Shira Name Waiting on suggestions/approval

Name: Shira Name

Age: 12

Gender: Female

Village: Sand

Rank: Genin

Physical Appearance:

Shira has pearl-like white hair and bright violet eyes. She wears a black kimono and carries two fans which are used to manipulate water. She can occasionally be seen repainting the sides of her fans; they are never the same pattern two weeks in a row.

When Shira is angry her eyes tint a bright red, creating an ominous/intimidating feel about her.

Personality: Shira is an overall reticent character although she is very loyal to her friends and her village. If she had a choice between sacrificing her village or her life, she'd gladly give herself up. She'll never tell a friend's secret, even if she's pressured to do so.

Element: Water-Acheived
Wind-Unacheived

Weapon of Choice: Fans, Hapkido, Aikido

Fighting Type: (Main) Ninjutsu and (Sub) Taijutsu

Background:

Pre Academy
Shira was found in the desert, starving and dehydrated, by a nonspecific Jounin as a little girl. Pity was taken on her and she was allowed into the Sand village. She could not remember her name, nor her history and received the name 'Shira' because of her white hair.
Although many of the villagers treated Shira as an outcast, she quickly settled in and felt at home in Suna. Though life was hard for her, she was happy to have as home at all. She promised herself that a place where she was alone could become a place where she had friends that were like a familly to her.

Academy
After a year in Suna, Shira started to develop an interest in finding fragments of her past. In order to do so she became a shinobi, hoping to set a spark that would trigger old memories to return to her. As she flew through the courses in the Academy, she hadn't remembered a bit of her past, but discovered she had a talent for both Ninjutsu and Taijutsu.
Even though she started the academy when she was ten, she managed to fly through the courses and finish a year earlier than most of the students her age.

Genin
There's not much to say, she only recently became a shinobi and hasn't been on any major missions yet. Sofar it's only been training and oddjobs for her.

Clan Name: N/A -Character is an orphan.

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Jutsu:

Basic Jutsu:

Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu (Body Replacement Technique)
Rank: E
Description:
This jutsu lets the user quickly switch places with another nearby object, such as a plant (normally a section of a log), an animal, or even another person within reach, leaving the opponent open to a counter-attack. Explosive tags can be attached to the replacement for an added surprise, which Sasuke has done twice in the anime. Fundamentally, all ninja know this technique.

Name: Kage Bunshin no Jutsu (Shadow Clone Technique)
Rank: E?
Description:
This is the version we see Naruto use where the clones are solid and can disrupt the enviroment.

Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu (Escape Technique)
Rank: E
Type: Basic Skill
Description:
A basic jutsu, this jutsu allows a ninja to free themselves if they have been tied up.

Name: Mizu Kisoku no Jutsu – Water Breathing Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Water
Description: This jutsu allows a ninja to use chakra to extract oxygen from water and to block too much water from entering the lungs by forming a barrier around the bodily openings (nose, mouth, skin pores, etc). This jutsu negates certain water jutsu that rely on suffocation to kill and lasts for 20 posts.


Custom Jutsu =D (Does this have to be approved seperately? If so I'll move it.)

Name: Blooming Lotus
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Water
Description:
Using her fans to increase the power of her her water manipulation after an almost untracebly fast handsign, Shira generates water that soaks into the ground, and 'blooms' around her enemy. After blooming the petals fold, the water is extremally dense and plows them into the ground if aimed correctly. Unfortunately the jutsu takes a lot of concentration and can't be used in utter pandemonium. There is also a slim chance to escape the jutsu if the target is not in the center of the lotus.

RP Sample:

Shira heard footsteps in the distance but ignored them. So they'll see me performing a kada. There's not much to learn from that. She walked into the emptiness of the desert and held her hand out, half-opened and sharp like a knife. She flew through her kada, ignoring the everpresent stalker, knowing that they were nothing more than an annoyance; not any kind of threat. Suddenly she stopped in the middle of a high-kick and turned bright red like an apple. Of all the people in the village YOU were the one watching me?

Her eyes widened and her heart pounded. Really? This whole time you were the one watching me? She ran off in an instant. Her heart racing and her feet pounding on the ground.

If anyone can point out anything I may've done wrong I'd appreciate it.

ok, i have a few things.

First, your looks and personality could be a bit longer.

Second, direct water manipulation without handsigns would fall under a KKG ability and should be posted in the clan section.

History needs to be seperated into arcs
ex: Pre Academy arc, Academy arc, and Genin Arc

and once those are done il look again

Ok, I'll fix it.

Ok, I fixed it up a bit. Anything else or is it good?