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Teh Suko
Sand Genin
 |  Subject: Suko Yabun Sat Dec 05, 2009 1:47 pm | |
| General Information
Name: Suko Yabun
Nickname/Alias: (S rank shinobi only, Please only give one or 2 nicknames. These names are to be implemented in RP as another name your known by. This is to be part of your 'legacy')
Age: 12
Gender: Female
Looks: The young girl stands at one hundred fifty-five centimeters and weighs only eighty-two pounds. Her hair is short, more like male style. Her silky brown hair makes bangs in the shape of a demon claw across her forehead. Suko's eyes match her hair, a dark brown. Most of the time, her facial expression shows how clueless she is when somebody is talking about her. Her style of clothing is rather awkward for a shinobi. It consists of a short-sleeved shirt, a tie, and long black pants. In cold weather, she wears a black jacket over her shirt. Her tie shows formality to the people around her, but when she is in a fight she takes off her tie and jacket if she so happens to wear it. In a "heat wave" of weather, she puts on black shorts instead of pants so she won't pass out. Like all ninja, she wears the casual sandals in a black color.
- Spoiler:
Best I could find of how she looks.
Personality: Suko is keenly intelligent and has excellent insight into the feelings of others, except when they have to do with her-- she tends to be clueless as to the growing feelings of nearly all of the shinobi around her. This ability allows her to help the others sort through the difficulties they have as each of them grows up and works out who they are and who they want to be. However, it does not extend to herself, as certain aspects of life leave Suko perplexed. Due to her father's unusual stance on matters of gender, Suko claims she has never really worried much about acting out a particular gender role. She is not particularly concerned with the matter and the hiding of her female-hood. To add on to all that, she is a down to earth girl and is a good listener to the people around her.
She likes ramen and biscuits and she has a severe phobia of thunder and lightning.
Personality Trait's: --
Catch Phrase: --
Clan Information
Clan Name: What is your clans name?
Kekkei Genkai: (What is your clan's set of abilities?)
Clan Symbol: (Does your clan have a symbol to represent it?)
Clan History: (History of your clan)
Awaiting approval
Rank Information:
Rank: Genin
Village: Sunagakure
Skill Information
Skill Specialty: ( You may pick 2 skills: Ninjutsu, Genjutsu, Taijutsu, Kenjutsu, Weaponry, Medical, Puppetry, Fuuinjutsu)
Main: Ninjutsu
Sub: Puppetry
Elemental Affinity:
Main: Suiton
Sub: Fuuton
Special Characteristics: --
Items/Weapons:
- Kunai
- Shuriken
- Fuma Shuriken
- Exploding Notes
- Senbon
- Smoke Bombs
Name: (Name of weapon or item)
Appearance: (A pic or brief description of the object)
Rank: (What rank would this be classified as?)
Special Abilities: (What abilities does this have? It can be none)
Origin: (Where does this weapon come from? Why does your char have it?)
Jutsus: (Use the the following template)
BASICS- Spoiler:
Name: Ayatsuito no Jutsu - String Reeling Technique
Rank: E
Type: Basic
Element: ~
Description: Ayatsuito no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing wire. When the opponent enters the area of the wire trap, the wire will restrict and hog-tie them.
Medical use/Bastardized use: ~
Name: Bunshin no Jutsu - Clone Technique
Rank: E
Type: Basic
Element: ~
Description: Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. The Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja without substance. The copy resembles the ninja in every way. This clone can function as a distraction or as means to confuse one’s opponent. As soon the Bunshin gets attacked or comes into contact with an opponent, it will disperse.
Medical use/Bastardize use: ~
Name: Henge no Jutsu - Transformation Technique
Rank: E
Type: Basic
Element: ~
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.
Medical use/Bastardize use: ~
Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu - Change of Body Stance Technique
Rank: E
Type: Basic
Element: ~
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.
Medical use/Bastardize use: ~
NINJUTSU- Spoiler:
Name: Kage Shuriken no Jutsu - Shadow Shuriken Technique
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: ~
Description: Kage Shuriken no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing a giant Windmill Shuriken. When throwing the shuriken, the ninja will also throw a second giant shuriken to hide in the shadow of the first. The hidden secondary shuriken can then approach the target without their being aware.
Medical use/Bastardize use: ~
Name: Shunshin no Jutsu - Body Flicker Technique
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: ~
Description: Shunshin no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. The ninja will appear and disappear in an instant, allowing them to retreat or attack suddenly. To facilitate the movement, the ninja will often use nearby elements such as mist, sand or leaves to mask their appearance or disappearance.
Medical use/Bastardize use: ~
PUPPETRY- Spoiler:
Name: Kugutsu no Jutsu (Puppet Replacement Technique)
]Rank: D
Type: Puppetry
Element: -
Description: A variation of Kawarami no Jutsu, instead of switching with an object such as a log, the user is replaced by their nearby puppet allowing them to launch sneak attacks or evade attacks.
Name: Tenkuu Shuurai Shotto (Air Raid Shot)
Rank: D
Type: Puppetry
Element: -
Description: The user manipulates their puppet to either jump, or soar into the air and release a barrage of weapons, or bombs upon the enemy that explode on impact. The type of weapon, or bomb determines what additional effects may effect the opponent.
Name: Kugutsu no Jutsu (Puppetry Technique)
Rank: C
Type: Puppetry
Element: -
Description: This jutsu uses strings of chakra from the user's fingers to control puppets like marionettes. This skill is often prepared in coordination with the Body Replacement Technique so the user can quickly switch places with their puppet when necessary. Another useful quality of this skill is the fact that the puppet can take the form of another person, usually its user, allowing the user to trick their enemy into thinking they're fighting a living person.
Any number of chakra strings can be used to control a puppet, but users with more skill using the technique can use fewer strings per puppet. Expert puppeteers are capable of demonstrating the ability to control entire puppets perfectly using just one string, while most puppeteers would normally be able to control ten puppets at most, one per finger.
Apart from being used to control marionettes, the chakra strings can be attached to other objects, allowing the user to control, or at the very least disrupt, other things. For example, one can use chakra strings to trip someone. Another example would be those with much experience using chakra strings to control another person like a puppet.
Name: Doriru Yomi (Drill of the Underworld)
Rank: C
Type: Puppetry
Element: -
Description: The user manipulates their puppet to either attack the opponent in means to distract them, or release caltrops from its limbs to prevent their escape. They then make the puppet charge, or fly toward the opponent while spinning rapidly, hopefully dealing great damage.
Name: Kurohigi Kiki Ippatsu (Iron Maiden)
Rank: C
Type: Puppetry
Element: -
Description: After creating a distraction, the user maneuvers the puppet behind the victim, which then opens up its chest and fires out chakra controlled strings that wrap around its intended target. It then winds these strings back in to trap the target in its chest. With the victim trapped, scythe like blades appear and reap through each slit in the puppet torso, dealing severe damage.
Name: Doku Kiri Jigoku • Baribari Hyaku Renpatsu - Poison Mist Hell • Hundred Continuous Tears
Rank: C
Type: Puppetry / Ninjutsu
Element: ~
Description: The user will launch poison mist bombs at a target, enveloping them in the gas. The puppet will then launch a multitude of needles at the target.
Medical use/Bastardize use: ~
SUITON- Spoiler:
Name: Mizurappa - Violent Water Wave
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Suiton
Description: Suiton • Mizurappa is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. After forming the needed hand seals, the user will expel a strong jet of water at their opponent.
Name: Mizu no Muchi - Whip of Water
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Suiton
Description: Mizu no Muchi is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to create a whip.
Name: Daibakuryuu no Jutsu - Great Exploding Current
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Suiton
Description: Suiton • Daibakuryuu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. After doing the needed hand seals. a vortex of water will form in an already existing body of water, sucking anything on the surface above it down to the depths below.
Name: Mizu no Tatsumaki - Tornado of Water
Rank: C
Type:Ninjutsu
Element: Suiton
Description: Mizu no Tatsumaki is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to create a spinning water vortex around the ninja. The water acts as a barrier against attacks and can also knock an opponent backwards if they come in contact with it. The vortex only spreads out to about a two centimeters around the user.
Name: Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu - Water Clone Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Suiton
Description: Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to create a Bunshin clone. Unlike a normal Bunshin, the Mizu Bunshin has the ability to interact more with the environment due to it having physical substance. This allows the clone to carry out limited attacks on its target. The range of the clone is limited, however. It cannot travel very far from the original body. If the Mizu Bunshin is injured, the clone will revert back into its natural water state.
Name: Suigadan - Water Fang Projectile
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Suiton
Description: Suiton • Suigadan is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. The ninja does a string of hand seals to cause a nearby body of water to form a spinning drill.
FUUTON- Spoiler:
Name: Reppushou - Gale Wind Palm
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fuuton
Description: Fuuton • Reppushou is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Wind Element. After forming the needed hand seals, the user will send a strong gust of wind towards their target while acting in conjunction with another thrown weapon, increasing its power and deadliness.
Name: Daitoppa - Great Breakthrough
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fuuton
Description: Fuuton • Daitoppa is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes the Wind Element. After bringing their hand to their mouth, the user will blow a large blast of wind capable of leveling almost anything in its way.
Last edited by Teh Suko on Sun Dec 06, 2009 7:01 pm; edited 7 times in total | |
| | | | Teh Suko
Sand Genin
| | Subject: Re: Suko Yabun Sun Dec 06, 2009 1:50 pm | |
| Background Information
Birth ARC
Born to a retired chuunin mother and a jounin drag queen father. Her mother, who she idolized, died when Suko was young, leaving her to be raised by her father. Her father claims to be bisexual but refuses to be with any woman but Suko's mother, and is therefore in effect gay, although he was never seen with any other men. When she turned eight, she was always annoying her father to enroll her in the academy, to teach her jutsu, and so on. After awhile, she gave up on asking.
The next day, she got into a fight with one of the neighbors. The kid sliced it with a kunai, causing it look boy style, albeit poorly so that it sticks out funny. When she got home that day, her father was surprised to see that she had a male figure, and decided to enroll her in the academy then. All along, he was just to proud to put a girl in the academy. But now she looked a boy, so that wouldn't be to bad.
Academy ARC
When she arrived at the academy, all the other students were gullible enough to think she was a boy, even the teachers were gullible! Above all, she was smart, which is what confused some students because the average boy in their classes were not as smart. She just always told them lies about how her mother makes her study. The teachers would overhear her talking, and wanted to meet her mother. Which is what made her academy years stressful for her, since her mother was dead.
After the average academy year, the Genin exam came. The teachers just insisted that her mother come to share this moment with her. Luckily for her, her father was more in touch with his feminine side, so he could pass as as her mother. Her teacher believed her, so she was able to pass the exam and become a genin. After they got home, Suko was punished by her father. Apparently, he didn't like showing how feminine he was in public...
Genin ARC
Now a genin, she awaits to placed on a squad. She plans to follow in the foot steps of her mother, and perhaps become higher then Chuunin rank.
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| | | | Teh Suko
Sand Genin
| | Subject: Re: Suko Yabun Sun Dec 06, 2009 1:56 pm | |
| RP Sample:
If I'm on a computer (and inspired)
- Spoiler:
It was five in the morning. The sun was close to rising in the Leaf Village, so the sky was a dark blue, but light. But sure enough, it was a shade of blue. The girl sat on her bed with her legs in cris-cross style. She was well rested and ready for training. It was her day off from the academy. What better way to improve her skills then training on a day of relaxation? She jumped out of bed and got dressed in her clothing, went to the kitchen and ate a fast breakfast. After she was done eating, she ran to the door of her house and slipped on her blue ninja sandals and ran out the door.
On her way to the training grounds, she heard a scream. "What was that!?" She asked herself. She looked in all directions and heard the scream again. Shiori ran in the direction she heard the screams in the Hidden Leaf Forest. She saw a young woman with a pool of blood surrounding her body. Shiori ran over to the woman and stood next to her body that lied on the floor. "Are you alright!?" She asked the woman. The woman nodded weakly and said that some bandits had kidnapped her baby. Shiori promised the woman that she would return her baby and in an instant, she was off to the bandits hideout bu following the trail of disappearing footsteps in the dirt.
After fifteen minutes, she arrived at the hideout. Seeing how there was so many bandits, they wouldn't notice one extra, would they? She performed a handseal and whispered Henge No Jutsu. There was a puff of smoke and she had transformed into a bandit. She walked in the hideout with the other bandits not knowing who she really was. She chuckled to herself in her mind and thought So this is where the basics come in handy! She entered a dark metal tent with a small child in a cage that was hanging from the ceiling. "This must be the baby..." She said to herself and ended the transformation. She reached into her shuriken pouch and threw at the rope keeping the cage above the ground and it fell to the floor with a loud BANG. Crap! She thought to herself as she heard the bandits moving towards the tent. No way out.... She thought.
Once again, she performed a handseal and whispered Bunshin No Jutsu. A clone of Shiori appeared next to her. But this clone did not have the ability to attack or defend. In this situation, it would have to do. The real Shiori ordered her clone to distract the bandits, and so it did. When the coast was clear, she ran out of the tent and headed for the exit of the hideout. Three bandits noticed her and threw kunai aimed at her neck and forehead. With the baby on her shoulders, she performed one more handseald Karawami No Jutsu! She said. The kunai hit her, but then a log appeared in her place - 'causing her to escape from their clutches. Shiroi got out of the hideout alive and headed back to where she saw the woman earlier. She was still there, luckily, and she seemed worried. Shiori returned the baby to the mother and then the mother left after thanking the academy student.
After all that, she went to the training grounds to train with projectiles, smiling whenever she thought of what she had done. When the day was over, she returned home and go ready for bed. At eight o' clock at night. Today was her best day ever. She saved a life and was able to train at the same time.
I'm I'm on my ipod touch
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The teacher had been in the room the whole time without probably anyone even knowing. After only two words from the teacher, everyone got up and was moving out. Almost all the students were gone and out in the hall, following the teacher. Were they going on a mission? Perhaps. Well, the only way to find out was to follow her sensei and find out! Shiori walked out of the room, following most of the students and the teacher. She looked around the halls and saw other classes in session and she smiled. A whole bunch of students are spending the day with their face in a book and a teacher talking, probably boring them to death. While this class is going out, getting some fresh air! This was going to be exciting! She hoped...
--That'll be about the length if I'm on my ipod, sometimes longer. | |
| | | | Ulkira
Leaf Genin
| | Subject: Re: Suko Yabun Sun Dec 06, 2009 5:18 pm | |
| It's Haruhi from Ouran High, complete with her gay Daddy!!!
Ahem, I mean, very good app, nicely done. However, there are still a few problems to be adressed:
- To use Senei Jashu, you would need the Snake Summoning Contract, which I'm sorry to say has already been taken. To use the Murder of Crows Confusion would require a Crow Summoning Contract.
- Violent Water Wave and Whip of Water, C-Rank. Sword of Draining, I believe that is B-Rank.
- Tornado of Water, how big is the vortex?
- Chakra Detection Rain, too powerful for a C-Rank, seems more like a B-Rank or A-Rank.
- Kazekiri, do use this you would need Kujaku's swords, please remove.
- For you Histroy, please add a few more lines to it, try to hit at least 2 paragraphs for thefirst two arcs. | |
| | | | Teh Suko
Sand Genin
| | Subject: Re: Suko Yabun Sun Dec 06, 2009 5:57 pm | |
| - Ulkira wrote:
- - To use Senei Jashu, you would need the Snake Summoning Contract, which I'm sorry to say has already been taken. To use the Murder of Crows Confusion would require a Crow Summoning Contract.
Removed both. - Ulkira wrote:
- - Violent Water Wave and Whip of Water, C-Rank. Sword of Draining, I believe that is B-Rank.
Changed Violent Water Wave to C, as well as Whip of Water. Sword of Draining, Removed. - Ulkira wrote:
- - Tornado of Water, how big is the vortex?
Added how big it is. - Ulkira wrote:
- - Chakra Detection Rain, too powerful for a C-Rank, seems more like a B-Rank or A-Rank.
Removed. - Ulkira wrote:
- - Kazekiri, do use this you would need Kujaku's swords, please remove.
Removed. - Ulkira wrote:
- - For you Histroy, please add a few more lines to it, try to hit at least 2 paragraphs for thefirst two arcs.
Working on that~! | |
| | | | Teh Suko
Sand Genin
| | Subject: Re: Suko Yabun Sun Dec 06, 2009 6:28 pm | |
| - Teh Suko wrote:
- Ulkira wrote:
- - For you Histroy, please add a few more lines to it, try to hit at least 2 paragraphs for thefirst two arcs.
Working on that~! Done~ | |
| | | | Teh Suko
Sand Genin
| | Subject: Re: Suko Yabun Sun Dec 06, 2009 7:15 pm | |
| Puppet
Puppet's Name: Rurchu
Appearance:
The puppet looks like an average human, except it is made out of wood. It has short silver hair, with a small portion red. It just has a fishnet outfit, with a small pair of black pants. Red beads surround its body, to make a fashionable statement? I think not! They are actually a weapon. Its eyes are a glowing green color. Rurchu has the height of an average person, and could possibly be mistaken for one.. If one were not to notice that it was wood! For a male puppet, he has a seductive appearance, which gives Suko the advantage when fighting a female. And perhaps some males...?
Requirements: Wood
Puppet's Rank: C
Special Skill: ~
Weapons: Senbon [ Fired through mouth ], Smoke Bombs [ Fingertips open to fire ], Sleeping gas [ Puppet opens mouth and the gas blows out ], Appearance [ Because of its 'sexy' appearance, female targets may get distracted ] (xD), Red Beads (Exploding Beads) [ Explode when puppet throws them at someone ]
Puppet's Jutsu: ~
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| | | | Ulkira
Leaf Genin
| | Subject: Re: Suko Yabun Sun Dec 06, 2009 11:31 pm | |
| History's fine now. And lol to the stupid Dad. Classic.
Alright, for your puppet, state how big it is in the description, and the Requirements is for what it is made off, so simply write that it is made of wood there.
Your puppet cannot use Ninjutsu, it has no chakra.
I would recommend you add more weapons to the puppet. For a C-Rank this is very, very weak. Try hidden blades or gas bombs or hidden net launchers, those kinds of things. | |
| | | | Teh Suko
Sand Genin
| | Subject: Re: Suko Yabun Mon Dec 07, 2009 1:32 am | |
| - Ulkira wrote:
- History's fine now. And lol to the stupid Dad. Classic.
Alright, for your puppet, state how big it is in the description, and the Requirements is for what it is made off, so simply write that it is made of wood there.
Your puppet cannot use Ninjutsu, it has no chakra.
I would recommend you add more weapons to the puppet. For a C-Rank this is very, very weak. Try hidden blades or gas bombs or hidden net launchers, those kinds of things. - The dad is stupid. :3
- Edited Description and Requirements.
- Removed.
- Added more weapons.
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| | | | Ulkira
Leaf Genin
| | Subject: Re: Suko Yabun Tue Dec 08, 2009 9:37 pm | |
| Hmm, looks aye-okay to me now. Just get your clan approved and you're good to go.  | |
| | | | Teh Suko
Sand Genin
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Akatsuki Leader
| | Subject: Re: Suko Yabun Wed Dec 09, 2009 3:12 am | |
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