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PostSubject: Jonuan Hilgaro   Jonuan Hilgaro EmptySun Jun 28, 2009 9:33 am

Name:Jonuan Hilgaro

Age: 13

Gender: male

Village:Sunagakure

Rank: Academy student.

Physical Appearance: Jonuan Hilgaro 7430222 Jonuan has a pretty slim body for his size. His skin color is a light brown and has black hair that sort of sticks out to the side a bit. His eye color is orange(all Hilgaro clan members have orange eyes for some reason). He wheres a blue T-shirt that has the clan symbol on the bottom right of the shirt(If facing
forward). He wears muddy green shorts that has a flat cotton rope hanging down to about half way from the knee.

Personality: Jonuan has an up-beat attitude that can almost make anyone happy. He is very reliable and can get the job done almost all the time. He doesn't like boring missions or missions that done have much action in them. Sometimes on missions he has trouble hearing orders and can make mistakes that
way. He can also be very lazy at times. When in battle, he can be very confident. When he fights he usually
attacks the opponent first to look for there weakness.


Element: Wind, Fire.

Weapon of Choice: Name:Kazeha - wind edge


Appearance:
The left side of the staff has the color of wood and the right side is pure white. On the center of the staff the clan symbol is carved into it. This 4 1/2 feet long staff was cut down from pure oak tree and carved into pure wood. This makes this considerably light but very easy to carry and handle.

Rank: D

Special Abilities: N/A

Origin:Cut from some of the finest oak tree in the village, this has been passed down through the Hilgaro clan for many generations. Jonuan has seen this before when his dad showed him some moves when he was young. Since Jonuan is a Genin now his dad thought he was ready for it.

Fighting Type:Ninjutsu, Taijustu, a little weaponry.

Background:Pre academy arc: Jonuan was born into the Hilgaro clan and raised by his parents. As he grew slightly older he would always try to beat his dad in a sparing match but always beaten. Although the
same outcome came every match he never gave up and got better each time he sparred his dad(still, his dad
was barely trying). As time grew on he was ready for the academy.

Academy arc: Jonuan was always within the top five students of the academy. His teachers thought highly of him and would say he would be a great Shinobi one day. The only problem that was with Jonuan in the academy was that he fell asleep in class to much and couldn't hear things right sometimes. All in all he
graduated at the top of his class and proudly became a genin ninja of the leaf.



Rp Sample: Jonuan had no time to lose, it was starting to get a little dark, and his dad wanted to
have him home in time for supper. He took the scroll out once more and looked down the list of jutsu the
caught his eye. He looked at the bottom justu. He read what the jutsu could do. His eyes widened as he kept reading on. He liked this jutsu, it would come in handy when he needed an ace in the hole. He took a quick sip of water and stepped in front of a dummy. He practiced the hand signs it says to do in the scroll.He spent no more than a minute or two on this part of the training. Once he got the hand signs down he kinda just stared at the dummy for second. He didn't really know what body movement he had to do he just controlled his chakra into his hand signs and waited to see what happens. He finished the hand signs and a small tornado looking figure appeared in front of Jonuan heading straight for the dummy. The tornado looking thing had things pointing inward from it. They looked like teeth to Jonuan. Once the tornado thing hit the dummy, the dummy flew back a few feet and had a little scratches on it. Jonuan actually didn’t think it was that bad for a first time using the jutsu. He sat the dummy back up and tried again. Since he knew what type of way this tornado would head toward the dummy, he crouched down to his knees and did the hand signs. After that he made up side down diamond shape by putting his hands together. Hopefully this made the chakra control of the tornado better, and that would make the tornado stronger by a considerable amount. And it did. This time the dummy was trapped into the tornado with scratches being made all over him. After the tornado stopped, the dummy fell down to the ground. Jonuan went to go see what the jutsu had done to the body. He grinned, the body had torn up with scratches all the dummy. From head to toe. He pictured what that would look like with a human body. Ouch.









Clan Name: Hilgaro

Kekei Genkai: Heavy wind element:A stronger variation of a regular wind user. When you are born into the Hilgaro clan you automatically have the main wind chakra element in you, no matter what. Genin:wind element speed and power 1.5 Chunin:wind element speed and power 2 Jounin: wind element speed and
power 2.5.
This can be compared to an average genins ninjustu speed. Say a genin can use their wind projectile at 10 mph. The hilgaro genin can use it at 15 mph

Clan History: A long time ago a band of rouge ninja captured a handful of citizens from a small village and used them as test subjects. The ninja injected large amounts of chakra into their bodies and almost
double the chakra amount. Only one person of those villagers lived and escaped the hideout they were in. He
then found himself in the sand village who then married a female ninja. They both happened to be both
wind style users and with that chakra injection it then became a clan. The Hilgaro clan used to be a huge
clan in Kohana, but recent attacks from other villages has cut down the population of the clan a lot. The
Hilgaro clan is mostly known for creating most of the wind jutsu ninjas use today.


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PostSubject: Re: Jonuan Hilgaro   Jonuan Hilgaro EmptySun Jun 28, 2009 9:37 am

Name:Henge no Jutsu - tranformation
Rank:E
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:N/A
Description:Henge no Jutsu is a ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.Henge no Jutsu is a ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

Name:Bunshin no Jutsu -clone justu
Rank:E
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:N/A
Description:Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. The Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja without substance. The copy resembles the ninja in every way. This clone can function as a distraction or as means to confuse one's opponent. As soon the Bunshin gets attacked or comes into contact with an opponent, it will disperse.

Name:Kawarimi no Jutsu-body replacement
Rank:E
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:N/A
Description:Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themself with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

ame: Nawanuke no Jutsu
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: A basic jutsu taught at the Konoha Ninja Academy, this jutsu allows a ninja to free themselves if they have been tied up.

Name: Genjutsu Kai
Rank: E-S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Kai is a Ninjutsu technique which allows the ninja to avoid the effects of a Genjutsu illusion. After forming the needed handseals, the Genjutsu technique will not affect the ninja. The ninja can also use the technique on another individual who was unable to avoid the attack. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja touches the one affected to end the affect of the spell.

Name: Shunshin no Jutsu
Rank: E-S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This jutsu is a high-speed movement technique, allowing a ninja to move short to long distances at an almost untraceable speed. To an observer, it appears as if the user has teleported. A puff of smoke is occasionally used to disguise the user's movements. It is accomplished by using chakra to temporarily boost the user's reflexes. The amount of chakra required depends on the overall distance between the user and their intended destination.

Name: Fuuton: Ichijinnokaze Wind Release: Gust of Wind)
Rank: C
Type:Ninjutsu
Element: Wind
Description: The Ichijinnokaze is a simple wind based ninjutsu that many, if not all, wind users can use on some level. The jutsu is essentially a blast of wind chakra originating from the hand. The 'gust' is about the size of the average male body and can easily knock a ninja back, or down, or knock projectiles out of the air if they are hit by it, however they will incur no damage from the jutsu (If hit in the stomach it make knock the wind out of you) aside from perhaps environmental effects (Such as a scrapped elbow due to the fall). The beauty of the technique is due to its simplistic nature accomplished shinobi (Chuunin and above) are able to use it without handsigns.


Name:Renkuudan - Drilling Air Projectile
Rank:C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element:wind
Description: Renkuudan is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Wind Element. The user inhales a large amount of air into his chest and then slams his fist into his chest to expel it. When expelled it forms concussive spherical projectiles capable of inflicting large damage.

Name: Fuuton: Shinpuu Wind Release: Divine Wind
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Wind
Description: The Shinpuu is simply a variation of the basic Ichijinnokaze. The variation being that rather from the originating from the hand, it gust of wind surrounding the user like a dome. The wind is mainly used as a last minute defensive jutsu capable of repelling small scale attacks and projectiles. Humans and animals may be knocked back if caught off-guard, but similiar to its parent form, Ichijinnokaze, they will incur no damage. The jutsu requires a single handsign, the bird, as the chakra is formed then expelled around the user quickly. The name originates from Japanese folk legend that says a divine wind protected a small village from a huge empire (Mongolian invasion of Japan 13th Century).



Name: Wind Location Jutsu
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Wind
Description: Using small amounts of wind expelled from the mouth, a ninja is able to feel the vibrations from the impact when it hits, giving information on what it struck and the general shape of what was around the impact in a 5ft radius. This enables ninja to imitate a bats echo location, though this is not a sonic attack and can be easily tampered with by another ninja.


Name: Twisting Passage of Hellish Nightmares
Rank: C-S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Wind or Water
Description: A ninja forms a whirlpool or tornado, depending on which is desired, that is filled with solidified water (or wind) in the form of sharp talons or teeth. Ninja trapped in the tornado or whirlpool are shredded to pieces with the sharp points, being covered in light cuts at C Rank, moderate cuts at B Rank, Heavy cuts at A Rank, and possible lethality at S Rank.

A ninja can hold this jutsu for a number of posts depending on the rank used, and the ninja’s rank. A C Rank ninja can hold C for 1 post, a B Rank ninja can hold C for 2 posts, B for 1, an A Rank ninja can hold C for 3 posts, B for 2 posts, A for 1 post, and an S Rank ninja can hold C for 5 posts, B for 3 posts, A for 3 posts, and S for 1 post. Ninja who have had this jutsu from C-S rank (as in Genin to Jounin) are able to hold their S Rank jutsu for 3 posts, due to their familiarity with the jutsu.

Name: Daitoppa - Great Breakthrough
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fuuton
Description: Fuuton • Daitoppa is a Ninjutsu technique which utilizes the Wind Element. After bringing his hand to his mouth, Orochimaru will blow a large blast of wind capable of leveling almost anything in its way. A variation of the technique involves a smaller blast of wind which gets ignited with flame.

Name: Reppushou - Gale Wind Palm
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fuuton
Description: Fuuton • Reppushou is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Wind Element. After forming the needed hand seals, Nagato will send a strong gust of wind towards his target. When acting in conjunction with another thrown weapon, the wind can increase its power and deadliness.

Name: Endan - Fireball
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Katon
Description: Katon • Endan is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. This jutsu allows Jiraiya to emit a jet of fire from his mouth. While not stated, this is probably the same or a similar jutsu to the one Jiraiya uses in conjunction with Gamebunta to do Gamayu Endan.

Name: Goukakyuu no Jutsu - Great Fireball Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Katon
Description: Katon • Goukakyuu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does the necessary hand seals, draws chakra from their mouth into their chest and them immediately exhales it. They then blow a stream of fire which erupts into a large sphere of flames. To better manage the flames the ninja will bring their hand to their mouth to control it.

Name: Housenka no Jutsu - Mythical Fire Phoenix Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Katon
Description: Katon • Housenka no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does the necessary hand seals and then emits a series of small fire balls. The ninja can also hurl a projectile which is covered in these same flames. To the opponent the attack appears to be only the balls of flame, they do not see the hidden threat within the flames. Meaning that even if the flames are put out, the projectiles still converge on the target. The flames can be used to cover different projectiles like shuriken or kunai.

Name: Ryuuka no Jutsu - Dragon Fire Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Katon
Description: Katon • Ryuuka no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. After binding the opponent, the ninja uses a guide wire to unleash a large torrential fire burst onto the target.

Name: Staff take down
Rank:D
Type:Taijutsu
Element: N/A
Description: The user uses there speed to get under an opponent and slash upwards with a staff. Once the victim is in the air the user will then use the staff to slash the opponent back into the ground. You need a staff to be able to use this jutsu.

Name:Staff tornado
Rank: D
Type: Taijutsu
Element: N/A
Description:The user runs up to an opponent and sticks the staff into the ground. While still in motion, the user then holds on to the staff with both hand and spins around the staff at a high speed, thus looking like a tornado. You need a staff to be able to use this justu.
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PostSubject: Re: Jonuan Hilgaro   Jonuan Hilgaro EmptySun Jun 28, 2009 5:45 pm

I think you should start as academy student so you could develop your skills.
YOu will see then that you rp skills will be even better and you can write long texts about your personality, appearance, etc...

I need a second opinion.
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PostSubject: Re: Jonuan Hilgaro   Jonuan Hilgaro EmptySun Jun 28, 2009 8:38 pm

welll....at fiirst glance he appears to be okay...


but upon reading your RP sample I find that it's full of mistakes, such as grammar, punctuation, and spelling. I too must say that you have to become an Academy student.
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PostSubject: Re: Jonuan Hilgaro   Jonuan Hilgaro EmptySun Jun 28, 2009 9:39 pm

thats where i found my doubt...
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PostSubject: Re: Jonuan Hilgaro   Jonuan Hilgaro EmptyMon Jun 29, 2009 4:11 am

Lol. Fixed the rp sample a bit.
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PostSubject: Re: Jonuan Hilgaro   Jonuan Hilgaro EmptyMon Jun 29, 2009 4:31 am

I'm sorry jonu, but if that was indeed a sample of how you RP, it has to be correct the first time. It's okay, You'll just have to be an academy student. And psst, it's better to start out there anyways.
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PostSubject: Re: Jonuan Hilgaro   Jonuan Hilgaro EmptyMon Jun 29, 2009 5:17 am

Its cool. Besides, ill take your word for it being better to start out there. : )
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PostSubject: Re: Jonuan Hilgaro   Jonuan Hilgaro EmptyTue Jun 30, 2009 7:17 pm

You will start as academy student and you cant use the jutsus above E rank, until you graduate...Although i will let them there...

ApproveD^^
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