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PostSubject: the Yamanaka clan   Mon Dec 07, 2009 9:48 pm

Clan Name: Yamanaka

Kekkei Genkai:The Yamanaka clan specializes in manipulating the minds of their opponents. Our techniques range from transferring consciousness to communicating telepathically. Blond hair and blue eyes seem to be characteristic of Yamanakas.



Secret Clan Jutsu:

Name: Mind Body Disturbance Technique
Type: nin
Rank: B
Element: N/A
Description: This technique is a variation on the Mind Body Switch Technique. Rather than transfer all of the user's consciousness into the target, this jutsu sends only a spirit of confusion, causing them to attack their allies. Although the target is aware of what they are doing, they are unable to stop themselves. This technique can also be used to simply stun the opponent so they can't move. This technique has also shown the ability to transport one body and the user to a different location

Name: Mind Body Switch Technique
Type: nin
Rank: C
Element: N/A
Description: This technique allows the user to enter the mind of another person or even an animal. The user transfers their consciousness to the opponent, giving them complete control of the body for a short period of time. Their original body is left defenseless while this jutsu is active, leaving it susceptible to attack until they return. The mind transfer is slow-moving, moves in a straight direction, and takes some time to return to the user's body if it misses. Because of these reasons it should only be used on immobilized targets. Similarly, if the opponent's will is strong enough, they can force the user from their body, as Sakura Haruno does to Ino Yamanaka. Lastly, should any physical injury befall the victim's body while the mind-link is active, it would cause the user's body to also receive those same injuries. For example, should the victim's arm be detached, the user's arm would be detached as well, leading to the conclusion that, should the victim die, the user would also die.

Name: Yamanaka Clan Telepathy
Type: nin
Rank: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: This jutsu allows the user to telepathically communicate with other people. The user must control their chakra in order to keep the telepathic link with the designated communicator. If they are startled or attacked when they are concentrating the link breaks.

History: The Yamanaka clan runs a flower shop The Yamanaka clan seems to have a special relationship with the Akimichi clan and Nara clan. For at least two generations, members of these three families have formed an "Ino-Shika-Cho trio," named after the first part of the names of the members. The Yamanaka members are the Ino in the trio.


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PostSubject: Re: the Yamanaka clan   Tue Dec 08, 2009 7:44 pm

as done as i can make it with me being the idiot i am
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PostSubject: Re: the Yamanaka clan   Wed Dec 09, 2009 3:44 am

Denied, too similar to Kaguya's Bloodline.
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PostSubject: Re: the Yamanaka clan   Wed Dec 09, 2009 9:54 pm

allright it is fixed
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PostSubject: Re: the Yamanaka clan   Wed Dec 09, 2009 10:01 pm

Ok, for your KKG, it is very vague and loose imo. You need to make it more clear cut and definite. Also feeding every 13 posts seems a bit extreme, Id say make it like once a month or something. Or at least once a week.

Now on to your current jutsu. For starters, you HAVE to use the jutsu template for these.

Consume: Your opponent would have to be dead and give a better description of the process

Dark Snake : Describe the method of capture and size

Dark Armor: describe the deffenses of the armor, what level jutsu it can stand and how much. Does it have a weakness to a certain element.

Dark Explosion: atm, way to OP. To fix this, describe the process MUCH better and also make the radius about twenty meters tops.
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PostSubject: Re: the Yamanaka clan   Wed Dec 09, 2009 10:04 pm

aaaaaaaaaah allright
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PostSubject: Re: the Yamanaka clan   Thu Dec 10, 2009 1:50 am

done if it dont get approved i will work on it later
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PostSubject: Re: the Yamanaka clan   Sun Dec 13, 2009 1:23 pm

There is already a clan based on "Darkness Chakra", sorry but denied.

Try another idea ^^

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PostSubject: Re: the Yamanaka clan   Mon Dec 14, 2009 5:05 am

done again
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PostSubject: Re: the Yamanaka clan   Wed Dec 16, 2009 12:21 am

there is already a clan which gives the user acute control over lightning.
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PostSubject: Re: the Yamanaka clan   Wed Dec 16, 2009 2:02 am

-sighs- back to the drawing board
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PostSubject: Re: the Yamanaka clan   Mon Dec 28, 2009 8:30 am

bump
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PostSubject: Re: the Yamanaka clan   Sat Jan 02, 2010 5:48 am

bump

look at this please
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PostSubject: Re: the Yamanaka clan   Fri Jan 08, 2010 5:14 pm

Name: Nova
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Light
Description: The user makes a few hand signs, focuses his chakra to his hands, and throws the chakra in the air above him. The area around them then begins to be really bright. As bright as a nova. The user is able to see fine in this, but the opponent is nearly blinded.

~ C Rank

Name: Faded
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Light
Description: The user creates a faded light, making it slightly lighter, but it gets brighter and brighter when coming upon an enemy, making this useful against clones and useful against fleeing opponents, or hiding ones.

~ C Rank

Name: Chakra Blind
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Light
Description: The user has a chakra conducting device, that they have to inject, or get inside the enemy. This gets in the enemy's bloodstream, makes an insane amount of light, and lights the enemy's chakra pool, and then slightly enlarges, and blocks the chakra from being sent out, until it dissolves 4 posts later. This allows the opponent not to use any jutsu that requires chakra.

~ Chakra conducting device? Inject or get inside? Bloodstreams are Chakra? Chakra is a person's life force but I am fairly certain it isn't their blood. Is this thing like a needle or something? Cos if it is a device, make a piece of equipment, not a Jutsu. :3

Name: Self Light
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Light
Description: The user lights their body up, making their vision improved, and makes them easier t notice, which could help or hinder them. This also applies for clones and minions. ( highly suggested to not do this jutsu when alone. )

~ Vision improved in what way?

Name:blood transfer
Rank:D
Type: taijutsu
Element:N/A
Description: we leap towrds the target and bite on an area of the body and start to drain the blood the blood well feed us and make us stronger if we feed to much we well go insane for the next 4 post.

~ Sounds like a clan in itself, of blood suckers, sorry but denied.

Name:controle bite
Rank: D
Type: taijutsu
Element: N/A
Description:We bite the target not sucking out the blood this time but either turning them into a new clan member,a mind slave or insane by a poison that we let out threw the bite the poison works it's way up into the oppents mind and slowly eats away at it when three post are up the one who was bite become a new member for the clan,a mind slave or just insane.

~ Overpowered, please remove this above Jutsu. Also, you don't have a reason to have poison, so please if you plan on making anything including poison in the future, don't.
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PostSubject: Re: the Yamanaka clan   Sat Jan 16, 2010 9:04 pm

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PostSubject: Re: the Yamanaka clan   Sat Jan 16, 2010 9:26 pm

This is a Canon clan, and therefore does not need to be made.
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PostSubject: Re: the Yamanaka clan   Sat Jan 16, 2010 9:45 pm

so i need to ask a admin if i can be a Yamanaka
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PostSubject: Re: the Yamanaka clan   Sun Jan 17, 2010 9:24 am

You do not need to ask for permission to join a canon clan. If there is room in the clan (check the avaliability list) then your allowed in. I am sure that there is no limit on Yamanaka entries, so you will be fine. ^^

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