attention)   Wed Jan 06, 2010 11:47 pm

~ First, please add the correct template, since I don't know about other mods or admin but the lack of bold on important subjects stings my eyes to find different parts.
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PostSubject: Re: Ryouken Character Application (Needs attention)   Thu Jan 07, 2010 5:40 am

Done.
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