Yoshisado Deido [Permission from Akuma Kotta]

General Information
Name: Yoshisado Deido

Nickname/Alias:

Age: 11

Gender: Male

Looks:
Yoshisada is a very calming looking person. He has a beautiful tan, elegant features, such as a soft nose, slightly pointed chin, a very soft smile, and beautiful blue eyes. It is hard to look at him and not feel calm. He has thin eyebrows, and very spiky hair that is arranged messy, falling outwards off of his head. His hair color is a light reddish color. He is about four feet tall, with a thin body and limbs. He wears a green undershirt, and a yellow jacket with the collar flipped up. He wears tan pants usually, and black ninja sandals.

Personality: Yoshisado is an overall calm, and caring person. He does not like to hurt his opponents, but will try to subdue them. He loves to talk, but always talks in a calm, loving, soft voice that people admire. He smiles a lot, and he often looks people in the eyes, taking in their personality. Yoshisado is often found helping people lifting things, or finding lost items, which often makes him late for things.

In battle, Yoshisado is still a very calm person, wasting no energy unless forced to. He is a brilliant strategist, thinking a few paces ahead of the opponent, often ending the fight before it actually begins. If he must hurt someone to progress and become stronger, he will end the fight in one strike usually. He loves women, and will not hurt a woman at all, even if it means death for him. He also holds a great hatred for anyone who strikes a woman, and will make them suffer, but that is the only time he will become merciless.

Personality Trait's: Yoshisado focuses around protecting women.

Catch Phrase: "No problem."

Clan Information

Clan Name: Deido

Kekkei Genkai: This clan has a strange kekkei genkai. Their strange chakra only allows them to use mud or no element ninjutsu, making it their own elemental affinity from birth, and turns all of the mud from the clan's special jutsus into a thick black, sticky ooze that you can breath through. That's why the clan uses many special clan mud jutsus.

Clan Symbol: none

Clan History: The clan started out in Suna before the second Great Ninja War. The ninjas had a bizarre trait in their chakra, causing their mud jutsus to become slightly sticky and a little darker than normal. No one noticed this at first, but the trait was passed down from generation to generation, strengthening it. Eventually, the ninjas slowly lost their affinities except for earth. The ninjas used earth style jutsus and became masters of them. Then a new trait appeared, slowly restricting the clan from using anything but mud jutsus. The clan decided to create a number of special clan mud jutsus to allow them to be successful ninjas. They got better at tracking and capturing people with their unique jutsu, so the village hire them for retrieval missions.


Rank Information:
Rank: Genin
Village: Suna

Skill Information

Skill Specialty:
Main: Ninjutsu
Sub: Genjutsu

Elemental Affinity:
Main: Mud
Sub: none

Special Characteristics: Loves to paint, and is very good at it.


Items/Weapons:

Name: Ooze Bombs
Appearance: A normal ball bomb, but a little darker.
Rank: C
Special Abilities: This bomb is like a normal blast sphere bomb, but is filled with the Deido clan ooze, and will detonate, sending the black sticky ooze everywhere in a 10 foot area.
Origin: This weapon was made by Yoshisado in an attempt to have something to help him to capture people without harming them.

Background Information

Early Life: Yoshisado was born into an orphanage, not knowing his true parents. All he knew was that he was from a clan called Deido, because of a scroll of secret jutsu that was entrusted to him when he was 7 years old. The people in the orphanage told him that his parents couldn't take care of him, because of their situation, and they told them to give it to him when he reached the age of 8. He left the orphanage when his parents left him an inheritance that was worth a lot of money. Yoshisado knew the suffering of hunger and hurt, because after he left, he was traveling alone, so he didn't have any food for long periods of time, and was beaten up and robbed frequently. So from then on he decided to be calm and caring. He then joined the Ninja Academy to help people. With what little money he had left from being robbed, he got a small apartment near the academy.

Academy Arc:
When Yoshisado finally started the Academy he was so excited. It was a soft summer day, trees as green as watermelons, birds singing all around him, slight whispers of passers-by. That's when Yoshisado closed his eyes and just listened to nature itself. The smell of pine and oak filled his nostrils, the sounds of hummingbirds and rustling leaves filled his ears, he breathed in and tasted the cherry blossom trees and mint leave bushes in the air, and he could feel the sun on his face as he casually walked to his first day at the academy. With four of his five senses almost lulled into a trance at the beauty of the day he barely made it to class using his eyes. The year of being an academy student wasn't all that miraculous. Yoshisado learned all the jutsus he need to within a few months and school wasn't very eventful, not like the first day. The teacher noted that Yoshisado was making extreme progress, and passed him immediately.


RP Sample:
Yoshisado was running through the woods. He lapped and batted at the air with his tongue, then sniffed a few times before uttering,"Blood."
He rushed through the trees at breakneck speed toward the smell. Fifty meters. He was on the trail. Thirty meters. He was getting close now. Ten meters. He stopped. The air was thick with blood when he came upon a dense wilderness.
"Trying to hide in the trees are well that's not very sm..." His eyes diverted toward the body of what appeared to be a small animal of some kind. Ripped open and maimed, blood everywhere. Upon closer inspection, Yoshisado was horrified to figure out that it was a little girl. Yoshisado Quickly pulled out his mission paper, which said, "Find out what happened to the Byuitai family's daughter. Picture enclosed." "Oh no." Yoshisado said as he held the picture at eye level with the body and realized that the two girls, were one and the same.

Jutsus:

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Yo! ^^

I'd like you to add alittle more information to your background, i'll list a few points of intrest below:- (Bare in mind your application will probley scrape threw with your current background so if you don't feel like editing this part, thats up to you.)

1.) Why were you an orphan?
2.) Why were you the one who was left with the secret scroll?
3.) How did Yoshisado know about suffering?

While the above dosen't matter so much i'm afraid i'm going to have to ask you to explain why your character has....

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Special Characteristics: Increased taijutsu reflexes(10%more), Enormous chakra supply (20% more)

1.) I see no evidance as to why your character would have better reflexes? Especialy some one of Genin rank. You could use Rock Lee for an example in your defence but bare in mind he has a huge disadvantage compared to others.

2.) Again, your only a Genin your 'chakra supply' is low and hard to control. You haven't explained as to why your character may eventually have a slightly higher chakra count then joe blogs either. Generally speaking only Jinchuuriki's have a huge advantage when it comes to chakra amount. (i.e Naruto, Gaara, KB etc..) I'd also like to point out to you that Taijutsu specailist require less chakra then your normal shinobi therefore they don't train as much in chakra control or use a high amount of chakra to perform their jutsu. This being the case, results in them having a lower chakra supply then someone who specialises in Nin or Gen. Just something for you to keep in mind. :]

Oh okay, still getting used to the rules of the sight. I followed the example of my brother, Akuma. He told me the basics of the special characteristics, and you just helped me better understand this. So, when I get to a higher rank, will I then be able to put faster reflexes, etc?

~ Well you just disadvantaged yourself by taking away 5% of your chakra, that isn't really what L33 meant for you to do so just remove that all together. Leave Special Characteristics blank until you finish the rest of your character, is the best idea.~

how's that, I think thats good.

I only see one problem, and thats your bombs seem to carry a lot of mud for a C rank weapon. Id say knock it down to ten feet. Other then that, great character. Once I see thats fixed Ill stamp it with an approval unless you want to add back to your special characteristics.

fixed, but I dont know what would be a good special char. for a genin.

Special Characteristic don't have to be stat boosters for your character they can be good at art, painting, strategy, intelligence etc.

finished, and one more thing. The great beast painting jutsus arent for any clans right? I can learn them too right? cause there are only so many ninjutsu that I can use. Don't worry im done, I just want to learn the jutsus later.

Well, if your looking for something along the lines of Sai's ability you could always customise it and make it unique to your character. To my knowledge, the art form jutsu's are unique to individual characters rather then their clans. I mean, i could be wrong on that. If Sen or Todd has more info on that i'm sure they'll let you know.

I do have a question for you tho, i know you don't have any ninjutsu listed at the moment but it's acutally your main specialty. Would you like to just make a Ninjutsu section even tho you don't have any, so that when you do learn them it's easier for staff to just place them in the specific (Nin) section?

L33's survey says....approvable ^^

Oh, sorry. My clan jutsu were ninjutsu, so I was confused at first. But I also put in a ninjutsu section, and added some of my bros customs that he hasn't used yet.