Ultimate Shinobi : A Naruto RPG
We've moved locations please join us at our new location. www.ultimateshinobi.getgoo.us
Ultimate Shinobi : A Naruto RPG
We've moved locations please join us at our new location. www.ultimateshinobi.getgoo.us
Ultimate Shinobi : A Naruto RPG
Would you like to react to this message? Create an account in a few clicks or log in to continue.

Ultimate Shinobi : A Naruto RPG

JOIN WWW.ULTIMATESHINOBI.GETGOO.US
 
HomeLatest imagesSearchRegisterLog in

 

 Haran Naito {FINISHED}

Go down 
3 posters
AuthorMessage
ßΓ¡┼┼
Leaf Genin
Leaf Genin
ßΓ¡┼┼



Haran Naito {FINISHED} Empty
PostSubject: Haran Naito {FINISHED}   Haran Naito {FINISHED} EmptyThu Jun 25, 2009 2:14 am

Name: Naito, Haran

Age: 13

Gender: Female

Village: Sunagakure

Rank: Genin

Physical Appearance: Haran is a skinny girl, who is tall for her age. She is five feet and thirteen inches (5'13") and weighs in at about fifty-two (52) pounds (Lbs). She has pale skin and a dark brown eyes. Her hair is brown, it is about a foot away from her shoulders. As for clothes, she has a brown shirt that only covers half of her upper body, with a brown jacket over that. She usually only has one arm in the sleeve of the jacket. She wears brown shorts, that reach only a foot below her hips. She wears brown ninja sandals as well. As for her headband, she wears it across her forehead. But, it not the sand symbol, it has the sans kanji's written across it.
Spoiler:

Personality: Haran is a young, self-sufficient, mature ninja. She takes everything seriously, and rarely smiles. Whenever she does smile, it is a true smile. For some reason, Haran has always endured the taste of blood. She has a hard time staying on one topic because of her ADHD, and she looks on the downside of everything because she is pessimistic. She is a cold, quiet, mysterious girl. Overall, she is happy at times, other times she is not. The times Haran is happy is because she is thinking of what it would be like to be the kazekage. THe times Haran is mad is when she see's her friends getting picked on. There are many other reasons that even Haran doesn't know,and some she just doesn't tell people. The true reason is because of her parents...

Element: Earth, Wind

Weapon of Choice:
  • Kunai
  • Shuriken


Fighting Type: Ninjutsu, Puppet

Background:
Pre-Academy Arc:
Twelve years ago, 4:18 P.M, was when Haran had become part of this world. Her parents raised her in a small home. The day Haran will never forget; her first birthday. Why? That was the day...her parents abandoned her. For that reason, she hates her birthday. She plans on becoming the kazekage, so to do so she enrolled in the ninja academy when she was eleven, to begin her path to become the best! Why to become the best than take revenge on her parents? Simple. Haran doesn't hold grudges.

Academy Arc:
After Haran enrolled herself in the academy, at age eleven, she found the work easy. She didn't play with the other students, she figured it was a waste of time. Eventually, the exam came. Haran knew she was going to pass, so why bother studying? On her way home from the academy, she heard a faint scream. From her curiosity, she ran in that direction. She saw a trail of blood leading to a bandit hideout. She followed the trail and saw a cabin where the blood stopped in front of. Without a time to waste, Haran transformed into a bandit and snuck in the cabin. She found a young child in a cage, all tied up. She broke the lock to the cage using a rock and got the child out. She ran out of the hideout with the child, and safely returned the child to its mother. The next day, Haran aced the genin exams, and took a weird looking headband from the table. Instead of the sand symbol, there were sand kanji's. She now awaits to be put on a squad

Genin Arc:
Haran is currently a Genin. She is proud of how far she has come, even though genin are not that strong, she is still one step closer to become the kazekage one day!


Rp Sample: Haran was walking the streets of Sunagakure with the sun beating down on her head. She was used to the heat of Sunagakure, and still unable to withstand it. She looked up at the clear blue sky, ad she took a seat under a tree for shade. Haran then took out a water bottle and took a few sips. It was a beautiful day - no doubt. Haran looked at the little remainder of water and dumped it on her head for the cold water to cool her off. She rubbed the water around her face and sighed because she used the last of her water. She relaxed quietly in the shade of a tree and closed her eyes. Haran dozed off, and woke up in the middle of Sunas cool night. Haran got up and walked home and slept in her bed for the remainder of the night. She needed her rest for tomorrows training!

Clan Name: -

Kekei Genkai: -

Clan History: -


Jutsu: (Use the the following template)
The 3 Basic Academy Jutsu

Name: Bunshin no Jutsu - Clone Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. The Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja without substance. The copy resembles the ninja in every way. This clone can function as a distraction or as means to confuse one's opponent. As soon the Bunshin gets attacked or comes into contact with an opponent, it will disperse

Name: Henge no Jutsu - Transformation Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents

Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu - Change of Body Stance Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themself with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

Other commonly known Techniques

Name: Suimen Hokou no Waza - Act of Water Surface Walking
Rank: E
Type: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: A variation on the Kinobori no Waza (Act of Tree Climbing), the art of water surface walking allows a ninja to walk on water as if it was a solid surface. Focusing an even amount of chakra out of the soles of their feet, they can balance themselves on the very surface of the water

Name: Kinobori no Waza - Act of Tree Climbing
Rank: E
Type: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: Kinobori no Waza, the art of tree climbing serves a dual purpose. Taking part in Kinobori Shugyou (Tree Climbing Training) helps a ninja learn how to focus their chakra. It also teaches the ninja how to run up trees and walk on vertical walls. The training helps the ninja learn how to focus just the right amount of chakra to a particular part of their body. The amount needed to climb is small but it must be precise. The feet are regarded as the hardest location to master chakra focusing. So by gaining the art of this skill, the ninja will have any jutsu available (theoretically) because they will be able to focus their chakra as needed

Name: Explosion Tag: Activate
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: The user will activate an explosion tag. Normally, the tag will be placed by them, so they know where it is and can easily activate it.

Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu - Escaping Skill
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: A very basic technique that allows a ninja to escape from rope binds.

Name: Kai - Release
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Kai is a Ninjutsu technique which allows the ninja to avoid the effects of a Genjutsu illusion. After forming the needed handseals, the Genjutsu technique will not affect the ninja. The ninja can also use the technique on another individual who was unable to avoid the attack. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja touches the one affected to end the affect of the spell.

Name: Shunshin no Jutsu - Body Flicker Technique
Rank: D
Element: N/A
Description: Shunshin no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. The ninja will appear and disappear in an instant, allowing them to retreat or attack suddenly. To facilitate the movement the ninja will often use nearby elements such as mist, sand or leaves to mask their appearance or disappearance.

Doryuu Taiga - Earth Flow River
Art: Ninjutsu
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary Modifier
Range: Close (0-5m)
Description: Doton • Doryuu Taiga is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. The ninja will do the necessary hand seals and transform the ground upon which the enemy stands into a river of mud.

Shinjuu Zanshu no Jutsu - Double Suicide Decapitation Technique
Art: Ninjutsu
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary Modifier
Range: Close (0-5m)
Description: Doton • Shinjuu Zanshu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. The ninja will travel through the ground to appear below their target. They will then surprise their target by then pulling them into the ground. Once in the ground their target is thus immobilized.

Reppushou - Gale Wind Palm
Art: Ninjutsu
Rank: D
Type: Attack
Range: Close (0-5m), Mid (5-10m)
Description: Fuuton • Reppushou is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Wind Element. After forming the needed hand seals, the user will send a strong gust of wind towards their target while acting in conjunction with another thrown weapon, increasing its power and deadliness.

Fuusajin - Dust Wind
Art: Ninjutsu
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary Modifier
Range: Close (0-5m), Mid (5-10m)
Description: Using their fan, the user will blow a strong current that will cover the surrounding area in dust. This dust will serve to loosen the footing for any opponent who walks nearby.

Kugutsu no Jutsu - Puppetry Technique
Rank: C
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m)
Type: Attack, Defense, Supplementary

Kugutsu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that allows a ninja to use a puppet to attack from afar. Using their body's chakra, the ninja emits strings of chakra that run from their fingers to the puppet. The puppet itself can be loaded with many weapons and tools, allowing the puppet master to remain hidden while the puppet moves and attacks the target.


Last edited by Haran Naito on Sun Jul 26, 2009 8:11 am; edited 10 times in total
Back to top Go down
Absolute Greed.
Leaf Jounin
Leaf Jounin
Absolute Greed.



Haran Naito {FINISHED} Empty
PostSubject: Re: Haran Naito {FINISHED}   Haran Naito {FINISHED} EmptyThu Jun 25, 2009 9:34 pm

Don't you wan't any actual jutsu?

You may have more than one specialty/fighting type.

You may have 2 elements.

Your Rp sample is waaaaaaay to short to be a genin. I would suggest applying for the academy student rank.

You need more detail in the pre academy arc, and please make a genin arc. For instance, your intentions as a genin, goals, etc.
Back to top Go down
ßΓ¡┼┼
Leaf Genin
Leaf Genin
ßΓ¡┼┼



Haran Naito {FINISHED} Empty
PostSubject: Re: Haran Naito {FINISHED}   Haran Naito {FINISHED} EmptyWed Jul 08, 2009 8:34 am

EDIT!
Back to top Go down
ßΓ¡┼┼
Leaf Genin
Leaf Genin
ßΓ¡┼┼



Haran Naito {FINISHED} Empty
PostSubject: Re: Haran Naito {FINISHED}   Haran Naito {FINISHED} EmptyMon Jul 20, 2009 3:37 am

I edited again. Smile
Back to top Go down
Adam
The Fourth Hokage
The Fourth Hokage
Adam



Haran Naito {FINISHED} Empty
PostSubject: Re: Haran Naito {FINISHED}   Haran Naito {FINISHED} EmptySun Jul 26, 2009 8:04 am

Add some elemental jutsu to Earth and Wind.

And add the basic puppetry jutsu.

Then your good to go.
Back to top Go down
ßΓ¡┼┼
Leaf Genin
Leaf Genin
ßΓ¡┼┼



Haran Naito {FINISHED} Empty
PostSubject: Re: Haran Naito {FINISHED}   Haran Naito {FINISHED} EmptySun Jul 26, 2009 8:12 am

How's that?
Back to top Go down
Adam
The Fourth Hokage
The Fourth Hokage
Adam



Haran Naito {FINISHED} Empty
PostSubject: Re: Haran Naito {FINISHED}   Haran Naito {FINISHED} EmptySun Jul 26, 2009 8:35 am

Thats Fine Haran.

Approved.
Back to top Go down
Sponsored content





Haran Naito {FINISHED} Empty
PostSubject: Re: Haran Naito {FINISHED}   Haran Naito {FINISHED} Empty

Back to top Go down
 
Haran Naito {FINISHED}
Back to top 
Page 1 of 1
 Similar topics
-
» Naito Clan (complete)
» Middleditch (Finished)
» Kanima finished
» Tsuchi(finished)
» not finished

Permissions in this forum:You cannot reply to topics in this forum
Ultimate Shinobi : A Naruto RPG :: Creations :: Character Applications :: Approved Characters :: Sand Village :: Genin-
Jump to: