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PostSubject: Sunflower Hoshi   Sunflower Hoshi EmptyWed Nov 25, 2009 2:11 pm

General Information

Name:
Sunflower Hoshi

Nickname/Alias:
Golden Light

Age:
20

Gender: Female

Looks:
Sunflower Hoshi In_the_sun_by_Nesskain
Long curly blond hair, and bright blue eyes. Sunflower has a soft olive skin tone, and slender features. She not that hippy, or busty do to her acrobatic physic but she still pulls off a red dress if needed. (lol) She stands at about 4’9’’ She is quite tiny.
Sunflower is extremely muscular, and sculpted. It gives her a very sturdy and powerful stature even though she seem so meek at times.
During normal activities she can be found wearing a womanly ninja garb. Which includes a yellow Cut tunic, biker shorts, long length boot heels. Ninja gear, pouches and bandages, Hayate, and wrist guards. In Anbu she wears the usual black and white Armor, with the face mask of a rat. With her traditional, and always custom Long yellow scarf.


Personality: Bright and Sunny. Just like her name Sunflower rarely in a foul mood, and always looks on the lighter side of things. Her sweet as honey charm is almost infectious, and even the dreggy of hearts are not impenetrable by her. She very curious being having most her days in philosophy, sciences or general fun. Sunflower feels life should be experienced and enjoyed. Time never finishes her dance and either will she!
Even though she is a bubbly women that does not make her that less dangerous. Protecting what she loves, and knows is high on her list. She appalls thoughts who manipulate, or carry out loathsome acts on simply selfish pretenses. Protecting the innocent, and maintaining a natural balance is her key in life. Sunflower would do anything to help those in need of it. She is true hearted person, and comes from the purest form of love.
A collage of pursuits pushes Sun’s very curiosity. She is constantly dabbling in something, a new tonic, balms, anesthetic, prank or musical interlude. She’s very found of nature and takes care to keep the balance of life in check. Sunflowers quick reflexes and amble body makes the stealth kill easy and almost flawless. A ever vigilant student she constantly training her mind, body, and charms to assist her in these traits. Though she is for a better lack of the word complete opposite in persona to her shinobi brothers. Sunflower has the means, the capability and ferocity of some of the legends of the leaf. Being on the end of her sword would be the last thing one ever did.
Personality Trait's: Cheerful, Uplifting, Spunky, Joyful, Enthusiastic, Caring


Personality Trait's: Cheerful, Uplifting, Spunky, Joyful, Enthusiastic, Caring

Rank Information:
Rank:
Village:
Konohagakure

Skill Information

Skill Specialty:, Medical
Main: Medical
Sub: Fuuinjutsu

Elemental Affinity:
Main: Water
Sub: Wind

Special Characteristics:

Acrobat: Sunflowers parents were traveling performers. So the girl is no stranger to death deifying stunts, Acts, Ect. She was trained as an acrobat, and gymnast from birth, and has complete control over her body. She is contortionist and can bend fold herself into many different positions. Because of this she is lean, muscular, and extremely well balanced. These skills have helped her along her way in her training. Sunflower can usually be found just hanging around.

Herbalist
: Sunflower is completely adept to make tonics, tinctures, balms, salves, “potions”, serums, or other “natural healing” methods to conducive illness or disease. On the flip side she also trained explicitly with poisons, toxins, venoms, Corrosive tinctures, or other “darker” forms of the craft. Which are not always used in that way. Using these methods she can help her country in more slight of hands ways then just her sword.

Medical Nin: The Medical Teams (医療班, Iryō-han) are the back-up of the shinobi forces. They consist of medical-nin, working behind the scenes to heal the sick and injured shinobi and to make sure the organization is always in peak condition. They also do extensive research into new techniques, medicine, and into diseases and the human body. Although not seen very often, they are highly respected. Even to a jōnin, the advanced skills of these shinobi appear like magic.
Not all medical-nin are members of the Medical Teams, though. There are also medical-nin within the regular forces, who go along on standard missions to increase the success-rate. However, back in the village, it is the Medical Teams who run the hospital and treat the wounded.

Items/Weapons:

Name: Twin Kodachi
Appearance: Sunflower Hoshi Aoshi_kodachi_sword_sm_540
Simple clean cut short swords, with slight delicate engraving. Black, and silver trim. Straight blade, hand crafted similar to the Katana. Fast lose weapon that can be sturdy, and reliable in combat.
Rank: A
Special Abilities:N/A
Origin: The small short swords used by ancient ninja. It is a traditonal weapon that suited Sunflowers small, fast, and quick nature


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PostSubject: Re: Sunflower Hoshi   Sunflower Hoshi EmptyThu Nov 26, 2009 5:33 am

JUTSUS

Name: (Name of jutsu)
Rank: (E,D,C,B,A,S)
Type: (Ninjutsu, Weaponry, Genjutsu, Kenjutsu, Taijutsu)
Element: (Lightning, Wind, Earth, Water, Fire)
Description: (About a paragraph describing your jutsu)
Medical use/Bastardized use: (For Medical jutsu only. Describe what qualifies this jutsu as medical. What is it's medical use or how was it bastardized from its original medical use, as in the case of poisons, etc.)


Bunshin no Jutsu
» Clone/Split Body Skill
Rank: D
Type: Genjutsu
Description: A jutsu that creates an illusionary clone of the user, in numbers of 1 or more. The Clone disappears after being struck with an attack, and can deal no damage. This jutsu is one of the basics, and required to pass the Shinobi Academy.


» Chakra Kyuushuu
» Energy Absorption
Rank:C
Type: Taijutsu
Description: This jutsu allows the user to absorb the opponents chakra, thus draining their energy - and strength. It is used from the palm of the hand, and appears as a tiny chakra flame around the fist.


» Fuuton Renkuudan
» Embedded Steroid Blanks
Rank: B
Description: A type of power up move. Uses it to blast a huge amount of air from mouth. For diversion, Attack, ECT


» Fuuton Renkuudan
» Embedded Steroid Blanks
Rank: B
Description: A type of power up move. Uses it to blast a huge amount of air from mouth. For diversion, Attack, ECT






» Henge no Jutsu
» Transformation Skill
Rank: D
Type: Genjutsu
Description: An illusionary jutsu that gives the user the appearance of another person or object. A commonly used skill.

» Jouro Senban
» Raining Needles
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Description: A barrage of needles that are sent flying at the opponent from a hidden place inside an umbrella. The needles are then controlled using Chakra and directed at the enemy. These needles have been known to have the power to pierce 5mm steel.

» Kage Bunshin no Jutsu
» Shadow Clone Skill
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Description: A forbidden jutsu, that creates clones - which are not just plain illusions (like the normal bunshin no jutsu). Each clone is an exact replica of Naruto, capable of attacking. A direct hit causes the clone to disappear.

» Kage Buyou
» Shadow Leaf Dance
Rank:C
Description: A technique that attaches the user to the opponents shadow, leaving the opponent vulnerable to stronger attacks

» Kage Shuriken no Jutsu
» Shadow Shuriken Skill
Rank: D
Type: Taijutsu
Description: A technique which places a second shuriken in the shadow of a first (thrown) shuriken, confusing the enemy.

» Kanashibari no Jutsu
» Body Freeze Skill
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Description: Causes an opponent to loose their sense of movement. Stops the opponent, leaving an opening for more powerful jutsu to be performed. It is assumed most Anbu know this technique.




» Kawarimi no Jutsu
» Body Substitute Skill
Rank:D
Type: Ninjutsu
Description: A common jutsu - used to quickly replace a body with a close by object. Creates confusing among the opponent(s) - creating a chance to escape, or return with a larger strike. Useful for avoiding attacks, and hiding from potential enemies.

» Kaze no Yaiba
» Wind Blade
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Description: Creates a blade of wind, that is impossible to block. Requires no tool to perform.

» Kirigakure no Jutsu
» Hidden Mist Skill
Rank:A
Type: Ninjutsu
Description: A highly effective cover technique. Blankets an area in a thick fog, confusing the senses of the enemy.

» Kokuangyo no Jutsu
» Bringer of Darkness
Rank: B
Type: Genjutsu
Description: Creates an illusion of complete darkness over the battlefield. Causes confusion.

Kuchiyose no Jutsu
» Summoning Skill
Rank: C
Description: Using a contract, seal, and the users blood, allows the user to summon an animal. The type of the animal is determined by the contract used, and the blood is the 'signature'(Which can be on a scroll, tattoo, etc).
Sunflower: Tattoo “Ninkin” Lucrative to Hatakes Assuming techniques are techniques

» Mikazuki no Mai
» Dance of the Crescent Moon
RAnk: A
Type: Ninjutsu (Leaf Style), Taijutsu
Description: A sword technique, that creates two replicas - that together attack in a dance of swords - that confuses the opponent.



» Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu
» Water Clone Skill
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Description: Creates a number of clones, made from water. Each Clone is capable of attacking on its own, yet each is 1/10th the power of the original. A direct hit will cause the clone to revert to water - and it cannot leave a certain radius of the user.

Name: Five Seal Barrier
Rank: C
Type: Fūinjutsu
Element: (Lightning, Wind, Earth, Water, Fire)
Description: This technique creates a barrier around a place by placing four "Forbidden" (禁, kin) tags around a fifth. The only way to remove the barrier is by removing all five tags simultaneously. Not only would this require a group of at least five people, it also requires an immense search, since the four tags can be scattered in any direction, as far as 800 meters from the fifth seal. This makes breaking through this barrier almost impossible.
Even if the barrier is broken, there is a final obstacle. The Mirrored Sudden Attacker Technique will create perfect copies of those who have removed the seal, preventing them from returning immediately.

Name: Fire Sealing Method
Rank: B
Type: Fūinjutsu
Element: Fire
Description: This jutsu allows the user to seal a nearby fire into a scroll. The user writes the seal on a scroll and then performs the required hand seals. This causes a vapor to appear from the scroll, enveloping the fire and sealing it on the scroll as the kanji for seal (封). Jiraiya used this jutsu to seal away the left over black fire from Itachi Uchiha's Amaterasu technique.

Name: Lions Closing roar Rank a
Rank: A
Type: Fūinjutsu
Element:
Description This sealing technique completely blocks the target's chakra with a sealing formula (封印式, fūin-shiki) drawn on the ground or a wall. This is done by closing all the tenketsu of the person caught in the middle. Signifying this is the stylised kanji for "close," or "shut" (閉, hei) drawn in the middle of the sealing formula.
To successfully seal the target, one has to get them exactly inside the sealing formula. This requires great accuracy and is very difficult. Various methods can be used to make this easier. For instance, one can prepare a puppet or a ninja tool like the Lion-Headed Kannon with this sealing formula.

Name: Triangle seal
Rank: A
Type: Fūinjutsu
Element:
Description: This sealing technique completely blocks the target's chakra with a sealing formula (封印式, fūin-shiki) drawn on the ground or a wall. This is done by closing all the tenketsu of the person caught in the middle. Signifying this is the stylised kanji for "close," or "shut" (閉, hei) drawn in the middle of the sealing formula.
To successfully seal the target, one has to get them exactly inside the sealing formula. This requires great accuracy and is very difficult. Various methods can be used to make this easier. For instance, one can prepare a puppet or a ninja tool like the Lion-Headed Kannon with this sealing formula.

Name: Mystical palm Technique
Rank: A
Type: Medical
Element
: (Water
Description: This medical ninjutsu allows the user to speed up the body's natural healing process by sending chakra from their hands into a wound or afflicted body part. This allows the user to heal a patient without the need for medical equipment or surgery, making it highly useful on the battlefield. It can be used to treat both external and internal injuries. It is vital to match the amount of chakra used to the severity of the affliction or injury.
Medical use/Bastardized use:
This requires a great amount of chakra control. Because of this, only a few highly skilled medical-nin are able to use this technique. By sending an excess amount of chakra into the patient's body, the user can overload the patient's normal circulation, trapping them in a comatose state

Name: Medical scaplul
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element:
Description: This medical technique forms one's chakra into a small, sharp blade. This can then be used for highly accurate incisions necessary for surgeries and anatomical dissections. Unlike regular scalpels, the Chakra Scalpel can actually make cuts inside the body without actually creating an open wound, limiting the risks of an infection.

Medical use/Bastardized use: (Because of this requirement, using the Chakra Scalpel offensively is highly unusual. In heated combat, even the greatest medical-nin won't be able to exert the precision needed to make fatal cuts, but it can still effectively cut muscle tissues and tendons, rendering the target immobile.

Medical
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Gantai no jutsu (Bandage skill)
Rank: D
Type: NinJutsu
Description: One of the first techniques that a Medical Ninja must learn. Reasons why is because these techniques are what matters between life and death. This is a special type of technique in which a medical ninja is capable of making bandages by using their surroundings such as sand, grass water and others with the help of using chakra.
Medical use/Bastardized use: Intruption of application

Sansokyoukyuu (Oxygen supply)
Rank D
Type: NinJutsu
Description: An easy justu for the Medical Ninja. A ninja uses chakra upon the chest area focusing it to help the body in some ways. It helps the lungs expand easier making the chest and neck muscles become more officient which allows the airways to expand and pulmonary blood vessels so then the cells of the body may breathe easier.
Medical use/Bastardized use: Low engery, Near death Paitent, Interuption

Kanetsu no Gyou (Heat seeker)
Rank D
Type: NinJutsu
Description: A simple Jutsu in which the Medical Ninja focuses the chakra in his body by placing it along the persons chest creating heat within them. This is so then the person would not be in danger of Hypothermia, a condition in which the body starts dropping its temperature at a quick pace, and if goes untreated it might cause paralysis and even death.
Medical use/Bastardized use:One must be careful for
if goes untreated it might cause paralysis and even death. One must be careful for if used to long then it may warm up a part of the body which may cause fever.

Ketsuki Gyouko (Blood Coagulation)
Rank D
Type: NinJutsu
Description: A simple healing technique. The user uses his chakra on his wound to make the blood there coagulate quickly. The wound still remains but the bleeding stops. It goes quickly for small wounds but larger ones need a couple of minutes to finish the coagulation. It can also be used on wounded allies.

Chishio Tensou no jutsu (Blood transfusion skill)
Rank C
Type: NinJutsu
Description: Loss of blood is a serious condition, and not very uncommon one in the shinobi battlefield. When a person reaches such a dangerous state, a medical nin can ease their symptoms by using this jutsu. First, the user must incert syringe in the patient's body in order to open a vein. Once a vein has been opened, the medical nin uses chakra in order to increase the density of the patient's blood. Thus, they won't get more blood, but more red and white blood cells are created, an effect which helps fight against the ailments and symptoms of losing blood.
Medical use/Bastardized use: However, this jutsu has a downside which is the fact that the user's own blood dilutes as long as the jutsu is activated, which means that basically it is indeed a blood transfusion and the user must be careful at how much blood he or she gives to their patients.


Shosen no Jutsu (Healing Hands Technique)
Rank C
Type: NinJutsu
Description: A Ninjutsu technique where the ninja focuses chakra into the palms of their hands, creating a small ball of healing chakra. This chakra, when concentrated, can repair physical damage to another person. Depending on the degree of the wound, the ninja must concentrate more of their chakra to repair the damage.
Medical use/Bastardized use: However, if the wound is too extensive, such as extensive damage to vital organs, this technique may not be able to help them.

Chakra Enjintou (Chakra Scalpel)
Rank C
Type: NinJutsu
Description: A Ninjutsu technique used, primarily, for field surgery. The ninja concentrates a powerful aura of chakra around their hand, creating a blade capable of tearing through muscles and arteries, or breaking bone, without actually breaking the skin of the person they're using it on. When used offensively, in combat, it is difficult to concentrate on the length and power of the scalpel, making it harder to successfully hit an enemy's arteries, ensuring a kill.


Hone Chiyu no jutsu (Bone healer skill)
Rank C
Type: NinJutsu
Description: A variation of Shosen no jutsu. When an ally has broken or fractured a bone, this jutsu uses chakra which makes the body boost its calcium level. Using the extra calcium,
Medical use/Bastardized use: Shosen no jutsu is activated, but uses less chakra since the user already has the calcium to work with, but will only work on bone tissue.

Decontamination technique (Osenjokyo no jutsu)
Rank C
Type: NinJutsu
Description: A technique to use if someone becomes poisoned or seriously infected with a decease or toxin. The medical specialist uses his or her chakra to rapidly create new white blood cells in the patient's blood stream to fight off infections, poisons and other hostile substances to enter the body.
Medical use/Bastardized use: Immensely strong poisons can still kill their victim but with the help of this jutsu will be slowed down enough for the victim to acquire a proper cure or antidote.


Satsugaite no Jutsu (Killing Hands Technique)
Rank C
Type: NinJutsu
Description: A Ninjutsu technique where the ninja focuses chakra into the palms of their hands, creating a small ball of killing chakra, which is the complete opposite of the Shosen no Jutsu (Healing Hands Technique).
Medical use/Bastardized use: Through concentrating their chakra in a manner opposing the Shosen, instead of rebuilding and restoring another person's cells, this jutsu intends to destroy and unravel another person's cells.


Chuusuusei Shikeikiden (Central Nervous System Electrical Shock)
Rank C
Type: NinJutsu
Description: A Ninjutsu technique where the ninja turns their chakra into an electrical pulse which is transmitted into an enemy's body by striking the base of their neck. The electrical impulse travels up their brain stem and disrupts the flow of electricity in the nervous system.
Medical use/Bastardized use: The brain cannot work like this, thus all communication between the brain and body are confused, causing a person to move their arm when they should be moving their leg, and generally debilitating them. Only an unusually skilled ninja would be able to overcome such a handicap.


Kossetsu no jutsu (Bond fracture skill)
Rank C
Type: NinJutsu
Description: A jutsu which has the opposite effect of the bone healer jutsu, the Kossetsu no jutsu utilizes the medical-Nin's proficiency at determining the weakest spot in his enemy's bone. Then, Chakra scalpel is used at that exact same spot in order to fracture the bone. A second hit will in all probabilities break said bone completely.
Medical use/Bastardized use:: When using this jutsu, a lot of concentration is needed in order to apply enough damage to a small spot in the bone, therefore it lacks means to hurt any other tissue in the body.

Zesshi Nensan (Fanged Tongue Acid)
Rank C
Type: NinJutsu
Description: A very corrosive acid which is expelled from the mouth. It is capable of being projected far distances, with the strength to even dissolve rocks. However, being as acidic as it is, it must be spat very cautiously from the mouth, making it a very slow attack that will not succeed unless your opponent's speed is hindered.


Kanpa no Jutsu (Cold wave skill)
Rank B
Type: NinJutsu
Description: A jutsu that is pretty much the opposite of heat seeker, this one instead of treating a state of hypothermia, which is heat loss, is treating a state of heat wave where the body overheats. By using chakra, the cold fusion jutsu opens up pores, pumps up blood to the skin and widens the blood vessels nearest to the skin and also increases sweat production.
Medical use/Bastardized use: All these effects cool the body and make it return to normal temperatures, although careless use of the cold fusion might lead to an undesired effect such as overcooling of the body and eventually hypothermia.


Saisei no Saibou (Cell Regeneration)
Rank B
Type: NinJutsu
Description: A Ninjutsu technique where the ninja focuses all of their chakra into one part of their body just before an attack. The moment that attack connects, the chakra activates the natural regeneration of the body's cellular makeup, repairing the damage done by an attack the moment after it is done. An extremely powerful jutsu, and at all times it uses almost all of the ninja's chakra, pretty much ending the battle for the user.


Hekirekite no Jutsu (Thunder Hands Technique)
Rank B
Type: NinJutsu
Description: A ninjutsu in which the user focuses the chakra in his hands so that they can create an electric shock able to give a sufficient shock to cause the heart to start beating again in case it stopped.
Medical use/Bastardized use: antelemental seals, If the patient has diffrent affinity, and to much fo a very good thing


Purification technique (Kakusei no jutsu)
Rank B
Type: NinJutsu
Description: An upgraded version to the decontamination technique. The medical specialist creates even more white blood cells but now also powers them up by feeding chakra directly into them. All poisons, infections, toxins in the patient's body will be removed instantly.
Medical use/Bastardized use: Also, this technique can be used on self, but at the cost of a great deal of the user's chakra.


Chakra Gekiyaku no Jutsu (Chakra Poisoning Technique)
Rank B
Type: NinJutsu
Description: By making the required hand seals and focusing chakra into the fingertips, the user can 'stab' the target with his fingers. There will be no visible wound, but the target's inner coil system will slowly be infected with the negative chakra input. From that point on, every time the target tries to mold chakra, he'll weaken. Death is a major option in this. Normally, the effect wears off after a couple of hours, but multiple stabs increase the effect.


Biransei no Jutsu (Poison gas Technique)
Rank B
Type: NinJutsu
Description: Technique creates a cloud of poisonous gas that erupts from the ninja’s mouth in a stream. The cloud clears a distance between the ninja and their enemy, as not to capture the ninja himself within its area of effect. Any enemy caught within its area of effect will succumb to the poison’s effects.


Shinzou no Suiryoku no jutsu (Heart thrust skill)
Rank B
Type: NinJutsu
Description: Using chakra at the fingertips, the medical nin is able, with a direct and accurate blow to an opponent's thorax, to cause a slight heart attack, and other serious heart conditions such as VT, VF and so on.
Medical use/Bastardized use: The blow must be very accurate and done with exactly two fingers, the chakra at the tips of said fingers travels upon impact to the heart and the arteries surrounding it. The possibilities are quite endless at that point, as the destructive chakra is capable of ripping a part one or two arteries, fracture the heart muscle and even force the coronary veins to tighten, resulting in a mild heart attack.


Souzousaisei (Genesis Rebirth)
Rank A
Type: NinJutsu
Description: A Ninjutsu technique that only those with the Souseki Fuuin (Genesis Seal) can perform. By gathering chakra into their seal over a period of time, they can then use that gathered chakra by releasing the seal. The chakra accelerates the production of various enzymes in their body, causing almost instant cellular reformation, healing absolutely any mortal wound, including extensive damage to internal organs.
Medical use/Bastardized use: However, the number of times cells can multiply is limited, so using this technique takes away from the total life span of the ninja using it.


Body Delving
Rank A
Type: NinJutsu
Description: The user of this presses their fingers into the chest area of patient. (Between the ribs, fingers actually enter the body. The Jutsu actually doesn’t cause any more damage.) They flow a constant but minimal amount of chakra into the patient’s body which allows the user to delve into any areas in question. Medical use/Bastardized use: In the hands of an unskilled user, this Jutsu can yield false positive such as producing information of a damaged area but the gives the wrong cause of the damage.



Infuin: Kai (Shadow Seal: Release)
S-rank
Type: FuuinJutsu
This jutsu releases the chakra stored inside the seal on Tsunade's forehead. She then uses this chakra for her Sôzô Saisei. This resotres every point of Chakra the User Normaly would have.

Seksuki Akuchi (Return Life)
Rank: S
Type Ninjutsu
Description: User focuses all of the Chakra in their body in order to restore the dead victim. The Victim begins to glow light blue and the User Begins to Glow red, then the dead victim takes his first breath of his 2nd life.
Limit: Can only use once per thread, and is left with absolutely None left besides life Chakra.
Medical use/Bastardized use: Chakra Cost: All user has to offer


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PostSubject: Re: Sunflower Hoshi   Sunflower Hoshi EmptyThu Nov 26, 2009 2:22 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Sunflower Hoshi   Sunflower Hoshi EmptyThu Nov 26, 2009 2:50 pm

If you want to be in serious contention for ANBU then you will have to sharpen up this application.

- Another full length paragraph on personality.

- If you do not have ninjutsu as a specialty then you wont need your elements, please remove.

- You might want to add the basic academy jutsu to your application.

- Also increase your history arc's at least another paragraph for each arc.

- You RP sample is pretty "thin". I suggest creating a new one not an existing one from 5 years ago, so we can accurately see what you are capable of.
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PostSubject: Re: Sunflower Hoshi   Sunflower Hoshi EmptySat Nov 28, 2009 7:04 am

Todd wrote:
If you want to be in serious contention for ANBU then you will have to sharpen up this application.

- Another full length paragraph on personality. (Check)

- If you do not have ninjutsu as a specialty then you wont need your elements, please remove. (Check)

- You might want to add the basic academy jutsu to your application.(Check and then some)

- Also increase your history arc's at least another paragraph for each arc.

- You RP sample is pretty "thin". I suggest creating a new one not an existing one from 5 years ago, so we can accurately see what you are capable of.
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