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PostSubject: Several Jutsus[Complete]   Sat Aug 29, 2009 1:24 am

Name:Wind Suffocation
Rank:C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Wind
Description:After completing a set of handsigns, the user will make an outwards motion with his hand. Making and manipulate the air around the opponent to leave away from the opponent. This jutsu will 'almost' take the opponent's air around him to breath on. This jutsu will cover about a 2 meter radius. And the opponent could just leap away from the area. This jutsu will take effect in one post. Right after it's performed, the opponent will start to feel the effect.
Rp Sample:
Misuto quickly began to form handsing, hoping to suffocate the opponent with one of his most powerful jutsus. And after all it was yet to be overpowered by an enemy. After he finished the handsigns and lokke dta the opponent. He slammed his hands together. Then began to move his hands outwards position. Not knowing that the wind is actually being taken fromhim at the moment, the opponent will be without air in no time.

Name:Doton Hebi
Rank:C
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:Doton
Description:After completing a set of handsigns, the user will pound the ground with his palm opened. This will make snakes made out of earth pop out and go after the foe. Until it finally grabs it. To do this, the opponent must stay still and the user will have to maintain his hands on the ground to control the snakes. Once the snakes grab his prey it will bind him and not let go.
Rp Sample:
Misuto quikcly began to perform handsigns. Hoping this owuld work, if not this would be the end for him, as he used his little bit of chakra left to end this match. As he finished his last handsign, he slamme dhis handsign on the ground. Quickly focusing on the opponents movements and trap him. Aparrently he waited till the opponent's was in the floor and not able to move. He waited with patient, as the opponent slightly touched the ground with its tippy toes. "Now" Misuto shouted as the snakes began to from actually chasing the opponent aorund the field. If the oppopnent was ctahced upon these snakes, he would actually be tied up, or even ripped in pieces.
Link:http://ultimateshinobi.forummotion.com/training-area-f136/training-areaopen-t2665.htm(1 Post)

Name:Gyorai Shin-Torpedo Needle
RankC-rank
Type: Ninjutsu
Element:N/A
Description:A ninjutsu technique, that needs to be used with senbons, or needles. Whcihever you may like. By taking some senbons tip to the ground. The user can manipulate the needles underground with its chakra. Then making them appear at a specific area in which the user may like. With this you can hit the opponent and cut him deeply from underneath. These senbons go up to ankle level. So it cant really jump out of the ground and into the air. As soon as they are about half way out of the ground they will be 'deactivated'.
Rp Sample:After picking up soem senbons,about 15 senbons from his pouch. Misuto then began to throw them in the air, as they fell upon the ground in its tip side. They then sowly dugged themselves underground as Misuto controlled them with chakra. Traveling underground, at extreme speed. After about 2 seconds, Misuto quickly made rise up from beneath the ground making the senbons hopefully pierce through flesh upon the opponents skin.
Link:http://ultimateshinobi.forummotion.com/training-area-f136/training-areaopen-t2665.htm(2 Post)


Last edited by +Brian+ on Tue Sep 15, 2009 3:55 am; edited 3 times in total
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PostSubject: Re: Several Jutsus[Complete]   Wed Sep 02, 2009 11:02 pm

Done~ I will rpovide the link right after I get these approved.
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PostSubject: Re: Several Jutsus[Complete]   Sat Sep 05, 2009 12:06 am

Bump~
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PostSubject: Re: Several Jutsus[Complete]   Thu Sep 10, 2009 3:59 am

+Brian+ wrote:
Name:Wind Suffocation
Rank:C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Wind
Description:After completing a set of handsigns, the user will make an outwards motion with his hand. Making and manipulate the air around the opponent to leave away from the opponent. This jutsu will 'almost' take the opponent's air around him to breath on. This jutsu will cover about a 10 meter radius. And the opponent could just leap away from the area. This jutsu will take effect in one post. Right after it's performed, the opponent will start to feel the effect.
Rp Sample:
Misuto quickly began to form handsing, hoping to suffocate the opponent with one of his most powerful jutsus. And after all it was yet to be overpowered by an enemy. After he finished the handsigns and lokke dta the opponent. He slammed his hands together. Then began to move his hands outwards position. Not knowing that the wind is actually being taken fromhim at the moment, the opponent will be without air in no time.
This seems too OPed, and more like a B-Rank at the least.

The other two I find approval-ready, so go ahead and train those and we'll get them approved ^^
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PostSubject: Re: Several Jutsus[Complete]   Fri Sep 11, 2009 1:17 am

I dont really get how is the wind jutsu OPed when you can easily leap off the area. Is easy enough and to aviod.
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PostSubject: Re: Several Jutsus[Complete]   Sat Sep 12, 2009 9:32 pm

~Bump!!!
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PostSubject: Re: Several Jutsus[Complete]   Tue Sep 15, 2009 3:05 am

Name:Wind Suffocation
Rank:C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Wind
Description:After completing a set of handsigns, the user will make an outwards motion with his hand. Making and manipulate the air around the opponent to leave away from the opponent. This jutsu will 'almost' take the opponent's air around him to breath on. This jutsu will cover about a 10 meter radius. And the opponent could just leap away from the area. This jutsu will take effect in one post. Right after it's performed, the opponent will start to feel the effect.
Rp Sample:
Misuto quickly began to form handsing, hoping to suffocate the opponent with one of his most powerful jutsus. And after all it was yet to be overpowered by an enemy. After he finished the handsigns and lokke dta the opponent. He slammed his hands together. Then began to move his hands outwards position. Not knowing that the wind is actually being taken fromhim at the moment, the opponent will be without air in no time.



This is indeed OP

10 meters is 33 feet, thats a very long distance to jump. Reduce it to 2 meters.


Name:Gyorai Shin-Torpedo Needle
RankC-rank
Type: Ninjutsu
Element:N/A
Description:A ninjutsu technique, that needs to be used with senbons, or needles. Whcihever you may like. By taking some senbons tip to the ground. The user can manipulate the needles underground with its chakra. Then making them appear at a specific area in which the user may like. With this you can hit the opponent and cut him deeply from underneath.
Rp Sample:After picking up soem senbons,about 15 senbons from his pouch. Misuto then began to throw them in the air, as they fell upon the ground in its tip side. They then sowly dugged themselves underground as Misuto controlled them with chakra. Traveling underground, at extreme speed. After about 2 seconds, Misuto quickly made rise up from beneath the ground making the senbons hopefully pierce through flesh upon the opponents skin.
Link:http://ultimateshinobi.forummotion.com/training-area-f136/training-areaopen-t2665.htm(2 Post)


This is definetely over powered. It allows you to kill an opponent without them even knowing it.
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PostSubject: Re: Several Jutsus[Complete]   Tue Sep 15, 2009 3:09 am

Pat you should know that this is a cannon tech....right?

And, reduced.
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PostSubject: Re: Several Jutsus[Complete]   Tue Sep 15, 2009 3:16 am

Cannon doesn't mean acceptable, because yes I do.

If you care to look, all of the banned techniques are canon.

For some reason you people seem to confuse canon and over powered.
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PostSubject: Re: Several Jutsus[Complete]   Tue Sep 15, 2009 3:19 am

No, I'm not confused at all. What I really meant id that this technique, cant kill. But the most damage it could do is cut the opponent. Or nail his leg or something. But anyway, I throw the senbons in the air or let them drop in the ground. Surely or maybe the character sees what im doing, what is what they gonna think of ,what im doing.?

What will they think I'm doing?
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PostSubject: Re: Several Jutsus[Complete]   Tue Sep 15, 2009 3:34 am

You say that now. But there are a million ways to covertly place them into the ground. Second, it does not say the senbon come up only at the feet. You could launch one from the ground and pierce the throat, or through the nose, up into the skull and the brain.
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PostSubject: Re: Several Jutsus[Complete]   Tue Sep 15, 2009 3:53 am

Well, is it accepted, if I add that the senbon only comes out up to ankle level?
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PostSubject: Re: Several Jutsus[Complete]   Thu Sep 17, 2009 2:14 am

BumP Babbeee!!!!
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PostSubject: Re: Several Jutsus[Complete]   Thu Sep 17, 2009 4:59 am

Ankle level I'll allow. Edit that in.
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PostSubject: Re: Several Jutsus[Complete]   Thu Sep 17, 2009 7:29 am

Its already been fixed. Just need to approve.
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PostSubject: Re: Several Jutsus[Complete]   Fri Sep 18, 2009 2:49 am

Then approved for training. Wind Suffocation is left.
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