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.Death Angel
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PostSubject: Kokuhyou no Makai. - Damnation of Hell.   Tue Nov 10, 2009 8:51 am

Name: Kokuhyou no Makai. - Damnation of Hell.
Rank: A-S
Type: Kenjutsu.
Element: Raiton[Lightning Release.]
Description: Using a massive amount of power stored in Yuui, he can release a wave of power that is in the shape of a large wave or something much darker. With the power of the blade, Yuui can release this only within the third and high Berserk stages. Anything lower will not be able to release this Jutsu.

A Rank: This rank can be accessed through the Third Berserk stage. Swinging his sword either upwards, downwards, sideways or diagonally, he can produce a very large wave of pure, raw chakra. This wave can be from 2-10m in Full length. This blast can only travel in a straight line, but is very difficult to stop. With a powerful enough Defensive or Offensive attack similar to this can stop the motion, but also cause a backlash and quickly blast itself into an explosion. This can break through B ranked Defense/Offense Jutsu and below. And some A ranked.

S Rank: This rank can be accessed through the Fourth Berserk Stage. Swinging his sword with more force than the A rank, the wave can be shot out from any angle, and can be about from 10-15m in height. And can also be from 5m in width. This wave can blast through most A rank Defense/Offense Jutsu, and some S rank. This takes an almost immeasurable amount of chakra to pull off this technique without flaw. Same effects from the A rank apply here as well.


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PostSubject: Re: Kokuhyou no Makai. - Damnation of Hell.   Tue Nov 10, 2009 6:06 pm

Two words: Getsuuga Tenshou. Lol.

How big are these waves? As big as your swing's height, or are they gigantic? Also, how fast do they travel? How do they travel, in a straight line or what?

Concerning the things it can break through, clarify a little. Saying it can break through most density steel is very vague, try things like "it can break through defenses/attacks of so and so rank with ease".
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PostSubject: Re: Kokuhyou no Makai. - Damnation of Hell.   Wed Nov 11, 2009 9:44 am

One, probably yes, Cause i was watching bleach and said to myself, "I should make one of my own! xD"

Bleach 236-245 so far.


And.

Workin' on that. =3
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PostSubject: Re: Kokuhyou no Makai. - Damnation of Hell.   Thu Nov 12, 2009 7:18 am

Done. ~
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PostSubject: Re: Kokuhyou no Makai. - Damnation of Hell.   Thu Nov 12, 2009 5:16 pm

Whoa, seriously? 20m and 35m? Those are gonna be some gigantic waves, like skyscraper big. Lower the max height in both ranks. Make the A-Rank one 10 metres max and the S-Rank one 15 metres max.
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PostSubject: Re: Kokuhyou no Makai. - Damnation of Hell.   Fri Nov 13, 2009 4:38 am

Done. ;3
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PostSubject: Re: Kokuhyou no Makai. - Damnation of Hell.   Sat Nov 14, 2009 12:05 pm

Alrighty, unless someone can spot a mistake, approved for training. Knock yourself out.
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PostSubject: Re: Kokuhyou no Makai. - Damnation of Hell.   Thu Nov 19, 2009 9:55 pm

1.3k words!~
YAAAAAAAAAAAY!~ Easy peasy. ;3
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PostSubject: Re: Kokuhyou no Makai. - Damnation of Hell.   Thu Nov 19, 2009 10:21 pm

wheres the link
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PostSubject: Re: Kokuhyou no Makai. - Damnation of Hell.   Thu Nov 19, 2009 11:06 pm

Working on it, don't push me. <<
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PostSubject: Re: Kokuhyou no Makai. - Damnation of Hell.   Thu Nov 19, 2009 11:07 pm

Well you posted "1.3 k words," so i assumed you had finished it
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PostSubject: Re: Kokuhyou no Makai. - Damnation of Hell.   Thu Nov 19, 2009 11:33 pm

I just added the words I NEED to put up...
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