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PostSubject: Alernik Yari FINISHED APPROVE ME NAO WENCHES!   Mon Dec 21, 2009 2:05 am

General Information
Name: Alernik Yari

Nickname/Alias:

Age: 13

Gender: Male

Looks: Alernik has brown hair, brown eyes, and a little darker than fair skin tone. His nose is rather small in proportion to the rest of his body, and his eyes are rather small as well. He has bushy eyebrows, and a fairly short haircut, his bangs come to about 2-3 inches above his eyebrows. His head is not very wide, more tall than anything, and his has a slim jawbone. He has a big mouth, both looks wise, and personality wise. His ear are tucked in to an extent, and are not big at all, to any standards.

He has very broad shoulders, like a football player. He has those veins popping out slightly, like those buff wrestlers you see on TV. His arms are pretty muscular. He has quite large hands, compared to everyone else. His legs are all muscle, except for the underside of his thighs, and are short, his abdomen is the longer part of his body, though they are not incredibly short.

His mid-section is the only part of his body that gets him ridden off as a fat kid. His stomach is amazingly huge. He has moobs. But, his chest is muscular. He has slight asthma, but can deal with it until he collapses and immediately passes out. He gets frequent headaches, but they are minor ones, so he tends to ignore them. He wears glasses, due to his horrible vision as well.

His feet are large and kind of smelly. He tends to sweat a lot, due to him being slightly overweight. He stands about five foot eight and he weighs about one hundred and seventy eight pounds.


Personality: Alernik is kind of a modest person. When he recieves some sort of award for any reason, he usually gives the credit to those who helped him, and does not focus on himself. He is not self-centered whatsoever. He has self-pride, but he doesn't show it, if he does, it is a rare case.

Alernik is depressed most of the time, but he hides it well, it only shows when he is pissed or sad or something to that effect. He will talk to no one, and just pout or act like he is emo when this happens.

He has self-confidence in some things, but when he is a n00b in something, he tends to drop in that area, as many people do. But, when he knows he can do something, or ha a pretty good idea, he can do anything, he makes himself believe, and is determined to do the impossible.

When he is not acting like an emo kid, he CAN be a dick. Piss him off, and you become an enemy for life. Unless you were [previously befriended. He is quick to become OP'ed, and the little things piss him off. He is possible even more stubborn than a bull, and will not do anything people tell him to unless he knows it is right, or it is a life or death situation, he most of the time obeys superiority, and does what he is told, though.

He, the rest of the time, which is most of the time, is found to be either funny, or annoying. He is the type of person who you either love him or hate him. There is most likely not a person on this earth that does not know who he is. He is very spontaneous, and very outgoing. He talks to most people, if he knows them well. But, as he grows older, he tends to become more and more anti-social.

He does have sort of a shyness to him, though. He is shy around strangers, and feel weird and awkward when forced into a situation. He has somewhat of a contradictory attitude.

He has sort of a condescending attitude towards those who are Narcissistic, and to those who think they are God. He has sometimes condescending thoughts about himself as well, for he sometimes looks down on himself as well.

He is also a violent person. He can be a belligerent person when the time is right, or wrong. When he feels force is needed to be taken, he does so. He has no second thoughts about things like this, he was grown up around things like this, so he was taught that when someone either disrespects you, disrespect them back. His philosophy on this world is you have to give respect to get respect, and this take a large role on his life.

Personality Trait's: He likes to experience the next new thing. Always. He also like to perform in sports, and is very competitive.
Catch Phrase: (Does your char have any catch phrase's? Optional)

Clan Information

Clan Name: Yari Clan ( rest is in the following link. Lolz.

Kekkei Genkai: (What is your clan's set of abilities?)

Clan Symbol: (Does your clan have a symbol to represent it?)

Clan History: (History of your clan)


Rank Information:
Rank: Genin
Village: Sunagakure, born in Yukigakure

Skill Information

Skill Specialty: ( You may pick 2 skills: Ninjutsu, Genjutsu, Taijutsu, Kenjutsu, Weaponry, Medical, Puppetry, Fuuinjutsu)
Main: Ninjutsu/KKG
Sub: Weaponry

Elemental Affinity:
Main: Fire
Sub: Lightning

Special Characteristics: He has a larger AoE due to the fact his clan have things they control as minions, so if they are farther away, they are a part of him, increasing the AoE ( Area of Effect. )


Items/Weapons:

Name: Redbow
Appearance: The bow is a longbow made of oak. It has a red paint job, and it is solid enough to withstand a slash from adamant. It's string is longer to ensure farther shots.
Rank: C
Special Abilities: it's long string gives it about 10 more yards of range, making the range on it about 80 yards. It allows the use of fire arrows to be used with this weapon, and for some reason, will not allow any other elemental arrows to be used on this weapon.
Origin: Alernik grew up in Yukigakure, which is pretty much cut off from all trade. So, as a young child, he was taught by his clan members how to hunt. He grew attached to long ranged weapons, and began to use them everyday. He kept this and a couple others, and favors them over any other.

Name: Yellowbow
Appearance: The bow is a longbow made of oak. It has a yellow paint job, and it is solid enough to withstand a slash from adamant. It's tighter string is to ensure harder shots.
Rank: C
Special Abilities: The string is tighter on this bow, so when it is shot, it gos about 10-15 MPH faster than usual. They allow only the use of lightning arrows, it is like the paint color has an effect on the element of arrows that can be used in the arrow. Since the shot goes faster, occasionally when the arrow is shot, small bolts of lightning fire in every which direction, hitting the target if lucky.
Origin: Same as redbow.

Name: Dagger of Flame
Appearance: A dagger in which the blade is enchanted with fire chakra. The blade is completely red, and made of Silver. The blade has has branches on it, each about 3 inches loonger from the trink of it, which is about 7-10 inches, so you could kind of say it is a shortsword. The handle of it is about 7 inches long, and is made entirely of Teak Wood, the strongest wood in the world.
Rank: C
Special Abilities: The dagger is enchanted with fire chakra, and so if it hits, it inflicts burns on the enemy, hurting them with burns, and they have to make sure they are logical about where the burns are, and how much it really would hurt.
Origin: He was sparring a ninja in the academy with an elemental affinity of wind, so he bought a dagger, and enchanted it with fire, and owned him.

Name: Javelin of Great Piecring
Appearance: Weighs nearly 10 pounds, and can only be thrown about 30 yards, at the most. If it hits it's target, it has enough strength to kill someone upon impact. If it hits someone's leg, it could possible amuptate it, or simply just go right through.
Rank: C
Special Abilities: It has a lot of strength , that's really it.
Origin: It was originally found by Alernik in the forest about 5 miles west of Konoha, and he decided to keep it. He was smart enough to know it was a javelin, but he did not know if it had any sort of enchant on it. So, when he brought it to the town blacksmith, he had no problem sorting out this question, and he received an answer within a few moments.

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Jutsus: (Use the the following template)

NECROMANCY ]

This clickable link provides most of the necromancy. ( Keep in mind that all necromancy abilities are made of shadow. )

Name: Shadow Reaper
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: The user creates a special type of ghoul. The ghoul he creates is C Ranked, knows all the taijutsu, and now has a weapon. A scythe. This ghoul carries around a scythe, trying to attack the target. If he target becomes hit by the scythe, the target becomes just like one of Alernik's ghouls, though not under Alernik's control.

Name: Greater Ghoul
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: The user creates a ghoul of more power than his lesser ghoul. They are stronger, they now have a chakra pool, very small, and have enough intelligence to use their own jutsus. They are now about 4 feet 10 inches tall, weigh about 60 pounds, and are much more powerful, though Alernik, if need be, can control them completely.

KATON NINJUTSU

Name: Fire Pass
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fire
Description:This jutsu allows the user to transfer their fire chakra into a weapon or any sort of object without any sort of consequence.

Name:Lesser Fire Wall
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fire
Description: The user, after three hand signs forms a small wall, just barely enough to shield himself. About 6 feet tall 2 feet wide, and 3 inches thick. Any jutsu of water element, E Rank and above may destroy it, and any wind C Ranked and above may destroy it. Any other elemental ninjutsu must be D Ranked to destroy it, unless there is a chain, which changes the story.

Name:Lesser Fire Spike
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fire
Description: The user first performs 4 hand signs, and then rises their hands in the air for not even a second, and pushes them forward, looking a bit dramatic. He then raises blades of grass, now bunches together, and then enchants them with fire, and throws them at the enemy, but controls his chakra enough to where the grass does not burn.


Name: Barrier of Fire
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fire
Description: The user becomes surrounded by a somewhat large ball of fire, that moves with him. It can be destroyed completely by any sort of Water Ninjutsu D Ranked or higher, and C Ranked by anything else. Lasts for 3 posts.

Name: Fire Sphere
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fire
Description: The user performs a few hand signs, and flicks their fingers, and a bubble of fire chakra, about 3 feet in diameter, appears, made of fire chakra. The user, while in here, is able to restore chakra, and if in here long enough, untouched, is able to get rid of any sort of life-threatening effect. Can use, of these effects, he is able, with this jutsu to perform a chakra halt, and a stun.

Name: Fire Border
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fire
Description: The user performs three hand signs and then makes a line of fire about 20 yards long, and about 5 yards high. And maybe about 6 or 7 inches thick. it would take multiple ninjutsu to take this down, but the base is the weak spot, as is for many fires. This provides good hiding spots if used correctly, and also a great tactical area to use as well.

Background Information (Here is where you will give the complete history of your character. If you can please put it into Arc's.)

PRE-ACADEMY ARC

PART 1


Alernik was born on the banks of a river, just before dusk. They were just south of the village of Yukigakure, so it was REALLY cold. The people traveling with Alernik's father, who was returning from a giant mission, had to provide much warmth and shelter. His mother was nearly freezing as it was, for she had frostbite on one of her hands, and on the side of her calf. After a few hours of haste, and struggle, Alernik was then born. He nearly froze to death after a few hours, but he lived through it, and adjusted very quickly.

PART 2


As a small child, Alernik was very nosy, curious, and annoying, but very intelligent. His parents were normal, both had jobs, and worked to maintain a living. Though, they barely made enough to support the house, and all other bills, and actually have enough left over to have their child be happy and content with life.

Though his parents fought, argued and bickered most of the time, they treid to maintain control of themselves and all the happiness they could squeeze out of each other for his sake. But, it only worked out for a few years, then things turned reall sour. Alernik was forced to move with his mother, on Mothers' Day, mind you, to live with his grandmother.

He, not too long after, grew tired of living like this, it ws just like his parents. Arguing, bitching, and bickering. He wanted to have no more of it. His family was no help either, for he hated most of them, bu loved them only because he had to. He had tried to run away, but he was too predictable, he only had mainly 2 or 3 options to go to, all nearby. His mother was stupid, but not this stupid.

When he hit his early double-digit years, as a child, he began to find what he was best at. Sports. This was what he did to get himself out of that hellhole most of the time. He had some friends, but not that many reliable ones. He used them as a key, but the door was locked, metaphorically speaking. If only he could get out.....

ACADEMY ARC


Alernik was a quick learner, and excelled mainly in exams. Many did not believe in him at first, including himself, but they learned, as they went on, he was a quick learner. He did not do well when having to perform them, but he did it. Averagely. He didn't care, he aced mainly every test he took.

He wasn't very studious, and he was considered to be the class clown. He got scolded for this, but he didn't really care, it gave him attention. He never ever studied, he felt he didn't need to. He only studied only when it was a mid-term or a final exam. His class clown-ism did not pay off. The teacher were impressed with his exam work, fine with his performance, but unappeased by his little tricks and jokes. They wanted to fail him, but this was no reason to. They could not help the boy. He continued to do what he wished, and they knew of his background, and thy way he REALLY was, so they did not want to disappoint him further.

He passed on easily, making genin, as most did in his class, except for a few. He was ready for this. He knew the academy jutsu, and his uncle had already taught him a few ninjutsu skills and techniques as well. He was skilled in renjutsu, or archery/ranged attacks.

GENIN ARC


Alernik now spends his days as a genin. Since he is new to this rank, and just graduated form the academy, he is not quite sure what to do now. Though he frequently leaves letters to the Hokage requesting a team. He gets no response. The Hokage is always busy, he knew, but he figured his shinobi were most important. Eh, he didn't mind. If he had to wait for the Chuunin Exams to actually do something, he could wait.

He received a letter form the Hokage, a few weeks, he retured it after the third letter, maybe he had gotten sick of hearing from him over and over and over again. He opened it, and it said
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He was very excited. He looked to the sky, and mouthed the words 'thank you' after he received this letter. He now really felt like a genin. And this was all new to him. He could not have been happier.

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PostSubject: Re: Alernik Yari FINISHED APPROVE ME NAO WENCHES!   Wed Dec 23, 2009 4:29 am

Almost done, just too lazy to finish xD
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PostSubject: Re: Alernik Yari FINISHED APPROVE ME NAO WENCHES!   Wed Dec 23, 2009 6:13 am

Uh... renjutsu?
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PostSubject: Re: Alernik Yari FINISHED APPROVE ME NAO WENCHES!   Wed Dec 23, 2009 6:18 am

Ranged Weaponry Jutsu/Mastery
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PostSubject: Re: Alernik Yari FINISHED APPROVE ME NAO WENCHES!   Wed Dec 23, 2009 7:02 am

just put weaponry, and you can't have mastery
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PostSubject: Re: Alernik Yari FINISHED APPROVE ME NAO WENCHES!   Wed Dec 23, 2009 7:05 am

k and does it really matter if i post in my other accounts app, but i can't obviously edit it.
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PostSubject: Re: Alernik Yari FINISHED APPROVE ME NAO WENCHES!   Wed Dec 23, 2009 7:21 am

No its fine here. Just know that you can't ever post as your other accounts character in this account or vice versa
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PostSubject: Re: Alernik Yari FINISHED APPROVE ME NAO WENCHES!   Tue Jan 05, 2010 2:18 am

So. Your telling me that you carry 4 bows, a 10 lb javelin, and a knife with you? Unless you have a sealing scroll, thats nearly phsyically unfeasible for a genin.

Secondly, you say Adamant in the weapon description. If you mean Adamantine, the metal, than your bows (which are wood) are pretty much unbreakable, as adamatine, i do believe, is one of the ahrdest metals in the entire world. That along would bump the rank of your weapons up.

Now, for chakra conduction with elemental chakra, your bows themselves wouldnt change the arrow into a specific element. Doing so would actually cause injury to yourself, due to the general form of the bow. You would need to have special arrows that were chakra conductive in relation to the elements, as when you use a bow, the arrows would be in contact with your hands. So, in essence, you would need to have a specialty C-Rank bow which aim and distance via chakra enhancement, and then specialtty arrows instead of the 4 bows you have.

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Name:Lesser Fire Wall
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fire
Description: The user, after three hand signs forms a small wall, just barely enough to shield himself. About 6 feet tall 2 feet wide, and 3 inches thick. Any jutsu of water element, D Rank and above may destroy it, and any wind B Ranked and above may destroy it. Any other elemental ninjutsu must be C Ranked to destroy it, unless there is a chain, which changes the story.

E-Ranked water, D-Ranked Earth, Lightning, and Fire, C-Ranked Wind, unless you have an innate ability that increases the strength of your fire.


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Name: Fire Sphere
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fire
Description: The user performs a few hand signs, and flicks their fingers, and a bubble of fire chakra, about 3 feet in diameter, appears, made of fire chakra. The user, while in here, is able to restore chakra, and if in here long enough, untouched, is able to get rid of any sort of life-threatening effect. Like a blindness, poison, stun, chakra stun/halt.

Blindness only if its from a flash bomb or the like, stun and chakra halt are fine.

Poison would be no. Not unless you happen to carry the antidote, as curing poison would eb a medical specialty, which you do not have,

Secondly, you would be at risk for staying in there for more than 3 posts due to heat waves, as the base of the fire is normally always the hottest. This also should drain more chakra than you could recover to stay active, but I can see how you mean it to work, so thats fine.



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Name: Barrier of Fire
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fire
Description: The user becomes surrounded by a somewhat large ball of fire, that moves with him. If touched by an enemy personally, they will most likely get that type of burn that just does not go away. If a weapon touches it, it will instantly become untouchingly hot, and they will be forced to drop it. Hence, the only way to destroy it is by ninjutsu.

In order to heat a weapon, to unbearbly hot temperatures, the rank would need to be atleast B-Rank, as you can hold a metal item held over a candle for a decent period of time, before it cools. Also, if you keep this up for an indefinete period of time, you will easily run out of chakra, or pass out from heat exhaustion. This makes fighting you easy as anyone with brains would just stay away from you until that happened.
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PostSubject: Re: Alernik Yari FINISHED APPROVE ME NAO WENCHES!   Mon Jan 18, 2010 9:31 pm

Fixed, and will add the Arrows into the weapon creation.
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PostSubject: Re: Alernik Yari FINISHED APPROVE ME NAO WENCHES!   Mon Jan 25, 2010 6:14 am

bumpity bump bump

approve me nao plz
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PostSubject: Re: Alernik Yari FINISHED APPROVE ME NAO WENCHES!   Wed Jan 27, 2010 3:46 am

Bump....? I said i would make the stuff after I am approved... so approve me and it will be done.. color is all i ask for.
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PostSubject: Re: Alernik Yari FINISHED APPROVE ME NAO WENCHES!   Sat Jan 30, 2010 8:38 am

bump.
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