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PostSubject: The End [DM](P)   Mon Jun 08, 2009 10:27 am

Kuro suddenly woke up because of a sound. He was camping in the forest in Moon Country though he couldn't really remember why was he here. He though for few minutes. He remembers that he got a note from somebody to come at the Moon Country, that it was a matter of life and death. Kuro didn't know if he should believe the note or not but he eventually went. Being a jounin he easily went outside the village and went straight towards the moon country. He was raveling for several days alone and every day he felt that something terrible will happen.
He went outside the tent and looked around to see what or who made that nose. It was dark so he couldn't see anything but he could feel that somebody is watching him. Maybe it was just paranoia but the feeling that something terrible will happen grew even stronger. He stayed quiet for few minutes trying to look around. After few minutes he became less tense and went towards the river to refresh a bit. He took some cold water in his hands and washed his face to relax. He sat and watched the stars and waited for the day.
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PostSubject: Re: The End [DM](P)   Tue Jun 09, 2009 2:40 am

Near had been laying in wait beneath the water, invisibly. He seperated the water from his body, so their was a thin layer of air between him and the water, as well as a small cylinder that allowed him to breathe. Nearr completely concealed his chakra presence, to the point that even someone as adept as him in chakra control would not be able to notice him.
As he felt the target approach, Near slowly released some nitric acid crystals into the water around him. he kept this near him, until he felt the target go to sit down. When the target did so, Near sent a sudden, inescapable wave of Nitric acid at the opponent. It would have been quite horrifying to watch, had the target known what it was. However, because nitric acid wouldn't change the color of the water without an indicator present, it would seam as if it was a simple sudden tidal wave. Which would raise alarm, but would hopefully surprise the opponent enough that they would not be able to defend or rather escape. The nitric acid that flew at the opponent was about 18 molar, and would burn through them in an instant. And even if they dodged, with Near's mastery of water, he could fling it at them again for a second surprise attack.

Not too far away, a member of the akatsuki, Lark, also waited. Near had been sensing their malicious intent for quite some time. It was time to put an end to them as well. But for now, this jounin alone would suffice. Near had plenty of time on the trip back to kill Lark.

But then, things had been strange in the akatsuki lately. Many members had been dying, left and right. Perhaps. Perhaps it was not the time for the akatsuki. Perhaps the world needed another kind of guidance for now.

Near shook the thoughts from his head. Now wasn't the time to be thinking them. He had a job to do, and he would complete it.
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PostSubject: Re: The End [DM](P)   Tue Jun 09, 2009 2:54 am

While relaxing Kuro wasn't really paying attention on the surrounding. He was thinking of the note that somebody sent him. He looked at it one more time but he couldn't see any signature or anything that would reveal who wrote this note. He placed the note back to his pocket when suddenly a wave of water attacked him. He rapidly jumped back avoiding the wave. On a close look he saw that the grass that was touched by that water looked like it burned. "What is this?" He looked around but he couldn't see anybody around. But his senses weren't wrong. He was being watched but from where. But there was not time to look for the stalker because the weird water made another attack immediately after the first one. Since Kuro was looking at the water all the time he dodged it quiet easily but a peace of his cloth got burned. He jumped few meters away from the river and went in the forest. "Where is he hiding?" Seeing that he was attacked by some water jutsu the opponent must be a water user and probably he is somewhere near it but he couldn't see it. He looked straight at the water and waited to see what will happen.
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PostSubject: Re: The End [DM](P)   Tue Jun 09, 2009 3:14 am

Near cursed silently. Of course he would dodge it. Well, it was time to use quite a bit more chakra. Near used his adeptedy with the water element to form a water clone out of the river. This clone appeared about 50 feet down the river. The clone silently rose from the water, ready to attack. Near himself manipulated the acid without handseals or moving. The acid began to spin around the target like a vortex, before crushing down on the opponent.

Near's clone meanwhile was making handseals from afar. On the final handseal, snake, 4 walls arose around the ninja, eventually capped by a rock top. The clone left a small hole, however. Near move his hand, and water filled the structure completely. Near jumped from the river and pressed his hand against the hole. A steady stream of crystallized bezoyl chloride went into the water, becoming saturated. The water inside the structure was still acidic, but it would burn very slowly now. The benzoyl chloride increased water's conductivity.

Near drew a roll of tags from his pocket, each one had the kanji for lightning on it. He stuff the hole with the tags, and jumped several feet away, on the other side of the river.
Near made a handseal, activating the tags. The extremely conductive benzoyl chloride was suddenly shocked with hundreds of thousands of volts of electricity.
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PostSubject: Re: The End [DM](P)   Tue Jun 09, 2009 8:18 pm

Nothing was happening and the opponent hasn't show himself. Kuro was now extremely cautious and he will notice every possible movement. After few seconds the water raised again and it started to spin around Kuro like a vortex. Only one thing could save him from that. Kuro concentrated a large amount of wind chakra in his foot, so large that a strong wind, like a hurricane was coming from his foot. After that he stomped with his foot on the ground making a large wind shield and stopping the vortex for now.

But it seems the trouble didn't end here. As soon Kurio defended himself from the water he was immediately trapped in a rock barrier. There was a small hole in it and thats where he will aim. He again concentrated wind chakra but this time in his hands but than suddenly the strange water filled the structure. it was burning like hell and Kuro had his eyes closed. He could feel his skin burning and he had to act fast. He used both of his hands to release a destructive force towards one of the walls. The force was strong enough to make a huge hole and the whole water went away and Kuro managed to get out. He slowly opened his eyes but they were burning so he rushed towards the river and washed himself even knowing that the user was certainly a water user. The burns stopped and he rapidly jumped out of the water. Some parts of his skin were burned and his left eye was extremely damaged to that point that he could barely see with it.
In distance he could see a person. Was he the attacker? He didn't know but he was prepared even if he was in really bad condition.

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Name: Zagun (The Force)

Rank: B

Type: Taijutsu

Element: Wind

Description:
This jutsu doesn't do any damage to the opponent but it stops almost any attack except A and S rank jutsus. The user concentrates a large quantity of wind chakra in his feet. When the user is ready he stomps his feet on the ground with full force and makes a wind shield that grows. It extends about 4 meters of the user and than it fades. Anything that was coming on the user will be pushed back or deflected. If the opponent is caught in this defensive move the only damage he will take if he is launched in a tree, a rock or anything solid. But this shield doesn’t defend from attacks that are above the user. It’s more like a larger wind wall without roof. So any attack that is coming from above it won’t be deflected. The height of the shield is 4 meters as well.


ame: Ehou (Drawing Cannon)
Rank: A
Type: Taijutsu
Element: Wind
Description:
This taijutsu is similar to Ete but it doesn't use speed but strength. The power of these punches are like being hit by a cannon ball. 3 punches are enough to knock out anybody. The range is also 8 meters but this time the wind element is used. The speed of these punches are a bit slower but it can't be used like 10 punches in few seconds. After a punch the user must wait 5 seconds to use it again. When the user hits the earth with this taijutsu it will leave a bigger crack. The wind chakra that is sent is big as a normal human so a punch covers the whole body.
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PostSubject: Re: The End [DM](P)   Tue Jun 09, 2009 9:42 pm

Toshiro stood,far away from both Jounin and the Akatsuki Leader. By this time he thought that his supervision was rather weak. He thought that the leader couldn't do a good job. He thought about killing him, although he felt this might also be the end for him. His life was rather foolish with this organization of his. Toshiro was giving him another chance of life. And kill him with ease. Toshiro wanted to make him suffer,with his genjutsu make him feel the pain that he felt when he was younger.

Standing in top of a small mountain,a few meters away from Near and the Jounin. Toshiro began to form handsigns as he quickly body fickered around the area of the two fighters. Toshiro stood by both the intruder and Near the Akatsuki Leader. Nor Near or the other guy knew why was here. It could be told and noticed by the face of the man standing.The face of confusement of the man hurted was rather dumb. He looked like he couldn't even put on a good fight to the Akatsuki Leader. "Why fight when you can't beat him." Toshiro said as he quickly began to perfomr handsigns.

Toshiro quickly ran with speed,inmense speed at that. He grabbed into the man's hand and and took a kunai and tried to stab the man in the arm then he whispered. "Welcome to my world." He said as he activated his deadly genjutsu. By this time the jutsu will go in effect and no matter what he does he'll be dead. There's no use of genjutsu,he will be trapped and killed instantly. A whole cloud of smoke should be coming out of him by now.

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PostSubject: Re: The End [DM](P)   Tue Jun 09, 2009 11:45 pm

Kuro was breathing heavily and he tried to regain some stamina but the opponent didn't give him time to rest. The opponent suddenly appeared in front of Kuro. The opponent tried to grab his arm but since Kuro was already prepared for any attack he managed to avoid him. Kuro still had his Ehou activated and without any thinking he sent a powerful force towards the opponent. Being really close the attack would be almost impossible to avoid and the damage would be even bigger. Kuro jumped back and fell on the ground. He took one more glance on the structure and on his surprise there was one more opponent. "What is this! There are two of them? How am I gonna get out of this?" Kuro had no strength to run away, so the only thing he could do is resist somehow. The only problem was that he is against two enemies and by their cloth they are from Akatsuki "Just great...." Kuro sighed and stud up barely standing on his feet. The acid made a huge damage itself, anything stronger would definitely defeat him and than they will probably kill him. He looked to the other one he used the Ehou to see if he is still on his feet. There was a big cloud of dust because of the impact and he couldn't see if the impact was successful.

(Writer block >.<)
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PostSubject: Re: The End [DM](P)   Wed Jun 10, 2009 1:48 am

Near's water clone body flickered with a handseal, appearing behind toshiro. It had a katana in it's hand, and attempted a stab to toshiro's back. Something surely unexpected. The clone held out it's hand, facing toshiro's back area, and another sword flew out, aimed at toshiro's head.
Thank you Release Burst.

At the same time the clone body flickered, so did Near. But this time, he appeared behind the jounin, a large katana in his hand. He attempted a stab to the back of the opponent with his left hand.
With his free hand, he summoned some of the acid, and it rushed over silently, aimed at the place where a wound might be.
No matter what happened today, This Jounin would die. And so too...
Would toshiro.

What happened latter? Well, who's to know? Perhaps Near would simply commit suicide. Though, if he did that a simple suicide really wouldn't work.
Oh all the explosions he could make. Perhaps he could take a large chunk of konoha or Kiri with him.

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PostSubject: Re: The End [DM](P)   Wed Jun 10, 2009 2:04 am

(Meh I will die now lol so I will make a short post >.<)

The opponent on the structure suddenly flickered behind the other opponent "Why is an Akatsuki attacking his comrade?" Than suddenly he felt like he was touched by that acid again and he felt a bi pain but nothing could be compared to the pain he will experience. He suddenly felt like something pierced his body. He looked down and a katana was sticking out of his body. He touched it and he realised he was stabbed from behind, but when? Can it be? The opponent behind the other akatsuki member was a clone and the one behind him was the real ninja. A lot of blood was coming out and soon enough Kuro fainted because of the big loss of blood and than he died.
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PostSubject: Re: The End [DM](P)   Thu Jun 11, 2009 12:12 am

Toshiro walked and looked back at the man. Something happened as he looked at him he was already draining,his blood was surely running low and basically he was kind of dead by now. Toshiro Looked to the right as he felt something pointing his back. Toshiro looked and took a peak. It looked like Near was behind him although the clone only thrusted his katan slowly. As if it didn't wanted to kill Toshiro. Toshiro smirked as he turned and face Near face to face. "You are soft." Toshiro said as he quickly pushed himself front wards to the blade.He literally stabbed himself on the katana. The katana fully crossed his body from the front to the back of his body. A chunck of blood fell out of Toshiro's mouth. The blood splattered all over Nears robe.Suddenly a force of energy shot of the katana. Making a hollow spot between Toshiro's stomach and the katana.
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PostSubject: Re: The End [DM](P)   Thu Jun 11, 2009 5:09 am

((OOC: I'm assuming you're dead now notorious, but I cannot be sure.))
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PostSubject: Re: The End [DM](P)   Thu Jun 11, 2009 6:14 am

[[yeah,lol]]
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PostSubject: Re: The End [DM](P)   Thu Jun 11, 2009 7:36 am

Near's clone dissapeared. Near held out the katana in his arm, and it dissapeared in a puff of smoke. He walked over to his dead partner, and removed his Akatsuki ring. He held it up in the light, and it glinted, glowing red. Near threw it up in the air, and it too dissapeared in a puff of smoke. He placed several exploding tags on Toshiro's body. He began walking to the jounin's body, and he made a handseal. Toshiro's body exploded, violently.

He held out his hand, and a large scroll appeared. He rolled the scroll out on the ground. He then picked up the Jounin's body and placed it on the scroll. With a handseal, he placed his hand on the ground. The jounin's body disapeared, and a long complex symbol appeared on the scroll. He picked up the scroll, and put it on a string on his back. He then took off running, in the direction of the Konoha border.

Just out of reach of any surveilance, Near took the scroll off of his back. Then, holding out his hands, several objects appeared. One, a large metal contained, made for holding the scroll. Two, a large metal cannon-looking object. Three, a gigantic roll of exploding tags. Near set up the cannon, placing the roll of exploding tags in the combustion chamber. He grabbed a brush and some ink. On the scroll he wrote "Yukai Obon". Yukai means happy, and Obon is the celebration of deceased people in Japan. This would be extremely rude to put this on the scroll.

After doing so, Near put the scroll in the metal container, and sealed it. He put the container in the canon. He then went through a proccess of adjusting the canon's trajectory so the scroll would land directly inside the main gate of konoha. how wonderful this would be. Near made a handseal, and the canon violently exploded, the small cylinder inside soaring through the air delicately. Have fun with that, Konoha.

Near put his hand on the canon, and it dissapeared. He then began running in the direction of the akatsuki base, questioning life.
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