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PostSubject: RAWR (Pending)   Thu Jun 18, 2009 9:45 pm

Name: Earth Style: Spiked Pit, Metal Rain technique (Doton: gosunkugi Ouchi Kaneame no jutsu)
Rank: S
Type: Ninjutsu/weaponry.
Element: Earth
Description: This is Near's best Earth style technique. This technique is massive, covering about a quarter of an acre, but instantly saps all of Near's chakra, knocking him out for hours. For this technique, Near will unseal a gigantic scroll, using his Kekkei genkai's sealing method. He will then roll it out on the ground in front of him. As he does, he will form a handseal. Using his clan's release burst technique, he releases about 1500 kunai into the air from the scroll. While they launch up, Near makes about 25 handseals, ending on the Snake handseal. The first thing that happens is 10 spikes will jut out of the ground, forming a cone around Near. After that, Thousands of large, pointed, deadly spikes of earth will jut up from the ground, until the ground area where activated is nothing but spikes. The spikes are all verticle, and leave no room to hide behind the. The spikes also leave no ground to stand on. Even Near is affected by this technique. After the spikes have formed, the kunai will begin falling, forming a rain of kunai down on The enemy. Their is a chance of death when using this technique, However, the cone of spikes will prevent almost all damage from kunai, minus one or two that slip in. this does leave near very vulnerable, for if the opponent survives, Near is left in an averaged strengthed cone of spikes, knocked out, with no chakra.
Link: Will train when approvable....


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PostSubject: Re: RAWR (Pending)   Thu Jun 18, 2009 10:53 pm

A few things:

When the tech covers a quater of an acre 1500 kunai sound a bit few and only 15 handseals? that is quite few for such a large S rank.

And then the main issue; this is a suicide tech!!!!

"instantly saps all of Near's chakra, knocking him out for hours" and "Even Near is affected by this technique. After the spikes have formed, the kunai will begin falling, forming a rain of kunai down on both the enemy and Near."

Then you WILL die

But if this is what you want, then add a suicide note and train away.
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PostSubject: Re: RAWR (Pending)   Thu Jun 18, 2009 10:55 pm

Heh, Risk of Death, it's not guaranteed.
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PostSubject: Re: RAWR (Pending)   Thu Jun 18, 2009 10:58 pm

No certain death; you pass out and a whole lot of deadly spikes and kunai is comming your way, so unless you have some incredible friend you ARE death for sure.

But if you disagree, then I'll let Adam decide.
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PostSubject: Re: RAWR (Pending)   Thu Jun 18, 2009 11:04 pm

You're not taking into account pre-emptive measures.
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PostSubject: Re: RAWR (Pending)   Thu Jun 18, 2009 11:07 pm

Well I still have doubts.

If you can block the tech by a barrier then this jutsu can be quite OP'ed

I'll ask for another staff members comment.
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PostSubject: Re: RAWR (Pending)   Thu Jun 18, 2009 11:08 pm

mmkay ^_^ check my other jutsu
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PostSubject: Re: RAWR (Pending)   Sat Jun 20, 2009 10:04 pm

I edited a little. check er out.
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