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sonja hammond
| Subject: sonja hammond{finished} Mon Jun 08, 2009 5:06 pm | |
| Name: Sonja Hammond Age: 17 Gender: female Village: Leaf Village Rank: Civilian Physical Appearance: she wears light purple all in one with leather bound sandals her dark hair is braided into three braids on her right side, she wears brown leather gloves to protect her hands while she fights from the hilt of her sword and has a leather belt around her waist which she hangs her pouch for money or things she needs. Her arms and legs and arms are bandaged to protect them in a battle. Personality: Sonja is quiet but very alert of her surroundings she watches all and tells none she has brown hair and blue eyes her mother taught her not to trust a man unless he shows her respect. Element: Water Weapon of Choice: does not have one Fighting Type: Weaponry, Ninjutsu Background: She was raised in the leaf village, when she was child she kept to herself, hiding in the trees branches and leaves. She fought boys at a young age because they picked on her for looking and acting like a boy, learning at a young age that she had to defend herself. Soon she would sit and watch the older boys practicing there moves and copy them till she became really good, taking down any boy who stood against her. On one day one boy jumped out at her and she spun kicked him breaking his nose, laughing she ran off home only to be told off by her parents for hitting the boy. It was then she decided to go to the academy and hewn her skills further learning what she hadn’t picked up and refining what she did. Heading out for the Academy she had met several characters who each had tried to take advantage of her but all coming of the worst for there actions. Soon she stood at the gates thought closed she longed to enter but first she had to find a place to stay. Sonja decided she didn't want to persue being a ninja after the academy, she learned the basics though. Including the water element at an older age. Rp Sample: Sitting in her room Jacqueline could not settle the events of the past few days now running threw her mind, standing she headed for the wardrobe that sat in the corner of the room and opened its heavy wooden doors, there sat her latest purchase bought before she left Providence, a short thing strapped black dress with matching heels, Jacqueline smiled and reached out feeling its smooth fabric it was one reason she had bought it. Taking it out she spread it over the bed and slipped off her white tee shirt letting it slid the dress slipped on easily she couldn’t help smile as she caught herself in the mirror. “If any man doesn’t like this he must be blind” she said to herself now grinning as she slipped on the shoes they gave her a few inches in height but to her that would be an advantage. After reaching for her brush she ran some lipstick over her lips, the only piece of makeup she owned. Picking up the soft brown leather pouch that lay on the bed side table Jacqueline slipped it on her thing belt then around her slender waist. Soon she was ready and headed for the door picking up the key as she moved passed where she had left it earlier and headed out the door letting it slam behind her. Jacqueline moved down the streets to where she had seen the club she already could tell it was jumping and it was only a little after ten she moved towards the doors of the club her hair blowing in the warm breeze that now blew from inland, she had decided that it was time to relax and one way she hadn't tried yet was going to the club. Standing just out side she heard the thump thump of the music, slowly pushing the door open she moved inside, the smell of sweat and drink reaching her nose tickling it as it hung thick like smoke in the air , but obviously there wasn't smoke being the cub was smoke free, instead they all hung around outside. Moving to the bar she slipped several pounds on the counter and ordered a jack Daniels as she swayed to the music as the bar man smiled taking the money for her tab, soon she could hold back no more and she moved onto the dance floor. As the music slowed she swayed from side to side moving her arms above her as her hips moved with the music her wings tucked tight against her body as the beat slowly kicked in, she slowly brought her arms down humming to the music as she moved she closed her eyes and did not noticed everyone clear the dance floor letting her dance in the center alone as the ban played Jacqueline began to forget where she was and sang to the music slowly relaxing as her wings unfolded behind her spreading to catch the light as she moved the stress of the past few days now gone as the music finished she looked around her cheeks turning pink as she move back to the bar for a second drink.
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| | | Çγαηide Çαηdγ ♥ Leaf Chuunin
| Subject: Re: sonja hammond{finished} Mon Jun 15, 2009 1:58 am | |
| You claimed your finished but I see some problems --
First of all, you need to add some sentences for your appearance and personality.
You have no background history on your character and no rp sample.
It says shes part of the Hyuuga clan yet she has a whole 'nother Kekai Genkai.
You only have two jutsu, with that you wouldn't be able to start as a genin. You would have to be an Academy Student. I'm pretty sure Genin can't even have A rank jutsu on here, dispite what you see in the actual anime/manga.
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| | | sonja hammond
| Subject: Re: sonja hammond{finished} Tue Jun 16, 2009 7:38 pm | |
| ok i have done as you asked, please let me know if anything thing is wrong | |
| | | Absolute Greed. Leaf Jounin
| Subject: Re: sonja hammond{finished} Tue Jun 16, 2009 9:40 pm | |
| ^_^ you're going to want a heck of a lot more jutsu. For instance, the hyuuga style fighting techniques. And if you are a weapon specialist, you'll want some weapon techniques, like manipulating advancing attack blades or string reeling technique. Also, if you're a hyuuga, you'll wan't to but taijutsu as one of your specialties.
Judging by your RP sample, you may want to go for academy student, as that rank teaches you how to RP.
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| | | sonja hammond
| Subject: Re: sonja hammond{finished} Fri Jun 26, 2009 4:57 pm | |
| ((Profile continued))
Clan Name: Hyuga clan, Kekei Genkai: All members born in to the family possess the Byakugan, a kekkei genkai that gives them extended fields of vision and the ability to see chakra. The Uchiha clan's Sharingan is believed to be descended from the Byakugan. Members of the clan are instructed in the use of the Gentle Fist style, which uses the Byakugan to view the opponent's Chakra Pathway System and deal precise blows to disable and impede the flow of chakra. Due to training in this style, Hyuga clan members tend to have excellent chakra control. This is emphasized in jutsu that utilize this chakra control, as well as the nuances of the Gentle Fist style. The clan's strongest techniques, like the Eight Trigrams Sixty-Four Palms, are only allowed to be taught to members of the main house. Clan History: the Hyuga-clan is the strongest clan of the Leaf. They are known for their very powerful style of hand-to-hand combat and their bloodline limit of the Byakugan. The Hyuga-clan consists of two family's: the main family and the branch family. The branch family is bound to protect the main family with their lives. Someone who is born in the branch family will never be the leader of their clan..
Jutsu: Name: Hyuuga Style Taijutsu (Gentle Fist) Rank: C Type: Weaponry Element: Wind Description: Hyuuga’s special jyuken-type hand-to-hand combat style, passed down from generation to generation. It causes damage by releasing chakra from the chakra hole in your hand, directly damaging the opponents Inner Coils System. It’s used in combination with the Byakugan since the inner coils system’s tenkutsus can’t be seen without some kind of special eyes. Even the most subtle blow can prove to be devastating.
Mizu Kyuuin [Water Absorption] Rank: C Requirements: Water. Description: Certain Suiton jutsus require water, this jutsu allows the user to absorb water for future use for a single jutsu whatever the rank is. In other words, the user has to charge his body with water before fighting, and during the battle the water reserved by the technique will serve as a source for a single jutsu execution only.
English Translation: Clone Technique Justu: Ninjutsu Rank: E Range: 0 - 5 meter Type: Offensive Attack Performer: All Shinobi Hand Seal: Goat (Sheep, Ram) - Pig (Boar) - Ox (Buffalo) - Dog - Snake (Serpent)
English Translation: Replacement Technique Justu: Ninjutsu Rank: E Range: 0 - 5 meter Type: Offensive Attack Performer: All Shinobi Hand Seal: None Kawarimi is the ability to quickly replace oneself with an object. The object will look like the person but it is really a replacement object. This technique is a quick way of escape.
English Translation: Transformation Technique Justu: Ninjutsu Rank: E Range: 0 - 5 meter Type: Offensive Attack Performer: All Shinobi Hand Seal: Tiger Henge no Jutsu is the ability to transform into any person or objects. A normal ninja is not able to detect the real from the fake. An experience ninja will be able to figure out the real person.
Name: Kinobori no Waza - Act of Tree Climbing Rank: E Type: N/A Element: N/A Description: Kinobori no Waza, the art of tree climbing serves a dual purpose. Taking part in Kinobori Shugyou (Tree Climbing Training) helps a ninja learn how to focus their chakra. It also teaches the ninja how to run up trees and walk on vertical walls. The training helps the ninja learn how to focus just the right amount of chakra to a particular part of their body. The amount needed to climb is small but it must be precise. The feet are regarded as the hardest location to master chakra focusing. So by gaining the art of this skill, the ninja will have any jutsu available (theoretically) because they will be able to focus their chakra as needed
Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu - Escaping Skill Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: A very basic technique that allows a ninja to escape from rope binds
Ikimono Benkou [Animal Speech] Rank: E Requirements: None. Description: This allows the user to learn the speech of a specific type of species or species (ie, cat, dog, bird, bug etc) deviating from the user. Meaning, that this jutsu is needed to speak to any species of animal/insect/reptile, that is different from the user. This is commonly used for pets to better to communicate.
Gijyuu Ninpou: Shikyaku no Jutsu [Beast Mimicry Ninja Art: Four Legs Technique] Rank: C Requirements: None. Description: After doing a few handseals, this technique gives some increase of strength and speed to the user, as well as lengthening their nails into claws. Travel in this mode is somewhat alike to a dog's fast run.
Shuriken Hazumi [Shuriken Ricochet] Rank: C Requirements: Shuriken. Description: This is a throwing technique that requires an exceptional amount of skill to perform. The user coats their shuriken with a thin layer of chakra. This chakra allows the shuriken to maintain speed while it is thrown to ricochet from surfaces till it hits its intended target. However, skills plays a great factor in hitting precise targets, unconventional accuracy with this jutsu specifically.
Soushuuha [Manipulate Advancing Blades] Rank: C Requirements: Kugutsu no Jutsu [Puppetry Technique]. Description: This technique allows the user to hover multiple kunai in the air while he approaches a target. The technique allows a ninja to unleash a torrent of kunai much more quickly than if each was thrown individually, as well as from different angles. This jutsu works to control and manipulate blades with chakra in a manner similar to the Puppet Technique. This ability does not require hand seals.
Suiton: Mizu Saiku [Water Release: Water Trick] Rank: E Requirements: None. Description: After forming a few handseals the user concentrates chakra in his hands. The user combines his chakra with oxygen and moisture to produce a small amount of water (A few drops). This technique is devastating while giving a wet willy or even bursting an overfilled water balloon.
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| | | Absolute Greed. Leaf Jounin
| Subject: Re: sonja hammond{finished} Sat Jun 27, 2009 3:50 am | |
| Now, by that RP sample, are you telling me that they are all going to be that large? | |
| | | sonja hammond
| Subject: Re: sonja hammond{finished} Mon Jun 29, 2009 3:45 pm | |
| Pat the sample is an average of what i can do, i am on a site that will only aloud minimum of 150 words and i there average at 300 words. the sample i put is 500 words.
it may take some time but i get there. | |
| | | Absolute Greed. Leaf Jounin
| Subject: Re: sonja hammond{finished} Mon Jun 29, 2009 9:38 pm | |
| Okay. I'm simply saying that it is in fact meant to be a sample, I want to see an average, not a huge post that'll make yah look good ^_^ | |
| | | sonja hammond
| Subject: Re: sonja hammond{finished} Tue Jun 30, 2009 11:07 am | |
| that is my average and its not meant to make me look good that's how i rp . | |
| | | Absolute Greed. Leaf Jounin
| Subject: Re: sonja hammond{finished} Tue Jun 30, 2009 10:09 pm | |
| Umm...if you're a civilian, why do you have jutsu and weapons? That's the only real problem I see with this app, other than that, it's approvable ^_^ | |
| | | Yondaime Sand Jounin
| Subject: Re: sonja hammond{finished} Tue Jun 30, 2009 10:56 pm | |
| Pat, adam talked to me about her app, for what i remember she is going to be his whife/girfriend here on the Rp and it will civilian since he is a bit retired of Rping... | |
| | | Absolute Greed. Leaf Jounin
| Subject: Re: sonja hammond{finished} Tue Jun 30, 2009 11:31 pm | |
| yeah, I understand that, but as a civilian, she shouldn't have any jutsu. | |
| | | Yondaime Sand Jounin
| Subject: Re: sonja hammond{finished} Tue Jun 30, 2009 11:38 pm | |
| let it...adam will then see it... | |
| | | Adam The Fourth Hokage
| Subject: Re: sonja hammond{finished} Wed Jul 01, 2009 5:29 am | |
| She learned the basics if you read she went to the Academy. Even A Civilian knows how to hit somebody with a weapon..
But this application isn't finished. Both of you leave it for now until Sonja has completed her application. | |
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