Kage Muteki no Jutsu

Name:Kage Muteki no Jutsu (Invincible Shadow Jutsu)
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Clan Name: Tatsumaki
Element: Lightning/Wind
Description:

Aoshi(Death Jester) had to find a way to use his long distance archery at a safe way.After a long time studying he found out he could use his Tatsumaki red chakra speciality to his advancement to create a purified form (next generation jutsu) off the basic Kakuremino no Jutsu.
By infusing the red chakra with a electrical currency from the lightning element followed by a wind burst you can disembark your own structural atoms and become a shadow. A shadow allowing you to hide anywhere in the surroinding shadow area's.This Jutsu is usually used for stealth and the only way to attack someone after the activation of this jutsu is to deactivate it before striking.

This jutsu allows you to become invicible to the eye at all times when you move inside the shadows! Once you enter a more sunray filled or enlighted area the invicibility cloak doesn't work as fluintly as it should! And it will give you a more chameleon (blurry fused into the background) sight in front of your surroinding.

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Kakuremino no Jutsu - Magic Cloak of Invisibility Technique
Rank: E
Type: Supplementary
Description: Kakuremino no Jutsu is a very basic Ninjutsu technique. The ninja uses a camouflage cloth to cloak themselves in the background.

Denied - Over Powered.

Besides that it would be way higher then C-Rank

euh? i was still writing the thing, do you even follow your own tags? WiP means i was busy

Hmmm didn't see it I apologies. Please continue.

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Hmm..this jutsu seems quite powerful for a C-ranked technique. The complete comoflague technique is A-ranked so could you please change it so that when you are in a sunfilled area the jutsu does not comoflague your appearence, so only in the shadows.

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By infusing the red chakra with a electrical currency from the lightning element followed by a wind burst you can disembark your own structural atoms and become a shadow.

This doesn't really make sense, for the fact the lightning + wind element would not create this. it isn't a elementally based ninjutsu it is just a general ninjutsu which is chakra based e.g kage bushin. So could you please change that to just your red chakra.

Also correct some simple spelling mistakes etc and its approved ^^

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invicibility

*invisibility

Todd is in fact quite right. Shadow type techniques come from a person's Yin, or Dark chakra. ^ _ ^

it isn't a shadow type jutsu, it works like a chameleon effect. i create a some sort of chakra layer around my body, and when i enter dark spots the chakra adjust itself to that color quoficient.

And todd if you would read clearly you wouldn't say this

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The complete comoflague technique is A-ranked so could you please change it so that when you are in a sunfilled area the jutsu does not comoflague your appearence, so only in the shadows.

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This jutsu allows you to become invicible to the eye at all times when you move inside the shadows! Once you enter a more sunray filled or enlighted area the invicibility cloak doesn't work as fluintly as it should! And it will give you a more chameleon (blurry fused into the background) sight in front of your surroinding.